Hi everyone!This is a story i started doing for english coursework, and thought i would put it up and see what you think. Please let me know what you think, and i will tell you what my teacher thinks!

Tokyo Manor- It was called.

My family and I had been warned many times about the supposed things that had occurred there before we eventually moved in. The stories and rumours that we heard were horrific, ghostly sightings had been reported and poltergeist activity, but still my parents were determined to move in.

The first day we had got there I was worried about what would happen, but I knew I had to be strong for my mother, father and baby sister.

I think now of the horrible sights that I saw, the gargoyles being one, the statues of naked men and women caressing each other, creatures with terrible faces, and most of all a statue of a man biting a woman's neck.. I had heard of these types of things, vampyre they were called.

His face fully embedded into her neck and her features a look of pure terror at the act that was taking place. But for some reason, I liked the look of the statue, part of my body wanted to spew and throw up everything I had for lunch, but the other half wanted to know what it felt like, what it would be like to be a vampyre. I had a strange urge to touch the statue, to feel its cold stone beneath my fingers…

"Serena?" Came the voice of my mother, I jumped as I came out of my daze and looked back at her. She stood a long way away from me on the steps of the manor. I turned to look at the statue, but it wasn't of a vampyre and his victim any more, it was an angel, yet its face was of pure disgust and hatred at something that had happened.

"Coming…" I said over my shoulder, not being bothered to move my body to register my mother's words. I then turned to look at the statue again, its face still of disgust and hatred, and my heart sank. This place had a secret, I could tell and I was going to find it out!

I had a party a few weeks after we arrived, my mother and father stayed over at one of the neighbors and I was allowed to invite some friends. I knew a few girls from school and decided to invite them, there was Raye, Amy and Lita. Amy asked me if she could bring a girl called Mina and I obliged. There were a few boys I knew so I invited them also to brighten up the night a little. There was Andrew and Greg.

But I was shocked to find out who else would be entering into my house that night.

(Flashback)

"Come on in all of you!" I said happily as I saw my guests enter, at first I saw Amy and greeted her friend Mina, I had seen her around college a few times. The next to come was Raye and Lita and it seemed like Lita had brought a friend with her, his name was Ken. Then a random guy arrived saying that he had heard a girl he knew talking about the party, his name was Chad and he seemed interesting so I let him in.

Then came Andrew, Andrew was a good friend of mine, he had been the first one to speak to me in the new college, but he had also brought a guest.

"Darien…" I said, looking up at the senior at my college, he was very tall and extremely handsome. He smiled down at me and walked on past, following Andrew to the living room, not seeming to be at all fazed about the rumours around campus. The night was a bit awkward at the beginning but after about half an hour everyone was fine and drinking beers and any other alcohol my dad had in store accept me, I wasn't allowed, as I had to keep an eye on Rini. Most of the girls thought she was cute but at about nine o'clock I had to put her to bed, as sleep was taking over her fast.

"Hey Serena, you got any more food?" Came the voice of Chad, who was constantly eating. I turned round to look at him and smiled pointing towards the kitchen.

"There's more on the table and in the fridge." I told him and then turned to the rest of the gang. They were playing spin the bottle.

I walked over to the game and sat down beside Andrew. He smiled down at me and then we both watched as Mina spun the bottle. That moment went by so slowly I couldn't see it properly. Then the bottle stopped, it landed on me.

"Oh great!" I said, folding my arms. "Just my luck to come in at the right moment." I smiled at Lita and Amy and then watched as the bottle was spun again.

The seconds turned to minutes and the minutes turned to hours, as the bottle kept on spinning. Then it stopped and my heart stopped along with it.

"Serena and Darien." Greg said happily, and smiled around the group. Everyone smiled back at him and then they all looked at Darien and I. It was time- I was going to kiss him. At that moment Chad walked back in again and sat down next to Raye, chips and dip in his arms and a mouth full of the stuff.

"Wot's 'appened?" He asked in his common way of talking, I could tell he definitely wasn't from this part originally.

"The bottle landed on Serena and Darien." Amy informed him, leaning over and taking one of the dips he had managed to find and then shoved a chip in it.

"I dunno…" I began; trying to act like I wasn't sure or bothered, and I saw a look of disappointment appear on Darien's face. After a few seconds Darien had moved from the opposite end of the circle to right in front of me. I looked up at him, I mean really looked up at him. Even on our knees he was at most a head taller than me, his large dark blue eyes shone in the light of the candles that were placed around the room. He looked like a God. Darien's face began to glow with happiness and his lips shone with radiance. I loved looking at him, I loved seeing him looking at me and I loved him.

"Fine, whatever!" I said giving in and sitting back on my calves, his eyes lit up again and he seemed relieved and yet excited at what was to come. He almost made me laugh, he was that excited, well I think he was excited, it might have just been me that was excited enough for the both of us. But I was ready and I nodded at him.

He leaned forwards, his face getting closer and closer, his smile became so big and his face so close I thought I was going to clash heads. I closed my eyes awaiting his kiss. That was when I heard her scream

what do you think? I dont know whether you guessed it, i'm Serena, or i am pretending I'm serena, something like that, you know what i mean, right?

Anyways let me know what you think! Lots of love bobs xxxxxxxx