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Chapter 2

Besaid Village

"AAAAAAAAAA" I screamed while I tried to sit up. Ok where am I now. Its all dark so where am I, I asked myself. What ever was on me it felt soft? Then I realized I was back in my bed. But how is that possible I had been knocked out on ground, the ground of the thunder plains. Well I lifted the blankets off my head and was amazed. "Wow", I said in a quiet voice. I was on the beach of Besaid island. The water was calm and the sun was just going down. It was beautiful. I just sat there for over twenty minutes just watching the sun go down. "Hey you", someone said from the other side of the beach. I turned and looked towards the west where that other person was coming from. That person was almost to my bed and then I realized it was Wakka. "Hey", I said as if I were tired. "I seen you earlier but I just left you to wake I didn't want you to hurt you more if you were hurt". "So where you come from?" Wakka said with a concern tone in his voice. I really didn't know what to tell him. Should I say I am from Earth or Canada, would he think I am nuts. "What's your name first," I ask like I didn't know even though I did. "The name is Wakka and yours," "I'm Daniel," I said with the most confidents I ever had. "So where do you come from Daniel," Wakka looking worried. "Wakka don't be stunned I will explain it all, ok," I said. I hope Wakka don't freak on me when I tell him. So I started talking with Wakka and saying that I was from Canada on a planet called Earth. I was right Wakka thought I was nuts.

"Aaa I see so Daniel you come from Canada on a planet called Earth. You sure it's not Sin's toxin that got to you or something?" "No maybe your right Wakka. I think I heard about some place called Canada on a planet called Earth" I said look a bit sad because Wakka looks like he doesn't believe me. After I said that I just thought for a moment and then tried to forget that I was from Canada. It hurt. It hurt a lot. "Come with my lets go back to Besaid village." Wakka insisted. Well I jumped completely out of the blankets and I scared myself. My clothes changed. But when did they change, ok I am scared. Did someone change me or am I just going crazy. I was in a pair of large dark blue rusty looking jeans. They were baggy and seemed huge for me, but the fit perfectly because of my belt. The belt was black leather and had skulls on it. The left sides of my jeans though were cut at the knee. My shirt was a darkish orange with the number 96 on it. It also looked a like it had a rusty colour in it too. I am so hot. I thought to myself. I was jealous of myself because I wish I look like that back at home.

Well I followed Wakka to Besaid village, well not quite Besaid village. Wakka stopped at a cliff and just under us was water. "A Wakka isn't there an easier route?" I asked him even though I knew there was another. "Nope, you can swim ya." Wakka said. Well I jumped first even though I knew there was another path way that leads to Besaid village.
Well I swam like crazy and by crazy I mean fast. It looked like Wakka had a little trouble running into fiends. So I crossed the lake and waited for him to catch up. "Wow you fast ya!" Wakka said while trying to catch his breath. "I know." I said happily as I put a smile on my face. I got up and followed Wakka. We only lasted a few minutes when a coyote looking fiend came up and attacked us. It knocked me off my feet. "Daniel watch out that's a Canis Major ya." "I know I know," I said angrily. Wakka out of nowhere had is blitzball weapon. I didn't notice it when I hopped out of bed but something felt heavy on my back. "Daniel use your sword!" Wakka said with excitement. I pulled my sword out which was in my shirt in the back with the hilt sticking out. "OUCH" I screamed as I fell to the ground, mean while Wakka kept hitting the Canis Major so it would stay away. "What's wrong?" Wakka asked. "I feel like I cut myself." I screamed in pain. It was only seconds late I got up and I didn't feel any pain it's like it healed itself. Well Wakka since he has just "lightly" hitting the Canis Major he let me take the first really hurtful hit to it. I ran up it and just seconds before my sword hit the stupid fiend it glowed with flame all around it. I slashed it in half and it bursted into pyre flies. It dropped a few gil and I picked it up and walked back to where Wakka was standing. "Aaa what was that? You an expert fighter or something ya?" Wakka said looking stunned with shock from how I fought the fiend. Well at home I use to imagine a lot of me fighting with a sword. My sword was a double edge blade with about a three quarter circle at the end of it. Before the sword bends there is a fire symbol that glows bright orange. Just before the hilt of my sword there is a pirate symbol and on the hilt was this huge pirate skull that joined the blade and the hilt together. Well what could I say it was a pretty nice sword and it was my style too.

It "Aaa Wakka it was nothing," I said like I was relaxing mean while I put my sword in my shirt on my back. I never felt anything sharp on my back when I put it back. Well after Wakka came out of his moment on how I fought we started walking again to Besaid village. We walked for about five minutes and we reached the gates to the village. Wow it's better than it is on the game I thought to myself. "Welcome to Besaid village Daniel," Wakka said with pride. We walked to the center of the village and then I just stood there looking at the temple where the faith is kept for a summoner to obtain. Even though I knew I still asked the question "Wakka… What is that building in front of us?"

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