Okay, now these aren't designed to be able to just slot into the book. It willchange the future. But I don't have to write that so I don't care, J.K shoulda done it though! By the way, these aren't alweays going to be in numerical order. Also if there was something in the books that bugged you, then please, I'm open to suggestions! Just gimme the book, the thing that should be different, how it should have gone! (Page numbers would be great! Especially for the 4th, 5th and 6th. hehe

When Peter Got Away 3rd Book

What really annoyed me about Peter getting away is that it changed so much. He helped Voldemort rise, he technically killed Sirius (Think about it, if Sirius had been proved innocent he would'nt have died BECAUSE he wouldn't have been locked up with the EVAL house elf who sold him to voldie!), he deprived Harry of his God father (Which is really sad because he already took away his parents) etc etc. So I decided (because I was really pissed when I read the 3rd book) to rewrite it. By the way it was twice as bad because Peter didn't escaped once. Technically he escaped twice, 'cause the first time was when they were there the first time and then the was the second time when Harry and Hermione travelled back in time.

How it went:

They saw Lupin, Ron and Pettigrew clambering awkwardly out of the hole in the roots. then came Hermion... then the unconscious Snape, drifting weirdly upwards. Next came Harry and Black.

They all began walking to the castle.

Harry's heart was beating very fast. He glanced up at the sky. Any moment now, that cloud was going to move aside and show the moon...

"Harry," Hermione muttered, as though she knew exactly what he was thinking, "we've got to stay put. We mustn't be seen. There's nothing we can do..."

"So we're just going to let Pettigrew escape all over again..." said Harry quietly.

"How do you expect to find a rat in the dark?" snapped Hermione. "There nothing we can do! We came back to help Sirius. We're not supposed to be doing anything else!"

"All right!"

How it should've gone:

Harry watched anxiously,

"Hermione, we're going to come out soon. Pettigrew is going to escape-"

Hermione shook her head,

"I told you, we can't be seen! There's nothing we can do!"

"So we're just going to sit here and do nothing, as that man - that sold my parents to Voldemort and landed my god father in jail for twelve years when he was innocent - run free? Again!"

Hermione bit her lip,

"How are we supposed to find a rat in the dark?"

Harry thought for a moment,

"Maybe we don't have to...Hermione, I know this is probably a stupid question, but you know how Flitwick mentioned summoning charms?"

Hermione looked at him,

"Yea..."

"Well, did you (as usual) look up more information on them?"

Hermione blushed,

"Maybe..."

Harry waved his hand, urging her to make a connection. A few seconds later Hermione gasped, just as Peter grabbed Past Harry's wand. Peter began to shrink and-

Hermione ripped out her wand, causing Buckbeak to jump at the sudden movement,

"Accio animagus!"

Harry waited, not daring to break the silence. Hermione's shoulders drooped,

"I don't think it worked. I'm sorry Harry, I tried."

Harry hung his head,

"It's okay Hermione, I heard Flitwick say there weren't something you learned over night-"

Hermione held up her hand,

"What's that?"

"What's what?"

"That-" Out of no where a small thing came flying towards them, straight into Hermione's hand, it then began to wriggle madly in her hand, "Oh my god! Harry it worked!"

Harry looked closer at the wriggle handfull of fur,

"I don't believe it...Quick! Hermione wrap him in your jumper, or he'll bite you! We have to take this to Dumbledore..."