Okay, this is gonna be hard to write. I have to make in duel monsters in a whole 'nother way. Wish me luck!

About the review thing, I guess I'm just gonna do this when this gets more popular and more people read it.

Please review! (I think I'm gonna start saying that in bold at the start of all of mine) Please review the story, I like hearing praise about my work and I also like getting constructive critism to make my work better (NOTE: Flaming is not constructive critism)! I may have said that i'm going to wait for 2-3 reviews per chapter when this gets popular, but if it doesn't get popular, i'm just going to forget it.So Please review!

Okay, more physical desription!

Duel Monsters 2 (Part I)

"Hello, Mr. Kaiba," the man said.

"What do you want?"

"To buy Duel Academy, of course."

"Well, I'm not going to just give it up for money. You're going to have to win it in a duel, like those other two creeps who wanted it."

"Fine, but we're playing my game, duel monsters 2!"

"Fine, but then you must give my students 5 tries to defeat you. Is that alright?"

"Of course it is." The man smiled. This will be easy…

"Attention, everyone," Chancellor Sheppard said over the intercom. "Here at Duel Academy, there is a certain guest, Mr. Jaku. He is here to duel you students in a game of duel monsters 2. If he wins five duels, then the academy is his. I wish you all luck. Anyone may challenge him, but he has the right to decline. However, he may challenge you, but that does not mean you must accept. Best of luck to you all."

"All right! I'll whoop this guy bad!" Jaden said, interrupting one of Dr. Crowler's boring lessons.

"Jaden!" Dr. Crowler roared. "That's a detention for interrupting the class! Besides, if anyone were to challenge Jaku, it should be an obelisk blue, most likely Zane."

"Yeah, no offense Jaden, but if anyone should duel for the school it should be our number one duelist." Alexis said.

"Are you saying that Zane is better than me?" Jaden asked.

"Well, umm…." Alexis hesitated. "Dr. Crowler, may I please go to the restroom? Thank you!" Alexis darted off without even waiting for Dr. Crowler to answer.

"I am too the best duelist here," Jaden mumbled under his breath. "I'll just duel this guy when Zane loses."

"Umm…. Dr. Crowler," Syrus said, raising his hand. "Technically isn't Masato the best duelist in the school because he defeated Zane?"

"Of course not!" Dr. Crowler said quickly. "Just because someone defeats someone else in a duel doesn't mean that they're better than them. Besides, it wasn't even an official duel, so it doesn't count!"

After Class…

Alexis, Jaden, Kaito, Masato, Syrus, Bastion, and Chazz were talking in the hall. "I heard this guy has already defeated Zane, and some other guy." Alexis said.

"Well, there is one way to find out. Here comes Zane now." Bastion said, pointing.

"Bro, is it true you lost to Jaku?" Syrus asked.

"Yes, me and another obelisk. He dueled him first so I could get an understanding of how duel monsters 2 worked, but I still couldn't beat him."

"Well then, how does it work?" Kaito inquired.

Zane thought for a moment, then began, "Duel monsters revolves around set abilities and statistics. Duel monsters and duel monsters 2 use the same cards, but almost every card has an effect in duel monsters 2, and that effect comes from the name and what the monster looks like, not what its actual effect is. Also, battle outcomes aren't decided by attack or defense points, but by what the monsters are. For instance, Jaden's sparkman could probably annihilate Bastion's water dragon because sparkman is a thunder monster while water dragon is just water. Not only that, but Jaku has also created duel monsters 2, so he knows what just about every card does."

"Well then, it looks like its up to me!" Jaden exclaimed as he ran down the hall.

"Jaden, wait!" Everyone else called.

In a matter of minutes everyone was at the dueling arena. They saw an obelisk student on her knees, opposing Jaku. "Okay, that's three duels down! Who's next?" Jaku was wearing red and green glasses. He also wore a yellow and blue jacket, with a white shirt and a black tie, shoes, and pants underneith the jacket (trying to go for more crazy, if anything). He had wild black hair and two crazy, blue eyes (see, crazy!)

"Oh! Me! Pick me! Please pick me! Me! Me! ME!" (Guess who said that.)

"Fine, you can lose to me. Get on up here."

Jaden climbed up onto the stage and got his duel disk ready. Kaito slinked away from the crowd. If anyone is going to beat this guy, it's going to be me. I know I have the cards to beat this guy; I just need to make a deck especially for duel monsters 2.

Kaito went to his dorm, and took out a huge binder with hundreds of cards in them. He looked through it, but couldn't really find any set of monsters that would probably do well in duel monsters 2. Just as he gave up hope and was about to put the binder back on his shelf, a spell card fell out. He picked it up, and when he saw it, Kaito smiled. He now knew what his deck would be. He took out the binder again and began to look for more cards…

Meanwhile…

"All right, now it is time to win this duel!" Jaku declared.

"With my flame wingman out, that might be pretty hard," Jaden said.

"We'll see, we'll see. First, I'll summon Water Omotics. When she's summoned, I can summon a Water Dragon from my hand!" Jaku said as a giant serpent made entirely out of water rose from a jar, held by a woman with black eyes, purple hair, and blue clothes. "Now, my Water Dragon will destroy your flame wingman, and my water omotics will destroy the rest of your lifepoints!"

Jaden fell to the ground as the holograms faded. "Last duel! Who else is going to duel me!" Jaku asked.

Nobody replied. Finally, someone said "I will." Every turned to see Kaito, duel disk in hand ready to duel. Kaito jumped onto the stage and loaded his deck. "Let's duel!" he roared.

Jaku: 4000; Kaito: 4000

"Since I'm the challenger, I'll go first," Jaku said, drawing a sixth card. "I play a monster face-down, and end my turn."

"That's it?" Kaito asked.

"That's all you need sometimes in duel monsters 2." Zane murmured quietly to himself.

"What do you mean?" Alexis asked, who was standing right next to Zane.

"When I played Jaku, most of his monsters he played face-down, and most of them had effects which are the equivalent to flip effects in duel monsters. I was too ambitious, and I couldn't see that he wanted me to keep attacking his monsters. I just hope Kaito doesn't do the same, or it could cost us…"

"Well, I guess I'll go." Kaito said, drawing a card. "First I summon Gearfried the Iron Knight in attack mode! Now I attack your face-down monster!"

"You just destroyed my pinch hopper!" Jaku said. "Now I can summon an insect from my hand, and I can counterattack with it if I wish. I'll summon man-eater bug, and now destroy Gearfried!" The massive bug crawled towards Kaito's field and then ate Gearfried in one gulp.

"Hey! How is that possible! My Gearfried is much stronger than your bug!"

"But Gearfried is a human, and man-eater bug automatically destroys any humans it battles with."

"Fine, I play a face-down card and end my turn."

Jaku drew a card. "I summon Goblin attack force in attack mode! This is definitely going to do some damage to you," Jaku smirked. "I attack with both!"

"Activate trap: mirror wall!" Kaito yelled, as a huge mirror rose up before Kaito. The mean-eater bug and goblins drew near the mirror, and when they hit their reflections, were destroyed.

"Hmm… I'll just end my turn," Jaku sighed.

"Good," Kaito said as he drew a card. "I will not pay, so now mirror wall is destroyed." The huge mirror receded into the ground. "I activate toon world! Then I'll summon a toon mermaid from my hand, which I'll tribute to summon toon summoned skull!" A toon-form of summoned skull came out of the toon world book. "Now I pay 500 lifepoints to attack; attack with toon thunder!" The summoned skull raised its hands, and lightning came down and struck Jaku, cartoon style. "I end my turn."

Jaku: 1500; Kaito: 3500

Jaku drew a card and said, "I pay 800 lifepoints to activate premature burial to summon back man-eater bug, but I'll tribute him to summon a monster in face-down defense. I play a face-down magic/trap and end my turn!"

Jaku: 700; Kaito: 3500

"I really can't believe you beat everyone else," Kaito said after drawing a card. "You have less than 1000 lifepoints, but I have only lost 500 lifepoints, and that was just to attack! Now I'll attack your directly with my summoned skull!"

Jaku: 700; Kaito: 3000

"What? You can't do that! Toon monsters don't have that power in duel monsters 2!" Jaku cried.

"Well, this one does. It's a thunder attack, remember?" Kaito said.

"Well, maybe this will shed some light on my strategy; I activate the trap desert sunlight! This will reveal my face-down monster, labyrinth wall!" A beam of light shone upon Jaku's face-down monster, showing it was labyrinth wall. Then a giant maze slowly began to rise out of the ground.

"Your maze can't protect you from thunder!" Kaito yelled.

"Oh yes it can." Jaku simply replied as the thunder quickly drew near his head. As soon as it was about to strike it diverged into four different parts and stuck the ground. "You see, as long as my labyrinth wall is on the field, all aerial attacks are negated, and now you lose 500 lifepoints because that is the difference between your monster's attack and my monster's defense." The maze had risen enoughto completely block Jaku from Kaito's sight.

Jaku: 700; Kaito: 2500

"Fine, I end my turn." Kaito said. This is just great. Even if I get rid of this wall, my normal toon monsters can't attack him directly. And who knows what else this maze can do.

Jaku drew a card. "Excellent. I don't want to do this, but I must make a sacrifice. I activate tremendous fire. This does 1000 points of damage to you, and 500 points of damage to me.

Jaku: 200; Kaito: 1500

"I now shall enter the maze, so your monsters will need to find me to attack me. You can enter the maze too, if you dare." Kaito didn't know if this would protect him or destroy him, but he slowly entered the maze. "Just so you know, your summoned skull can't enter, it's too big. Now I activate magical labyrinth!" Kaito quicklyturned around adn rantoward theexit ofthe maze; he did not want to be in it without reinforcement. All the walls started shifting, and the exit closed right before he reached it. "This also allows me to summon a wall shadow. He is almost impossible to detect and defeat, and one good attack from him will destroy you. Also, all your toon monsters are useless, because they are attached to toon world and toon world is outside. Sorry, no luck, kid. I'll just end my turn now."

Kaito drew a card. "Hey," Jaku said. "Did you know that in this labyrinth, my monsters can attack during your turn? So wall shadow, strike! This duel is over!"

Kaito turned around and saw a shadow ghoul launch itself from the wall, heading straight for Kaito. Oh no, Kaito quickly thought. I don't have any defenses. If I summon a monster, itmight not be summoned fast enough the defend me. I lost…

To be continued…

How will Kaito get out of this? In ur reviews, why don't u ppl give me some ideas? I already know a way he can get out of it, but if i like urs, I might use urs instead! SO REVIEW!

Anyway, chapter 5 will start the plot a little, and then chapter 6 is where it really gets going.