Hey guys! Thanks for all the reviews! Um...yeah well I actually only have one note to speak of so yeah. I'm gonna warn ya'll. Mika may be a little out of character. I'm not so sure how to write her so yeah I'm just warnin ya'll on that. Well, Here's Chapter 10!
Keys:
"blah" talking
'blah' thinking
blah emphasize that word
blah flashbacks, dreams, or writing
-blah- Someone doing something (example: -gasp!-)
--blah-- something happening (such as the ringing of a phone)
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(blah) in background
Chapter Ten: Which Door?
"Eiri you're awake!" Mika yelled, running over to hug her younger brother.
"Eiri...have you had any...visitors...other than us?" Tohma asked warily.
"No...Where's Shuichi?" he answered, playing along so no one would know he lied.
"We...uh...haven't found him yet...I'm sor-"
"DON'T YOU EVER DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS AGAIN! IF YOU OR SHINDOU IS HURT OR IN TROUBLE CALL US! IF I EVER GET ANOTHER PHONE CALL INFORMING ME YOU WERE FOUND IN A PUDDLE OF YOUR OWN BLOOD I'LL YOU KILL YOU MYSELF! AND IF YOU'RE ALREADY DEAD I'LL REVIVE YOU JUST TO KILL YOU AGAIN!" Mika interrupted her husband's apology with her mother-like antics causing Eiri to groan and roll his eyes.
"When can I get out of here?" he asked, ignoring her.
("EIRI! ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?.!")
"We're not sure, We'll have to ask the doctor."
("EIRI!")
"I want out today. I have to keep looking for Shuichi."
"EIRI! EIRI UESEGI, LISTEN TO ME DAMNIT!"
"SHUT UP!"
Everyone stared at the now very annoyed novelist. "I have a headache." was his excuse.
"I'm sorry Eiri...We were all just so worried...especially me...um..How bout we leave you to rest and ask the doctor about your release?" she said in a much calmer voice.
"Hn."
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Hitomi walked down the street smiling evilly at the thought of her plan going into action. Of course it'd take her some time to set up the triggers and such, but seeing the look on Eiri Yuki's face as he opened the door and triggered the gun pointed at his own husband would be priceless. She'd have to move the brat and his friend to another room, but...it'd be worth it.
Hours later and her trap was set. Shuichi and Tatsuke were in a room with two doors. In the direct line of view from one door, was Shuichi chained to a wall with his hands above his head and tape across his mouth. Directly in the line of view from the other door, was Tatsuke in the same state. The only difference was that he was concious. On the outside of each door were signs. One reading, "Shuichi ", the other reading, "Shuichi 2" and each door was set to trigger a gun, pointed directly in it's line of view. Hitomi looked at her watch. 'Only ten minutes to midnight...perfect.' she thought with a wicked smile.
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Eiri had had no rest whatsoever. He was too worried. So naturally he was al ittle crabby. It didn't help that Mika had insisted on staying with him at home to make sure he didn't...try anything again.
"Eiri please just sit down! We'll help you find Shuichi but pacing and glaring at the clock will not help!" she yelled at him. "You need to rest!"
"How can I?" he yelled back. "How can I be calm when he's God knows were being held captive by that bitch!" he now had tears in his eyes, "I don't even know if he's alive..." he said quieter. Sure, secretly he had the address but he was still truly worried. Who knew in what way he'd find his husband? Would he be alive? That woman hadn't told him anything other than a time and place. And no matter how much closer that time got, every minute felt like an hour to the distraught novelist.
Finally the time for him to leave came. His only problem was getting out of the house without being notived by Mika. But luck seemed to be on his side, for the minute he thought about it, Mika announced she needed to use the bathroom but she wouldn't be long. 'Perfect.' he thought as he slipped out the door silently.
The drive there was long and boring. Once arriving, he stepped out of the car cautiously. After looking around for a bit he ventured in quietly. He was amazed to find the place had no body guards or really no security at all other than video cameras.
He felt like he'd been walking for hours. The bitch said he'd be here but so far, he'd found no room containing his young husband. Apparently this was an abandoned hotel or something because there were tons of floors and each door led to what seemed to be the size of a very small apartment. Eiri thought about these minor details as he rode the elevator back down to the main floor. There were twelve floors and he'd checked each one twice. None of them had a door that led to his precious pink baka. Thinking he'd been set up, Eiri started out the front doors with a heavy heart once he got to the first floor. Just as he began to walk out, something caught his eye. It was a door labeled "Basement". 'Now how could I have missed that?' he thought as he headed towards it. After walking down a large set of stairs, he found himself in a large room that looked like someone had been living in it. There were numerous doors around the room, so he began checking in each one. After ten minutes that felt like hours, he finally found a door labeled "Shuichi ". But there was another door labeled "Shuichi 2". For a moment he wondered which door to chose, but soon his need to see Shuichi alive and well came over him and he opened the first door with just Shuichi's name on it.
End Chapter 10
There ya go! XD Muahahahah o yeah I have a lil disclaimer. The whole gun/trigger thing was Gosen the Saiya-Jin's idea. so yeah. XD annnyways. Chapter 11 is about halfway done so I'll have it up as soon as I can. Of course I may be inspired to write faster if I get lots of reviews. -wink- lol XD Well yeah, Till next time!