I am extremely sorry for the long wait until this review. I lost computer privileges for grades and I haven't been able to come on for a while. I'm not good at writing action sequences but I'll try my best. REVEIEW AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. PLEASE CRITICIZE SO I CAN IMPROVE. LEMON AHEAD NO LITTLE HORNY PUNKS that means you victor
"You don't have to do this, there has to be another way. You can't just fight anymore Dravin" screamed Raven as she watched her brother who was clearly dominating over Robin. It seemed that every time Robin had an idea for an attack, Dravin would have thought it out and made a counter for it.
"Really Robin, must we fight, this isn't proving anything. You're just embarrassing yourself in front of Starfire" laughed Dravin as he dodged Robins kicks and punches as if they were in slow motion. "Despite what you think, I don't have any feelings for her, we only spent time together. Isn't this a little extreme?" But Robin wouldn't let up. Dravin had exhausted all other means of communication with Robin, so he had to calm him down one way or another.
"Shut up, I don't want to hear….." Robin was cut off as Dravin grabbed his throat with amazing strength and began to slowly suffocate him to the point of unconsciousness. Dravin watched in amusement as Robins face began to turn a deep purple and his eyes began to fade. Just as Robin was about to die of the lack of oxygen, Dravin let go. Seeming content that he had won, Dravin left Robin to his coughing. Starfire rushed to his aid as Beast Boy and Raven stood, horrified, holding each other in their arms. Raven thought this side of her brother had died with her father, but it seemed to her that any of his children would have his influence.
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"What happened out there, Robin just got his ass handed to him and Dravin didn't even break a sweat. That dude's unreal" exclaimed Cyborg, still in shock of what had taken place. "I mean did you see that guy he just reached out and grabbed his neck like it was nothing. Even I would have trouble chokin' a dude with one hand."
"We all have been deeply disturbed of the strength of our new friend, but I still think that there is more to him then meets the eye. I feel he has powers that he is hiding from us" said Starfire. She was attracted to him………but she loved Robin and knew that he was the one for her. Or was he, she didn't know. She only knew that Dravin was a proper Gentleman and knew what to say. She quickly erased the thought from her mind as best she could.
"Raven, why didn't you tell us he was that tough, Robin really could have gotten hurt out there" said Beast Boy. He knew Robin could have easily had his head ripped off if Dravin wished it.
"I know, I'm so stupid to not have told you in the first place. I need tot ell you what he's capable of. You know that my father was normally stronger then any one of us, well, Dravin was my father's right hand man at one point, until Dravin found out the secret to my father's power. It was a special wine that not even I was allowed to see. Dravin killed the guards and stole the wine. He hid in the mountains of Sudokon until my father was tired of looking. My father then decided to focus on me so that he could, well you know that rest." Everyone looked at her trying to take in the story. Robin about threw up when he found out how much trouble he could have been in. Starfire attempted to console him…..but to no avail. "You probably hate me for not telling you how much trouble he………"
She was cut off by tender green lips pressed to hers. That was there little way of telling each other that it was all right. "You don't have to apologize for anything, people make mistakes. Hey" he said as Raven began to look away from him, "I love you."
"I love you to. Thanks for being so nice to me, and let's try to keep the kissing in public to a minimum." She gently kissed him back as she beckoned for him to follow her to the hallway.
As they began to leave Cyborg started cracking up again, but Raven and Beast Boy just shook it off and left. As soon as the sliding doors shut Raven shoved Beast Boy against and began to kiss him violently (having your girlfriend shove you into a wall isn't fun) before he could realize what happened. They only broke away to agree on where to continue this. They chose Raven's room and where there in no time flat, all the while kissing each other passionately.
They chose to continue this on the bed and never let go of each other except for the inconvenience of having to breathe. "God I love you, I don't know if I deserve you, what do you think" said Beast Boy in between kisses.
"I think…..you need to stop talking" was all she had to say before she had his mind where she wanted it. As her hands slid down his spine she felt him tingle at the touch of her cold hands.
As her hands slipped down his back, Beast Boy slowly undid the zipper on the back of her leotard. He slipped it off so slowly that it drove Raven mad. While he was busy with that, Raven was busy figuring out how to undo Beast Boys costume. She finally found a zipper on the back and slowly unzipped it. They were both lucky that each of the costumes were one pieces and not plastic on the inside. They were becoming increasingly hot even as they starred at each other in there underwear. That was the last pause they would take as they instinctively grabbed each other and began to passionately melt into one another. (and yes….it is instinctive. and fun)
As there tongues did battle in one another's mouth Beast Boy tried to undo her bra while she was slipping him out of his boxers. He finally got it undone as she began to feel him. They had never experienced this feeling before. They didn't want to share this moment with anyone else in the world. Beast Boy was blown away by how ravishing Raven was in the moonlight, and he never wanted this to end. The way the night shined on her like a goddess was enough to make anyone drop to there knees. He slowly cupped her nipple in his mouth while massaging the other, hearing a pleasant moan that seemed to slip out of her.
Her moaning only aroused him more as he slowly slipped her panties from her body. They were now completely on the bed and they loved every second of it. Outside was a full moon and they could hear the waves against the shore. They could smell the lightly salted scent of the sea and they could taste each others unique taste. The pace was killing Raven and Beast Boy knew it. He had always loved to mess with her and this was his big chance. He slowly moved down and began to kiss every inch of the way, laying little pecks on each unique and gliding curve he had so long adored. He stopped when he got to her womanhood and waited for a sign to continue. "Please…..don't stop" she moaned. He then placed his lips on her and made intricate designs on her all the while enjoying her moans of pleasure. It was her turn now.
She grabbed him by the shoulder and flipped herself on top of him. She repeated Beast Boy's tactic and kissed every inch of him. As she sucked on him she heard pleasure moans emit from his chest. Raven felt him harden in her mouth and she let go.
"What did you stop for, that felt so good" he said. Before he knew it he was flipped on top of her. Adrenaline was coursing through them both as Beast Boy felt her put him where he thought he would only get close to in his dreams. She only stopped him to ask him one question.
"Do you love me" she asked. Her eyes were filled with sadness and doubt. "More then you could imagine." As he said this, all the worry and doubt and fear faded from her eyes, and all her sadness was swept away. She slowly, as not to hurt herself, slid him in herself. She felt the barrier in herself break as he penetrated farther into her. He slowly forced himself in and out. He didn't want to hurt her so he took it slow. The sweat was dripping down the both of them and the tears in each others soul were fading away with each thrust. They both were reaching each others peak when Beast Boy just let go of himself and came in her just as she climaxed. They fell on the bed with exhaustion and peered into each others eyes.
"Thank you Beast Boy, you've made me so happy. How can I repay you?"
"Not dumping me would be a good start" he joked. She looked at him seriously and waited for a serious response. "Making you happy is enough. I just want you to know one thing Raven."
"What's that" she asked.
"You don't have to cry alone"
THE END
What a sweet ending. That was my first lemon (or I think it was a lemon) so tell me what you think. SHOULD I MAKE A SEQUEL? Email it to me and I'll tally the votes
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