Okay, first, here are some responses to the reviews that I got...
Wolf Pack Leader - Well, then you might like this chapter...;)
oddkittycat - I'm glad your favorite character is Odd::jumps up and down: "Go Odd! Go Odd!" XD
Thank you both for reviewing. And because Odd is both of yalls favorite character, you both get a plushie of Odd. :hands Wolf Pack Leader and oddkittycat a plushie of Odd: Enjoy:)
Disclaimer: I don't own Code: Lyoko or any of its characters. But I do own this story!
And now, the moment you've all been waiting for...another revised chapter! Neepa!
Chapter 7!
A New Discovery
#revised version#
In the room where Odd and XANA are...
Odd stood still as the cage started to disappear. He wished he knew what XANA was up to, so he could think of a way out and into safety. 'But I don't know enough about this virus inside of me,' Odd thought. 'I already tried one way I thought would work, and nearly got myself killed!'
"You're free of the cage," XANA said. "But do you think that you can escape?" Odd gritted his teeth, furious at XANA for taunting him like this. 'What is he planning?'
"You seem to be having some trouble deciding what to do. Should I help you with that?" XANA's eyes glowed black, and he muttered a word just below a whisper and then ordered, "Sit!"
Odd's eyes widened in shock as his own body began to sit down Indian-style on the cold floor where the cage used to be. 'What the hell is happening? I didn't want to sit down! It must be the virus...' Odd growled softly in his throat, glaring daggers at XANA.
XANA smirked. "What? Are you shocked? I can now control you, and you will help get rid of Aelita..."
In Jeremie's room...
"There! I finally got a program that'll work!" Jeremie shouted, excitement flooding through him. "Aelita! Are you there?" Jeremie asked, still excited.
"Jeremie, I can't really go anywhere," Aelita said, smiling.
"Oh, right," Jeremie said, blushing.
"So, what happened?"
"I made a program so that I can create your new weapon!"
"That's great! You got the program done so quickly!" Aelita was excited; 'To think, that I would get a weapon! Now I can do more than just hiding or sneaking around!'
Jeremy sighed tiredly. The first lights of dawn were appearing. It took him pretty much the whole night to complete the program, and he hasn't even created the weapon yet! Aelita noticed his tired sigh, and sympathized for him. "Jeremie, shouldn't you rest for at least a little while? You can make my weapon later."
"Are you sure Aelita?"
Aelita gave Jeremie a reassuring smile. "Of course."
The blond-haired boy stifled a yawn, and smiled tiredly. "Thank you Aelita. Goodnight. Or, rather, good morning."
"Bye Jeremie," Aelita said, and then logged off.
Jeremie smiled at the place where Aelita had been on his monitor, before getting up from his chair. He tiredly but quickly changed, and then laid down on his bed.
'I wonder how Odd's doing...'
In one of the towers in the ice region in Lyoko...
"This is one of the most complex viruses I've ever seen..." mused Aelita.
Aelita was sitting cross-legged in the center of the tower she was in, computer screens surrounding her in front and to the sides. Words and numbers scrolled down the screens. After talking to Jeremie in the lab, she had started to research the new virus. It didn't matter to her how late it was since she didn't sleep. She had been looking for so long, Aelita was sure that it was already morning in the real world. Even though the Lyokian had been trying to decipher the virus ever since she had found out about it, she hadn't found anything new. Aelita was starting to think there was nothing else about the virus, but that thought was quickly pushed aside when one of the screens started to flash and make a beeping sound. Aelita turned to the screen and started to read what came up.
"There's nothing new about this virus...wait, what's this?" Aelita quickly read through the new information. Her eyes started to widen as she read. "It's saying that...on, no! This is terrible! I have to tell Jeremie!" With that, Aelita quickly pulled up a new screen to talk to Jeremie.
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NEEPA! So there is more to the virus. How many people saw that coming? How will Odd escape now, with XANA controlling him? Will Ulrich and Yumi have to fight there friend? Well, you might find out the answers to these and more you might have in the next chapter. Which you've probably already read. But you haven't read the revised version. Ha! (lol)
So when you're done and waiting for a new chapter, for all you Inuyasha- fans out there, read "Lingering Pasts." It's a great story! Till next time!
Please review this revised chapter! Pretty please?
Thanks, and Ciao!
D.D.Z. ;)