Um...hi! I'm back, and I have to say, I'm really happy that people have been reviewing. Its really great to hear from everyone (especially you, ma petite!).
This was originally a lot more explicit, though God knows why (I had been reading Nora Roberts and then was scribbling around on my notebook paper) and I wasn't going to put it up, but then I shrugged and made it kiddy proof. I honestly wasn't too proud of the more explicit version, so its okay that I changed it.
(AGH THE ANGST IS TAKING OVER MY MIND)
He was everything. He was like buses rushing away too fast, like unspoken words spilling from tired lips. He was like the softest kiss that you never received but wished for. He was like three words you could have said, would have said, should have said.
He was like the ocean between them. Strong, clear, and too much to handle, but leaving you longing for more. A golden autumn leaf stubbornly to a lone tree in a play-ground next to the swing sets where memories are buried in a sand box at the foot of a giant penguin.
Her eyes smiled up at the ceiling as a translucent tear slid down her cheek. A teddy bear nestled against her side, its never closing eyes weeping with her.
Word Count: 127
Date: June 20, 2006
Time: 3:33 PM