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Jesse and I stared at her for a while.

"What?" She looked over at us. Her dark eyes narrowed."Are you going to help me, Jesse? Or are you and Suze just going to keep making-out at my FUNERAL!"

Jesse was still staring. I, on the otherhand, finally managed to speak. "Marta, first we need to know something. Did Paul kill you?"

She continued to stare at us, well Jesse, with her eyes narrowed as she said. "That-(curse word in Spanish. Sorry, I leave the Spanish to Jesse)? Of course he did! hit me over the head wirh something." She noticed my bruise. "You too? I thought it was robbers, Hector." She smirked over at him. I was trying not to laugh at the name Hector, but was failing despite the look Jesse-erm-Hector gave me.

"Marta, do you know why?" Se sighed and sat back down. "Si, he said it was because he wanted to ruin Jesse's life because Jesse ruined his. Slater's got some issues if you ask me."

I nodded, then Jesse said, "We need to figure out why you're still here."

Then Marta and I said at the same time, "I'm not suppossed to be dead!" She looked over at me as I sad that.

"Everyone says that, Marta." I sighed. "We need to go tell Kat." We ran throught the Mission to find Kat and David, well, doing what Jesse and i had been doing, only they weren't interrupted by a ghost. Nope, they were interrupted by a freak (me of course) an ex-ghost and hs ghost sister.

David blushed. I smiled and said, "You do realize that there's a church nearby, don't you?"

"Oh, look who's talking, querida." I turned around and stuck my tongue out at Jesse. "Shut up, Cadaver breath."

"I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU WERE MAKING OUT AT MY FUNERAL!"

David blushed again, "Well, we didn't know you. Just Jesse. So-"

"And that makes it okay?" She crossed her arms and stomped her foot. Drama Queen. I know, I know. I'm one to talk.

"Look, Paul killed her. We don't have any evidence, so no one will believe us. I think that marta will be here until her death is avenged, meaning Paul will have to be captured. which he won't be so I think that we have a problem."

Everyone stared at me. "Can you repeat that again? Slow this time, querida."

I sighed. This was getting old. "Paul. Killed. Marta. No. Evidence. She. Stays. Problem.'

"Oh. Well, what are we going to do?"

"If i knew would i have asked?" They shook there heads. "Okay then. we can go ask David for help."

"I said I didn't know."

"NOT YOU! MY BROTHER! AND-"

At that moment, everyone turned to look at David. Because everyone had just realized what I had.

"You can see ghosts?"

"No, of course not."

"You just talked to Marta."

"No I didn't."

"Yes you did."

"No I didn't."

"yes. Yes you did."

"No I-"

"YES YOU DID! I JUST SAW YOU!" He smiled a very evil smile, then I heard a voice behind me."Very good, Nancy Drew."

I didn't have to turn around. I knew who it was. "Paul." I could feel him smirking. "Susie. I told you. I don't want to do this the hard way." I was alarmed to see David's eyes turning red.

"Paul, what did you do to david?"

"That's not David." Paul didn't say that, Kat did."Kat, what do you mean?"

"I've read alot about vampires and demons..." I immediatley grabbed my neck. I have a major fear of vampires. What? After that thing with Tad's dad, do you blame me?

"he's not a vampire, Suze. he's a demon."

"Very good, sweetie. I'm almost sorry I killed you."

"You didn't kill her Paul."

"Yet." we looked back at David, well demon David. he transformed from David, to the creepiest thing I have ever seen in my life. Trust me, I know creepy. I live with Brad. he was black and had huge glowing red eyes. With fangs too, which was way to vampire-ish for me to handle. So, once again, my hands went to my neck. "Where's David?"

"That doesn't concern you, Susie-Q." I was shocked that Jesse hadn't jumped the guy already, but when I looked back, I knew why.

"PAUL!"

he was laughing. I was trapped in a ring of fire. Smoke was filling up the hallway, and I couldn't see.

Once again, deja vu.

"Querida?"

"Jesse!"

"Susannah, follow my voice." I tried, my smoke was filling my lungs. "Jes-"


"Susannah!" I tried to walk as close as I could to the flames, but it was no use. I couldn't see her. All of us had gotten split up.

"To late, Rico. She's mine now."

"Slater, I swear if you-" I saw her. Lying face down on the ground. Not moving. I ran over to her as the smoke parted. She was breathing, but barely.

If she died, he'd pay. Oh will he pay.


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