Eiri's Notes: Hey everyone just letting you know that I went and edited everything. Gomen nasai for all the errors in my work, U.U bows regretfully I shall try to be more diligent about my errors so that all can read. The reason my characters don't really seem to show too much emotion is because I tend to get lost in one's own feelings and thoughts. It would go on forever in Naruto's P.O.V. and you would never see other characters side to the story, but I shall try more P.O.V.'s.
Discalimer: Don't own Naruto only story.
crazy yaoi fangirl: yep bad bad foxes!
Solar Angel: hope I can write loads more chaters,lol
ravemastaj: bad Kyuubi-san down off you must wait!I did not waste it! XD I'm using it now, oh and BTW thanks for adding me to your fav autors list. :thumbs up: and a heart ♥
Sasuke2006: oh man that would interseting about people's reactions. Kyuubi-san: Yay fresh meat!
i no i no: as your thingy says I know XD it's just he only name that I know to say so I use it.
blue-genjutsu: yeah bad Naruto! You're supposed to be gay! XD falls over laughing
dut: he needs all the luck he can get with this mess brewing!
Midnight Shining Star: Hinata hermmm should I even write that? . :scribbles on paper: Maybe...
NIGHTMAREWISHER: passes out due to major nosebleed. I ♥ you! glomps gift Muwhahah you're mine now Sasuke-kun!
Kyree:that's all you have to say. About the kyuubi I'm not really sure yet, and yes that is the reason Naruto is so weak.
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((Last Time))
Naruto sat up in the bed, he brought his hands to his forehead, it felt as if a train had hit him full force. What the hell am I going to do now?
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Leaves In The Wind
Chapter-18
((Narutos P.O.V.))
Why is it Yondime left me with such a cursed life? I mean I withstood the taunts, laughter, and the abuse. From the people and the Kyuubi, but my life can never seem to be stable for long. Heh, it's kind of funny now that the Kyuubi's gone and I have my own mind to think alone. I feel somehow cold maybe even lost, even the cheerful birds out side my window don't seem as they once where. Naruto could feel the tears prick his eyes he didn't care to hide it anymore, he soon felt them stream down his cheeks and every now and then one would land on his hand. Sakura and Sasuke told me to stay here because I'm weak. I'm always weak, I try but no one acknowledges me. It's always baka Naruto quit with this foolish task you have in mind. Go lay somewhere and die. It'd do everyone a great favor. He frowned a little, then wiped away his tears as Sasuke entered the room.
((Normal P.O.V.))
Sasuke walked in with a small bed tray, he placed it on the night stand beside the bed. He stood back up again and looked closely at Naruto the rims of his eyes where a slight pink as if he'd been crying only moments earlier.
"Naruto, what's the matter?" Sasuke sat on the edge of Naruto's bed. His dark eyes flashed signs of worry, and fear. Naruto lowered his head and shook it.
"Nothings...wrong...Sasu...ke." His voice for some reason only came in spurts as if someone had taken it right from him, and Naruto's guess would have to be that the Kyuubi had something to do with it.
((Naruto's P.O.V.))
He looked back up at Sasuke, had it only been a few days ago that they hated each other and did their best to out do the other? What's changed? Was it just the Kyuubi's doing or...or does Sasuke really feel that way? Naruto forced a smile then spoke.
((Normal P.O.V.))
"It's...ok Sasu...ke...I can g...et...things...myself...you...know." Sasuke smirked slightly at Naruto.
"When you can talk normal you can get out of bed." He stood and ruffled Naruto's messy blonde hair slightly
"but I...don't...wan...t ...to...wait." He puffed up in his normal hyper-active attitude.
----Outside of Town----
"Oh wow!" Hinata gasped as everywhere she looked she saw lovely dancing flowers. "Naruto-kun... how...how did you find such...a lovely place?" The Kyuubi shrugged, then spoke in his stolen voice.
"I'd find anything for you Hinata, datte bayo!" He forced a fake smile something he hated doing. Anything kind, nice, or good he hated. They only thing he wanted was sex, and at this time of the year he wouldn't stop until he got some.
((Kyuubi's P.O.V.))
Damn this Naruto kid! Why the fucking hell does he have to be so...so happy! It's not like I know everyone of his thoughts, even some I like. Especially one's with Sakura, man I raised that boy good.
((Normal))
The Kyuubi stood there drooling remembering one of Naruto's fantasies. He was suddenly snapped out of his daydream when a white dog planted on his face.
"DAMN IT KIBA! I'm going to kill this dog if he gets near me again!" He grabbed Akamaru and flung him at Kiba. Kiba luckily caught Akamaru and turned and glared at Naruto.
"Arf!"
"Yeah you're right something ain't right with Naruto. Even his smell is completely different." Kiba whispered to Akamaru.
"What are you saying, mutt!" Naruto glared back at Kiba as Hinata began to feel overly uneasy between the two.
----Hyuuga Household----
Neji sat on the porch of the courtyard, he closed his eyes and relaxed. No matter how important work is I still love time off. I can be me and no one's here to judge me. He stood and limped towards his room, his hidden sanctuary. He pushed back the clothes in his curtains revealing a small entryway. Yes, it's still here. Neji had found this when he was a little kid and would hid in the closet when his parents or someone yelled at him. It lead to a secret garden closed off to the rest of the house. He slowly made his way through the tiny hole, until he soon felt a breeze from outside. When he'd finally managed to stand up again he smiled, the trees swayed softly in the breeze.
----Outside of Town-----
"Naruto stop!" Hinata yelled as the Kyuubi punched Kiba one last time. The name irked him, Naruto, Naruto, Naruto! I'm tired of pussy footing around it's time to get what I want. He turned towards Hinata lust filled his eyes as he licked his lower lip then the upper, but what scared Hinata the most was that he spoke in his Kyuubi voice.
"I think it's time for my reward!"
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A/N: Hermmm... I'm truly debating if I should write in the Hinata scene. :slams head against keybored: ghbhuhvjmn oohrgohgoohbeui
ok I'm better, but I can't say the same for my keyboard. heh, -sweat drops-
yeah, so anyone for or against me writing the scene in? Review! I'll be your friend!
