Yeah well, I'm not to sure, the last chapter seemed a bit dodgy to me… GAH. Through some inspiration (which I am about to get from friends) I'll rewrite that chapter, and to stop you from hating me, I'll put up another chapter at the same time. Savvy?
Jack stood infront of the girl, wondering what she wanted him to do for her. He already resented the fact that he had no living relations left. And now, the woman who COULD have been his had a daughter? He looked into her dark kohl lined eyes. She seemed to be chocked up.
He lazily opened up his compass. Keira's eyes widened. His legendary compass. She was still trying to figure out what to say.
What Jack wanted to most was his family. Every one thought he was a tough old dog and didn't need anybody, but that wasn't true. He wanted someone to call his own, even though they weren't his true love. Gwyneth Jones could never be replaced. He expected his compass arrow to swing round and round until it snapped, but to his surprise, it drew a straight line infront of him. His eyes followed the imaginary line to the girl. He leaned over to see if anyone was behind her. The sea was clear for miles.
"Are you, are you a Sparrow?" he asked. To the rest of those managing to overhear this after knocking Will straight out were surprised. This didn't make sense.
She just nodded. He looked shocked, then his eyes warmed up and he hugged her tight, as if he'd never let her go. She hugged him back. A very drunk Gibbs just smiled and said, "ah young love." Before collapsing onto the floor.
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