So I'm trying a whole new story and it's Jurassic world camp Cretaceous starting at ep 4 s1 and I'm making plot changes and I'm adding a new character named jack
"Dad you've got to see this" Darius excitingly says
"Let your old man read" Dad? Hold on what was his name,
"What's this" Darius asks
"A present" dad says
"Are you okay?"
"I'm fine I'm just tired Darius we're going to Jurassic world the two of us" dad says
And boom transition into camp
"We have urgent news to discuss with you miss Dearing" Roxie says
"Don't forget the raptor pen" Dave says
"Shush I know I know" says Roxie
"Or the kids getting lost in the storm"
"The point is" Roxie continues
"Or the life threatening stampede during the storm"
"SHUSH!"
"The point is Claire we need more staff or we will need to send the kids home asap" Roxie rants
"Mailbox is full" the phone gives a automated message
"New plan we do it in person" roxie suggests
"I'm sorry are you saying we leave the kids here on their own the kids who seem determined to eaten those are the kids of which you speak" Dave replies
"If we leave now we will only be a hour or two tops" Roxie replies
"I'll leave a note" Dave says with a sour look
"What up camp Cretaceous" Darius comes in yelling
"Not in a woo hoo mood this morning Darius" Kenji says
"We only had to walk cause you crashed" says ben
"Morning brooklyn Whats new on the web" yas asks
"I wouldn't know since someone stole mine phone" Brooklyn says
"Who hasn't?" Jack says
"Oh I know that but someone may be trying to hide stuff on it Sammy"
"Back off she hasn't touched your phone" yas confirms
A dinosaur roar goes off in the background
"Was that a trex" Kenji asks
"No sounds different" Jack replies
"Maybe their moving a new dinosaur from the lab over" Darius suggests
"Let's go to the observation tower and check it out" jack says
"Great idea jack" Sammy says
"Guys we can't it's indoor arts and crafts day" Ben says
"Who can stay inside I'm off to go see a trex or a girl fight either way i win" Kenji replies
"Fine I'll wait for them" ben says
Then he gets spooked
"Wait guys I'm coming too!" Ben yells
At the look out tower
"Come on slowpokes" jack yells
"No more stairs, it better be something good" kenji exhaustingly says
Foot steps can be heard
"There's something out there" Brooklyn says
"Something big" Darius
Suddenly a brachiosaurus appears
"Guess we should head back now" Ben says
"That doesn't make any sense they dont roar like that it's more like *brachiosaurus noises*" Darius points out
"One more time Dino geek didn't quite hear you" jack says
"What are they saying" jack asks
"Great they look mad" Ben says
A roar in the distance can be heard
As the hybrid Dinosaur camouflages in the bushes appearing and eating the workers
"Uh Dino geek what is that" yas says
"It got them" Ben yells
"Dr Wus lab there was a Dinosaur named" Brooklyn gets cut off
"Indominus rex" Sammy clarifies
"How do you know that name"
"But there's no Dinosaur named that" Darius points out
"Forget it we need to go now" jack says pointing at the zip line
"It's fine it can't see us... right?" Kenji asks
Then suddenly the indominus Rex starts breaking the tower
"It saw us we need to go now" Brooklyn orders
Suddenly Sammy falls but is caught by jack and yas
"Hold on Sammy" as they both lift her up
"Zip line now" jack says
As he shoves Ben and darius on
"My turn" yaz says
"Sammy your next" kenji says
Then kenji jumps on
But then they suddenly stop moving
"Why aren't we moving Ben what did you do" kenji yells
"Nothing it just stopped" Ben says
"What's going on" Brooklyn asks jack
"It must be the emergency break, are you able to hold me?" Jack asks
"I punched a shark so yea maybe but what are you doing?" Brooklyn asks
"Catch me" jack says as he leaps off into brooklyn
They get unstuck and continue moving
"It's working" Ben says
But then the indominus Rex breaks the tower causing them all to fall
"Arghhh" the campers yell
As we flash back to Darius in the hospital
"Hey dad"
"Hey son"
"There's a bunch of rumours that Jurassic world will be introducing a new dinosaur at the end of the year" Darius says
"D man about the trip"
"Don't say it" Darius says
"Listen to me this life it doesn't always go your way things fall apart it doesn't matter It matters that you keep moving forward to the people that need you to you help them we never give up"
"No more dad speeches were gonna make it to Jurassic world and it's gonna be perfect" Darius says
As we cut back to the present
"Is everyone okay?" Darius asks
As a roar goes off
"The heck is that thing" kenji asks
"Okay I'm sorry but I" Sammy says
"Wheres oh no my necklace I left it in my bunk"
"There's more problems then that Darius" jack reminds them
"We need to head back to camp" Darius says
Back at camp
"Dave Roxie the other workers got away right?" Sammy asks
"Not all of them" Ben says stumbling back
"Hello hello can anyone hear us" Yasmina says
"Give me my phone" Brooklyn demands
"What are you talking about" Sammy asks
"I don't care that you stole it I don't care that you have it all I don't even care about the skin samples you took from the sinoceratops all I want to do is call for help"
"Hold on what skin samples" jack asks
"Uh i, I don't know what your talking about, skin samples why now would I do that" Sammy replies
"Back off Brooklyn not everything's about your phone" yasmina yells
"Yas calm it right now it's about her phone since she needs to call for help" jack answers back
"Keep it down there's a big" Ben gets cut off
"A big scary Dinosaur there's always a big scary Dinosaur" kenji retorts
"And your always a big mouth jerk"
"All of you shut up now" jack says
" we aren't safe right now" he adds
"No one's getting out of here we just say someone get eaten we're defense less we're dead" Ben claims
"Things fall apart but it's okay we pick up the pieces and continue going forward" Darius says
"What about your necklace" Brooklyn asks
"It doesn't matter I've got the memories right here" Darius answers
" what are we supposed to do" yas asks
"Get to the park get help but it's only gonna work if we are a team" jack answers
"Or you know we don't go back in the jungle" ben suggests
"You can wait here for the negligent babysitters I'm joining the Dino nerd and the fighter" kenji says
"Wait your following me?" Asks Darius
"Dude there's no way I survived a dinosaur attack(as a piece of camp debris falls) just to be taken out by cheap camp debris that's not how Kenjis going out, we're going south, the rest of you coming or what?" Kenji asks
"I'm in" Brooklyn confirms
"We're in too" yas says for Sammy
The group starts walking off
"But guys" Ben says
"You coming ben?" Jack asks
"Uh yea I'm coming, it's just one dinosaur"
As we cut to the indominus breaking toro out
Thanks for reading the first chapter