(Please continue to read this chapter, I just decided to add a COMPLETLEY MADE UP story line, and please review! Oh, and the last line is about Ashfur.

Disclamer: I don't own warriors.)

Brambleclaw cringed as his brother walked over to the boarder. "What are you doing?" He asked. "You shouldn't be here!"

Hawkfrost's icy-blue gaze burned into him. "I had to see my brother again!" He spat. "Is it bad to see your brother!"

Brambleclaw knew he was trying to be nice. "No." He said. "I'm glad you came."

HISS!

Brambleclaw turned around to see squirrelflight watching them in the bushes.

Just stop enough of the limitless critical comments on my life

Squirrelflight gave Brambleclaw a long look. "Traitor!" She spat.

"Squirrelflight…" Brambleclaw started.

"No!" Squirrelflight stopped him. "I don't anything more to do with you!"

Just stop the judgment and all of your pseudo-involvement in my life

"Squirrelflight, please!" Brambleclaw called. "I still love you! Don't you remember all those happy times we've had! Whether you like it or not, he's my brother! Can't you just accept that!"

Step back a moment, and look at the miracle starting in our life
Don't stop the moment, and let the incredible happen knowing that

"He's evil!" Squirrelflight protested. "He's planning against RiverClan and is trying to take them over! Don't you remember?"

"No, Hawkfrost is not like that!" Brambleclaw nearly shouted.

All that you want is to criticize
Something for nothing

"Squirrelflight… please…" Brambleclaw. "We could do great things together!"

And all that I want is forgiveness one more time
To be the best in the world

"No!" Squirrelflight bounded away.

Brambleclaw finished his chat with Hawkfrost, and went back to camp, where he met up with Squirrelflight. He padded over to her. "What do you have against Hawkfrost?" He asked her, cold-hearted. "What did he do? Why can't you just let it go, and we could be together again!"

Just stop with all of your little deliberate problems with my life
Enough of all the crippling, terrible pain we feel inside

Squirrelflight gave a low hiss, but then Ashfur bounded over. "Hey Squirrelflight!" He said, and walked away with her.

Brambleclaw felt a wave of jealousy wash over him. He walked sadly away, knowing that he could never be with Squirrelflight.

Step back a moment, remember how the miracle started in our life
Take back the torment; I won't be enjoying this moment knowing that

The next day, Squirrelflight was just about to catch a vole, when Hawkfrost padded into their territory. "Get off!" She said.

"I'm just going to see my brother." Hawkfrost explained. "I'm not here to hurt anyone."

"You tore Brambleclaw and I apart!" Squirrelflight exclaimed. "And you're evil! I'm going to kill you, and become the greatest warrior ever known!" She lept onto his back, clawing at him, but Hawkfrost didn't move.

"STOP!" Brambleclaw ran in, knocking Squirrelflight off. "I wont let you kill him!"

"Brambleclaw, you act as if he did nothing wrong!"

All that you want is to criticize
Something for nothing

"He didn't!" Brambleclaw said. But he didn't know that Ashfur was also there, staring at them.

And he bounded in. "Come on, Squirrelflight, we have to continue hunting. Lets just let these traitors plot against us!" Ashfur gave them an angry look, but took off with Squirrelflight not far behind.

And all that I want is forgiveness one more time

Squirrelflight had gone, but she couldn't keep her mind off of Brambleclaw. She had a feeling Hawkfrost might do something bad to him. And, whether she wanted it or not, she still had feeling for him. She just wished he would stay away from Hawkfrost.

Brambleclaw stared towards the place where Squirrelflight had disappeared, and gave a heavy sigh.

Hawkfrost rounded on him. "If you help me, we can both rule all of the clans."

"What!" Brambleclaw felt as if he had the whole world on his shoulder. He loved his clan, but he couldn't shake off the feeling that made him want power. He remembered how badly he wanted to be deputy. "I-I…"

I know that
All that we want is to feel inside
Some kind of comfort
And all that we've done
We can hide
We'll be the best in the world

Squirrelflight started to run back to Brambleclaw. She knew Hawkfrost was up to something. She came up to Brambleclaw, and started to beg. "Please, why can't you understand he is evil?"

"I do…" Brambleclaw started. Hawkfrost narrowed his eyes, but said nothing.

All I ever wanted was to be a real source of compassion
From the moment that we found ourselves drowning in
All I ever wanted was to be a real source of compassion
From the moment that we found ourselves drowning in

Brambleclaw looked from Hawkfrost to Squirrelflight, not knowing who to choose. Squirrelflight started to give up hope. "Please…" She begged again.

All that you want is to criticize
Something for nothing

Brambleclaw turned to Hawkfrost. "No." He said. "You may be my half-brother, but the clan always comes first, and I can't let you do that!"

Squirrelflight gave a smile, and together, the rounded up on Hawkfrost, and attacked him. Hawkfrost, realizing that he couldn't fight off two… no wait… Ashfur was coming over, three cats, fled, and never came back to his clan.

Once Hawkfrost was gone, Brambleclaw stared softly into Squirrelflight's eyes.

And all that I want is forgiveness one more time

I know that
All that we want is to feel inside
Some kind of comfort
And all that we've done
We can hide
We'll be the best in the world
We'll be the best in the world

Squirrelflight knew she had the old Brambleclaw back. "Promise never to go see Hawkfrost again…" She said.

Just stop enough of the limitless critical comments on my life

"I promise. He's evil now… and… you were right. I love you, Squirrelflight." He said.

Squirrelfight rubbed against him. "I love you too."

Ashfur walked away, broken-hearted. He knew they had broken up, but he didn't think they would get back together. He thought he had a chance with Squirrelflight, but thanks to Brambleclaw, he could never be with her. He never wanted to see ThunderClan again! He ran off in the direction of Hawkfrost… "She never gave me a chance…" He thought.


Just stop the judgment and all of your pseudo-involvement in my life

He met up with Hawkfrost, sitting glumly, yet evilly, on the ground. He was thinking, Ashfur could tell. "I'd like to join you…" He said, quiet as a mouse.