Sorry guys, I've tried to understand where I was taking the story. But then I realized that I was actually telling two separate stories. They had nothing to do with each other, so I decided to end this story where it should have been ended and then start off with Miranda's story.
If you don't know what I'm talking about then just be on the lookout for my next Riddick story, which will involve Jack's sister and what Jack was doing on the Hunter-Grazner in the first place.
I would have posted this on my profile, but for some reason the FF website won't let me edit anything.
Thanks for reading! Please look for my next fic sometime soon, hopefully.
skabs