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Disclaimer: I do not own Avatar: The Last Airbender…Nickelodeon does…and if I did own it…Zuko and Katara would be together faster then you could say ZUTARA!
Recap.
But soon, the koi fish he was on goes down and he realizes that he is in trouble. The fish flung him off into the water. A giant black fin starts rushing towards him from behind. Screaming, he runs the whole way back on top of the water slamming into Zuko in the process.
Aang starts to put his clothes on and the group gets ready to leave when…
Many warriors surround them. Zula holds up her fathers boomerang while Zuko gets into his firebending stance. Aang stand in front of the siblings ready to attack. The warriors were very agile and trained well. Our hero's didn't have the chance to even strike when they were blindfolded and gagged, being dragged away to unknown place.
They arrive at a village not to far off from the place where they were ambushed. Zula held her head, trying to remember what had happened. Slowly Aang and Zuko woke up thinking it was all just a dream.
Zula finally takes the piece of cloth off of her eyes to see a group of warrior girls standing in front of her.
"I demand to speak with the men and the leader who captured us!" She shouted not noticing the stares she was getting from girls.
"What men?" A girl said from the group walking up to the trio.
Zula all of a sudden realized her mistake. There were no men…it was these girls.
"Wait a second; what do u mean there are no men, I mean who else could have attacked it us. It couldn't have been YOU girls. C'mon girls are sissy's they're not supposed to fight. All they do is cook, sew, and keep us men company." Zuko's sexist comment may have cost him something.
"You know girls; I think the Unagi will eat very well tonight" The leader of the group once again speaking up.
Zuko looked scared all of a sudden and ran behind Aang for protection (I know Zuko's OOC but just work with me..ok?) whimpering in fear.
"I'm sorry for my brother's stupid sexist remark," Zula looked over at her brother with her teeth clenched.
"Don't feel sorry for me sweetie, you have to live with him," laughing at the angry faces Zuko was making. "By the way, my name is Suki."
"My name's Zula and this is my brother Zuko and the one in front of him is Aang."
"I'm so sorry that we caused so much trouble, it's just that…well… I wanted to ride the elephant koi." Aang told her sheepishly
"He lies," a distant voice from the crowd could be heard. Many other voices started to speak up: "How can we be sure they're not from the Water Nation," "Ya they might be spies" Kyoshi stayed out of the war for this long, we don't need to be brought in."
Aang smiles, hearing the name Kyoshi, "I used to know Kyoshi" He told them.
A man in a blue coat with whit fur hanging over his shoulders appeared to them, " Avatar Kyoshi was born here over 400 years ago and has been dead for centuries, how could you have known her?"
"Ha ha, easy, I'm the Avatar"
Suki and the man still have doubts for this young boy, "Throw them to the unagi!" They warriors started coming after Aang and they almost had a hold of him when he used his airbending to get out of their clutches. Everyone becomes too excited as they see that Aang really is the Avatar. Word soon spreads that the Avatar is on Kyoshi Island.
"Did you hear that the Avatar has arrived on Kyoshi Island!" an excited little girl explains to a local fisherman. The fisherman quickly drops his fish in shock but picks it up again. The fish travels from Nation to Nation, the news of the Avatar spreading with it. Soon the fish land on a plate in front of Katara.
"What?" She yells to the servant who had just given her dinner. She quickly walks away. 'I will not let the Avatar escape this time.'
In honor of the Avatar's return, the people of Kyoshi began cleaning up the place. The statue of Kyoshi, being old and worn out, was being repainted and cleaned up. Appa was getting a grooming. What more could they possibly want?
Breakfast is set out for the three kids. Aang just keeps eating like a vacuum, Zula just keeps looking at the food to make sure nothing's wrong with it, and Zuko wasn't even eating.
'How could I have been captured by a bunch of girls?' he asks himself in disgust. He looks at his food once again but this time takes an armful of the desserts and walks away.
"What is Zuko so angry about, it's great here; I mean we're getting the royal treatment!" Aang stuffed one more dessert into his mouth.
"Now Aang, don't get comfortable here, you know it's too dangerous to stay in one place for too long." Zula gave Aang some thoughtful words.
"But Zula, the people adore me here, we have to stay for just a little while!" He pleaded giving her the famous puppy dog eyes.
"O ok, fine, but make sure none of this gets to your head, alright?" She told him
"Don't worry, I promise to keep myself in check."
" O Aangy poo!" He heard a little girl calling his name with a bunch of other admirers surrounding her.
"Sorry Zula, got to run!" He said with a little smirk leaving Zula alone. "I'll give her one day to crack before she becomes jealous and comes to me."
"I'll give that boy one day before he cracks and runs back to me" She thought as she walked into the market.
Concentrate. Step left, cross over. Punch. Step right, squat. Kick. Breath in...
"Sorry to interrupt your dance lesson ladies, I was just looking for a place to get a good work-out." Zuko said while walking into the Kyoshi warriors training session.
"And I am sorry to young warrior, I had no idea that you were a friend of the Avatar's" The girl named Suki replied.
"Yup, yup, Aang and me, we go way back let me tell you, while we were in my village I was teaching him the basics of fighting" Zuko said while trying to do a kick but failed miserably and fell to the floor.
"O really, you were a fighter? Then let's see some of your moves."
"AM, I am a fighter, and sure I'll fight you, I mean c'mon, you're just a bunch of girls"
Zuko makes the first move by punching a stream of fire at the warrior girl while she uses her fan to dodge it.
"So you're a firebender, should've known, I mean, you have a really bad temper" Suki said knowing this would make the young firebender crack.
"I do not have a TEMPER" Zuko shouted, but before he could punch her she took his hands and swiftly tied them to his legs.
"You were saying?" Suki said
"…… eh, shut up!" Zuko said while trying to hop on his stomach back to the village grounds.
Aang had finally escaped from the clutches of the girls and was walking back to where Zula was. "She's probably flowing with jealousy by no, she'll run right into my arms and hold me and kiss me and... not gonna go there" Aang thought as he realized that he wanted Zula…a lot!.
"Hey Aang, would you help me carry all this stuff back into the room?" Zula asked without even looking at him once.
"O sorry I can't, I promised the GIRLS that I'd let them ride on Appa for a while…wanna come?"
"Not really, I don't think watching you show off to a bunch of girls is fun." She replies trying to keep her cool. "Aang, we really shouldn't stay her that much longer, Katara might come here any minute!"
"Not yet Zula, I haven't had this much fun in so long" He says when he hears someone calling his name.
"O Aangie, you promised us that you would take us on a ride on that big fluffy thing" One of the girls pouted.
"One second Koko!" He yelled back.
"Aang, I thought I told you not to let all that Avatar stuff go to your head!" Zula finally starts to lose herself.
"It didn't go to my head and it wont! Your probably just jealous since we're having so much fun without YOU!" Aang started yelling
"Why would I be jealous if I've been hanging around with Hiro all day." She said while pointing to a teenage boy who was waving at her.
"C'mon Aangie poo, ditch her, she doesn't appreciate you like I do!" The same girl from earlier yelled.
"I'm coming Koko, and do you know what, I want you to be my girlfriend!" Aang yelled to Koko.
"YAYYY! I've been waiting for this day forever!" Koko said while running and jumping into his arms.
"The nerve of that boy, thinking that I'm jealous of him, well he's got another thing coming!" "O Hiro! How would you like to help me carry some stuff back to the room?" Zula said in her most seductive voice.
Zuko once again goes back to the warriors hut.
"I'll show those girls, I'm a man!" He said walking proudly into the room.
Right as he entered the room all eyes turned on him, watching him with every step he took towards Suki.
"So why did you come back, I thought that you would be to embarrassed to come back here after a girl defeated you." Suki said to Zuko
"I would be honored if you would teach me in the basics of fighting." Zuko said while bowing to the girl. "And I'm sorry for what I said earlier."
"We usually don't allow outsiders to train with us, let alone a boy…"
"Please, please, please, couldn't you make and exception this time!" Zuko whined to the female.
"Alright, but if you want toy train with us, you have to follow all of our traditions, and I mean all of them." Suki said to him
A couple of minutes later…"Awww man, c'mon, you cant expect me to wear this?" Zuko said looking at himself.
"You said you would follow all our traditions" She said nonchalantly.
"But I feel so girly!"
"You should feel proud wearing that uniform, the silk thread symbolizes the brave blood that flows through our veins. The gold insignia represents the honor of the warrior's heart" Suki told him, explaining the uniform.
"OK fin…" Zuko said before he was interrupted.
"Hey Zuko, nice dress!" Aang says as he walks by.
"Grrrrr…"
Back in the room, Zula and Hiro were talking about things making each other laugh when Aang comes barging into the room.
"What do you want Aang, I thought you would be spending time with your new girlfriend" Zula said while not even looking at his face.
"O nothing, I was just wondering if you want me to come with me and watch me ride the Unagi again?" Aang said, trying to show off to her.
"I told you once and I'll tell you again, I don't want to watch you show off to a bunch of girls, besides, Hiro and I were having an adult conversation, so could you leave" Zula said to him.
Aang leaves, knowing that he had lost his chances with her.
Zuko was still trying to master the complex moves the Suki was showing him.
"You know you can't master it all in one day." Suki tells him.
Wobbly, Zuko tries to act out the basic technique but ends up throwing his fan out the door and slamming into a tree.
"It isn't about strength Zuko; our technique is using our opponents force against them and waiting for an opening."
Stepping in, Zuko got a lucky shot, as he was able to push Suki down.
"You know I just fell on purpose to make you feel better?" Suki replies trying to cover up from the fall as Zuko starts laughing.
"Aww c'mon, you have to admit that I got you there" Zuko points at her smirking.
"Fine I admit, it was a lucky shot…but can you do it again?"
As Aang wades around in the water waiting for the unagi to come, Koko and the other girls start getting fed up of waiting.
"Sorry Aang, but we're getting bored and we have other things better than this to do." Koko tells him acting liker her normal bratty self.
"But Koko, you're my girlfriend!"
"Sorry Aang, I just can't have the pressure on me that you're the Avatar." She says trying to make up a lame excuse for him, leaving Aang alone in the water. However, as the girls step away, Zula steps up to shore, looking out at Aang.
"Zula, I'm so sorry for letting everything go to my head, and acting like a jerk" Aang yells from the water.
Swimming back to shore, the unagi suddenly shows up out of nowhere and Aang ends up on his back. Holding onto one of the unagi's whiskers for dear life as he gets tossed to and fro. Aang finally gets tossed off the Unagi landing on the water, looking unconscious.
"Aang!" Zula yells running to scoop Aang into her arms just as the unagi come charging right in front of them.
Zula throws a knife at the monster making it squeal in pain. But just as the unagi swims away, Katara's ship sails in. Once on shore Katara and her men start searching the area with their rhinos.
"Nothing here men, lets go to the village, the Avatar can't hide from us forever." Katara yells out to her soldiers.
Zula had Aang and herself behind a rock hiding from the soldiers. Once they left she looks Aang, seeing that he still is unconscious.
"I hope this really works." Zula said to herself while putting her lips on top of the Avatar, breathing into him, giving him breath.
The Avatar slowing starts fluttering opening his eyes to see Zula on top of him with her lips on his. He becomes too shocked to say anything and starts to cough. Zula quickly removes her lips from his trying to hide her blush from him.
"I have one piece of advice for you Zula." The young airbender tells her.
"What's that Aang?"
"Don't try to ride the unagi…it's not fun"
Zuko and Suki had been training for a while now and he had gotten better with her help. He was able to block a move from her fan. The two smile at each other but they hear screams from outside.
"Waterbenders have arrived on the shore," An old man yells at them and they soon leave the hut.
The residents of Kyoshi Island hide in their houses to hide from the waterbenders and their exiled princess.
"Where is the Avatar, I demand him to show himself!" Katara yells at the people of the Island. "Search the whole Island men and find him; he can't hide forever."
But as the other rhinos are making their way up the hill, Zuko, Suki, and the other warriors jump out of nowhere and attack, surprising everybody.
"There is no way in hell that you're gonna capture the Avatar" Suki charges at Katara and is able to dodge her waterbending but then is slammed into the ground as Katara's rhino slams his tail into her abdomen.
"You little bitch, you deserve to die" Katara gets ready to surround Suki's head with water so that she couldn't breathe but Zuko jumps in at just the right moment, slamming Katara off her rhino.
"Why you insolent little…" Katara couldn't continue her sentence as she gazed into her enemies golden eyes. "I have to get over this, I can't always just stand here in front of him, but I know him from somewhere; but where?"
Zuko was also trapped into those beautiful blue ocean eyes. "How could someone so beautiful be so consumed with evil, but wait a minute, I remember those eyes, I've met her before..."
But before Zuko could finish his thought Katara threw a water stream at the boy knocking him into a house. Becoming so enraged she starts turning he water into icicles and aiming at any person in sight.
"So Katara, are you looking for me?"
Katara turned around to see the little 12-year old boy standing in the center of the town.
"Yes Avatar, now let's begin" She yelled as she threw a water whip at him knocking his staff out of his hands. Aang retreats back and picks up the fans the girls were using earlier and uses it on the princess. Katara is thrown through the air and smashes into a pole.
Aang gets his staff back but then throws it up and flies over the village, frowning at all the destruction he had caused- some huts and the Avatar Kyoshi statue was broken into half, while other huts were damaged or completely destroyed.
"O Zula, it's all my fault, the villagers got their town destroyed just because they were trying to protect me."
"Maybe we should leave then; it would be wrong for us to run, but since Katara constantly follows you, he will probably leave Kyoshi once we leave." Katara said encouraging him
"I'll go call Appa," Aang said sadly.
The other warriors were still having a little trouble with the Water Nation soldiers that were accompanying Katara. Zuko and Suki are hiding out behind a hut.
"I'm sorry for the way I was acting towards you and the other warriors." Zuko said to the girl.
"Zuko, I'm a warrior" Suki said leaning towards Zuko kissing him on the cheek, "But I'm a girl too."
Zuko blushes as Suki backs off, " You have to get out of here." She runs off in another direction as Zuko walks over and climbs onto Appa's back.
"C'mon men, everyone back onto the ship, we can't lose sight of them again!" Katara yelled angrily at her crew.
"You know what Aang, you did the right thing. If we stayed there miss snotty princess would have destroyed everything." Zula told Aang comforting him.
Not satisfied, Aang suddenly stands and leaps off of Appa's back, diving back down into the water. He comes out on top of the unagi again, and stands on its head taking out his staff out and opening it. He shot a massive amount of air at the island drying everything that had become wet. It also made Katara and her men's hair puff up in all directions.
Aang jumps from the unagi as Appa flies by at the same time and catches Aang with his paws as they continue to fly off.
Climbing onto Appa's back, Aang sees the looks on Zula and Zuko's faces and knew he had some explaining to do.
"I know what I did was stupid and uncalled for and dangerous." Aang said while looking at his feet.
"That's very true," Zula said but nevertheless hugged him anyway, "I'm proud of you.
Aang gasps from surprise but hugs her back while smiling.
YES! I finally finished this chapter, eh I still think it sucks but I reallycan't think of any original ideas yet. When I write the waterbending scroll, I'll probably take the story into my own hands.
I'm sorry this took me so long, I've been studying for finals and school has been killing me. So this chapter was a bitch to write, 10 pages long. My hands hurt. So tell me what you think! Please review and if you have any ideas tell me! REVIEWS HELP ME AND ENCOURAGE ME! So please review! Thank you!
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