Hey! I'm sooo sorry that my last chapter was so short. I just needed something like a "cornerstone" thing to start on. Um…I tweaked the storyline a bit and in regard to the skills of some unnamed ninja I shall not explain them here… Raziel Delacroix and Insaneiac the Maniac…you have my thanks! Oh Yeah…this chapter is mostly dialogue, my next chapter will not disappoint all you action-loving fans out there! Well, here it is, the next chapter, hot and fresh! so enjoy…Oh…um…please R&R! Thanks!
P.S. - I like the dotdotdot thing (…) so deal with it!
P.P.S.- I have only 1 channel cries and I do not get to watch the Naruto anime much so I read the manga…so if you all will bear with me, I shall be brought up to speed on the anime…help me with that one please! cries 1 channel….wahh! crawls into the fetal position
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Disclaimer: I own some of you people coughrazieldelacroixcough but not Naruto. As you all sit there wearing Naruto headbands and Sakura dresses you all are consumed by this raging fad that is Naruto…I promise that if anyone dares to destroy Naruto, They WILL combust into an all consuming flame…and I invite you all to all Defecate on their ashes…
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Chapter 2
Kitsunemaru's Brother is…
Everyone stared as this young boy with long silver hair burst through the doors. Kitsunemaru looked around the room. Suddenly he was surrounded by elite ninjas; they all seemed ready to kill him.
"Hold it." the Hokage said calmly. "Please don't harm him."
The ninja backed off of him. Naruto looked at Kakashi, then back at Kitsunemaru.
"Who are you? Why did you barge in here? Can't you see that we are in the middle of an important exam?"
Kitsunemaru just looked at Naruto as his questions bombarded him. Silence overtook the room as he just stood there staring at the young blonde ninja clad in orange. A smile crept over Kitsunemaru's face. Naruto squinted at Kitsunemaru
"What are you looking at me like that for? I know that I'm good looking but…"
"Brother! Brother! I have found you at last!" Kitsunemaru shouted with happiness as he tackled Naruto.
"What the hell are you doing?" Naruto screamed.
WHAP! Kitsunemaru was sent flying right into a wall. Kitsunemaru recovered from the blow.
"Brother, why did you do that? It's been 13 years since I saw you last." At this Kitsunemaru's eyes began to tear up. "Why did you leave me?" the distraught young man screamed.
"But you are older than me…um…Kitsunemaru." Naruto pointed out
Kitsunemaru was stunned at the fact that what Naruto had just said was true. Silence overtook the room. Naruto and Kitsunemaru looked at each others face, studying their features for what seemed like an eternity.
"Who cares about that damn runt!" someone shouted.
All the ninja turned around to find who had said this sentence that echoed across the room.
"Heh, that damn Naruto is just a failure! Once a failure, always a failure!"
At this, everyone's eyes fell on Hyuga Neji. The Hokage, Kakashi, and all the other ninja gasped with astonishment. Kitsunemaru's nostrils flared and his pool-like aquamarine eyes widened with anger.
"Don't talk about my brother like that!"
Kitsunemaru's voice came from behind the disrespecting pale-eyed ninja.
"How did he….get behind me so fast?" thought Neji.
"I suggest a fight…or are you not up to it my white eyed friend?" Kitsunemaru spoke calmly.
The Hokage stood up. "I think it is a nice idea." he shouted. He caught the eye of the tall caterpillar-browed ninja. The ninja nodded.
"Neji, you will fight this boy." commanded the uber-browed ninja.
"Yes Master Guy." sighed Neji as he jumped into the ring.
"Hayate." called the Hokage.
The man in the ring looked up and nodded. "cough This fight shall be between Neji of the Hyuga clan and Kitsunemaru! coughcough
Kitsunemaru looked at Naruto. "I do this for you." he whispered as he jumped into the ring.
Kitsunemaru landed in the ring with a thud. Neji and Kitsunemaru looked at each other for the longest time.
"Brother…" sighed Kitsunemaru.
"Ready, cough begin!" hacked Hayate.
Kitsunemaru stood looking at the ground for a moment. "Time to show my true form…I'm scared but…brother needs me…I'm strong…I am…"
A thick fog enveloped Kitsunemaru.
"His chakra is…overflowing" thought Neji
Every ninja in the room stood aghast. Some of the older ninja were in shock.
"How can this be? Mumbled Kakashi "It's not possible!"
Sakura gasped and grabbed onto Naruto. Looks at Sakura and grinned. "Well, this isn't so bad."
The fog began to dissipates slowly as Kitsunemaru steps out
"…the Eight-tailed Fox!" Shouted Kitsunemaru.
Two snow white fox ears poked out of the top of his head, his long silver hair flowed over his well toned body and eight silver and white tails extended from his tailbone. All the ninja looked on in awe, even the Hokage was pleased.
"Wow! He's …so handsome…so…" thought a young blonde genin.
Kitsunemaru cast a courageous glance at Neji.
"Shall we?" he asked.
"Yes!" answered Neji as he moved to stand in defense.
Kitsunemaru smiled as he ran at Neji.
"This is for you…Brother!"
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Ya know… I really hate doing this kind of thing but You shall have the next chapter really soon! Kitsunemaru is the Eight-Tailed Fox…wow! I didn't see that one coming! Who was that blonde ninja…give me a buzz if ya know. I like a little foreshadowing…And who knows what is running through Naruto's mind right now with Sakura all over him…oh yeah Sasuke is in his comatose slumber….SPOILER! The battles begins in the next chapter--Ninja Vs. Fox: Neji Hyuga and Kitsunemaru…Uzamaki?----he needs a last name…is this good?
