p style="text-align: left;"strongI realize now, as I look at the reviews and the story itself, that it is quite.. bad. Grammatically correct but it's far too fast-paced and there's practically zero action and very little talking in the first two chapters. I was hoping that I would learn from this, but all I did was make a mistake. I realize that I should instead practice my writing elsewhere, and see what I should do to make this story better. In conclusion to the retirement of the storm series, /strong/p
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p style="text-align: center;"strongI leave it up for adoption./strong/p
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p style="text-align: center;"strongI leave it up for adoption./strong/p
