Chapter 2: Strangers
Hello everyone! I hope some o! Oh, and I got this flame, but I think I mentioned earlier that I accept flames! Here's the review:
Flamester101 (ironic huh?): Yes, it is a Mary-sue. Your friends are..."annoying, trouble making girl who nobody liked" that...is a Mary-sue, just your characters knowing about the anime makes them sue-ish. It's short also, did you even tell us how they look and act like? Sorry but this is an half-assed job. Work on your story before you post it up.
Half-assed? I think you meant 'half asked'. Anyways, I edited the first chapter a little and will be posting it soon! Hopefully someone doesn't complain about this chapter! (which I'm sure someone will) XD
Naruto sighed, enjoying his Ramen. He was at his favorite Ramen restaurant; the one Sensei Iruka always took him to. Sensei Kakashi, Sakura, and that jerk Sasuke came along.
'So this is our reward, for working our asses off for three weeks, completing 13 missions!' Sasuke thought, eating his shrimp ramen.
Sakura was admiring Sasuke as usual.
'Sasuke, why don't you like me?' She thought.
"Hey are you going to eat that?" Naruto asked, finishing off his third bowl of ramen.
"No," Sakura answered, annoyed.
"Yes!" He said, reaching for the ramen.
"you are so obnoxious!" she said.
"Hey Naruto, I think you should calm down on the ramen, seriously," Kakashi said.
"NEVER!"
"Why don't you just have a fortune cookie?"
As you know, Sakura loves Sasuke, Naruto like Sakura, and Sasuke hates the world. All of them wished something different. For Sakura, it was: I wish Naruto would leave me alone and find someone else to bother! Sasuke's was: I wish my brother was dead, but if that wasn't possible, I wish I could restore the Uchiha clan…
Naruto's was: I wish Sakura would like me, or at least some girl would like me!
And Kakashi's was: look at Sasuke, all those fangirls… wish I had some.. (doesn't sound like Kakashi, does it! Oh well! )
"Oh fine," Naruto said, putting his spoon down.
Sakura opened hers first: Your future is looking bright!
Sasuke: you shall meet a special girl soon!
Naruto: Your wish shall come true!
Kakashi: you have a special someone who has their eye out for you!
"pf, what crap!" Naruto said, throwing the fortune out the window.
They paid for their meals and started walking home, when…..
"AHHH! What the hell!" I shouted ass we were flying down from the tree.
"Katie?"
"I'm right here! What the hell is happening?"
"I think we're falling!"
"Anyone could figure that out moron!"
"Ow!" I said as we hit a hard, cold surface. I sat up and saw Katie wih a cut on her cheek.
I looked around. Japanese-looking writing everywhere! I turned around to see the tree, which we had fallen out of. It looked just like the one at the park!
"Uh, Katie, this might sound stupid but… I think we are in the Hidden Leaf village!"
"I was about to say to same thing,"
We stood up. The street was pretty much abandoned except for a cat running away from a dog.
"Well, what should we do?" I asked.
"I don't know, find someone I guess! Got any better plans?"
"Yeah, let's talk to them!" I said, pointing to team 7.
"Hey Sakura, do you want to go swimming maybe later?"
"No,"
"Or how about-"
"No!"
"Maybe come to my house and-"
"HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU? NO!"
"Hey, sensei who are they? I've never seen them around Kahona(sp?)!"
? Kakashi walked over to where to unusual girls were standing.
Dun dun dun! Sorry I am tired of typing, though that wasn't long, but I don't care anymore! Next chapter: we enter Naruto's apartment!
