Here's the next chapter. I'll show you where Ed is. This one is a bit darker than the previous one, and there is very little humor beyond this point.
Oh yeah, I need a good title for this story. The current title "Chibi-napped" just doesn't sound right. Anyone who can come up with something that I think is better, will have the honor (or dishonor) of having named this story.
Disclaimer: I don't own Full-Metal Alchemist, and I never will… sob…
FMA quote of the chapter: "What man wouldn't be sallow if he finds a muscle-mustache man at his meeting place with a woman?"-Roy (Manga)
"Chibi-napped"
By: HomunculusGreedLing
Chapter 2: Ed. (Yup, that's the title)
Ed felt like he'd been ripped in two. He moved around and tried to get up.
Then, he noticed something, his auto-mail was gone.
Quickly opening his eyes, he tried to move, but his right leg was tied to something. It was dark, and Ed tried to look at what was around him.
It took a while for his eyes to adjust, and he saw a figure in front of him, a sly grin on it's face. Ed recognized the face and tried to scramble away, but his leg was chained to the floor.
"No use trying to get away, you know," said the figure.
He was right, Ed couldn't move.
"What do you want?" sputtered Ed.
"Oh you know what I want, I can even take it right now if I want to," said the figure slyly.
The figure moved closer, Ed tried to move away, but to no avail.
The figure loomed over him. Ed squirmed around, desperately trying to find some way to get away.
"It's no use, you know," the figure bent down next to him, a large grin plastered on his face, "you can't get away."
"So, how does it feel to be totally at my mercy?" taunted the figure. Ed tried to move away again.
"You know, the fear in your eyes is so exciting, maybe I should just…" the figure pinned Ed to the ground with one hand, the other one reaching for Ed's neck.
Ed tried desperately to move, but with only one hand and leg, he was completely helpless.
The hand started to squeeze, Ed gasped for breath, he was about to faint, he hopelessly tried to struggle.
Suddenly, it all went black.
So there it is, please review. Even Flames are welcome. (Your flames can't hurt me, Mwahahahahahahahaha… oh well, you get the point)
Oh yeah, try to guess who 'the figure' was.
Next chapter, I'm going to have to raise the rating, so everyone out there who's thirsting for some blood, I'll have the next chapter up soon.
