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The pressure between her legs increased, delivering the first imitation of pain "The next part will hurt a bit my darling, but not for long" Zuko whispered lovingly, wanting his love to know what was ahead.
Katara nodded, giving him the signal to continue.
He lowered his head and began to whisper in her ear, even as he tightened his hips to breach her untried flesh. She forced herself to hold still despite to instinct to write away from the intrusion. "Sweetheart…"
His breath became ragged as he paused within her, he seemed to struggle for self control. "Yes, that's it… just a little bit more…" he moved in another careful advance and hesitated again. "A little more…"
He deepened his entry in lingering degrees, carefully courting her body into accepting him "More…".
"How much more?" she gasped. He was too hard, the pressure was too intense, oh but how she wanted him!
Zuko gritted his teeth at the effort it took to hold still. "I'm about halfway there" he finally managed.
But he kept impelling himself deeper, trying to sooth her pain with his mouth and hands. Gradually it became easier, the pain fading into a mild prolonged burn. A long sigh escaped her as she felt her body yielding, her virginal flesh conceding to the inevitability of his possession. Zuko's back was a mass of tightly cobbled muscle, his belly as hard as carved wood. Holding himself deep inside her, he groaned, while a shiver ran across his shoulders.
"You're so tight" he said hoarsely, he voice was slurred, as if drunk on pleasure.
They studied each other, one gaze sated, the other brilliant with yearning.
She gasped as he finally pierced through her virginity, the pain slight and sharp, but faded into coarsing pleasure.
Katara moaned hotly as he began pushing himself in and out of her, her slick, wet walls gripping his length.
At last they reached that glorious point of climax, where pleasure burns surpreme, their cries of ecstasy echoing around the cabin as Zuko emptied himself inside his sweet water bender.
Katara lay there silently with her fire prince, basking in the aftermath of their lovemaking.
"I love you, Katara" Zuko murmured as he ran his fingers through her silken hair.
Katara smiled warmly at him, stroking his smooth alabaster chest (Yes, I got the memo, he has no chest hair) "I love you too, my sweet handsome prince.
Zuko smiled and cuddeled her close to him, he could hardly wait till they had the chance to get married, he planned on being the greastest husband in the world, he'd do anything to make her happy.
"We should be catching up to your brother and the avatar soon, my darling" Zuko said, stroking her back absent-mindedly.
Katara propped herself up from his chest and smiled lovingly at him.
"You are amazing" she said warmly "You are willing to do so much for me.
Zuko sat up and smiled "Because I love you" he said, love shimmering in his dark eyes "Let's get dressed now, my love, we will find your companions and explain to them our plan.
"Katara smiled and nodded, following suite as Zuko began to get dressed.
The pair came out of Zuko's cabin as Iroh called through the closed door that Sokka and Aang were spotted.
"I think it best that you approuch them alone at first, they may not even want to listen if they see me right away" Zuko said, wrapping an arm around Katara, whom nodded in agreement.
"I only hope they'll listen" Katara said softly.
"They will, Katara, don't worry" Zuko comforted, stroking her shoulder.
Katara nodded and focused on the task ahead
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