I know it has been months since I update. I couldn't figure out what
I wanted to put in this one. I also didn't know if I should continue. Then
my sister had her graduation. Anyway the Idea for the point of view was
Amy's but I wrote everything in the plot. Oh yea I just remembered even
though I don't like to add characters I need to for this I am adding a
stormwing that is unlike others because it has different types of magic.
Disclaimer I don't own any of Tamora Pierce's characters except for the stormwing, Sythrak because I made him up. I own the plot blah blah blah. Honestly the only reason I put this depressing thing on here is because the only stuff I own is my "unique" personality and my muse who says her name is Thalia.
Thalia: You don't own me I own myself thank you very much.
Krissy: We got a chapter to write, Thalia. We'll talk about this later.
Thalia: Fine, Later. Sits down muttering curses under her breath.
Okay now you guys all think I'm crazy even though I'm not. I just drink to much pop and have way too much sugar, which makes me VERY hyper. Whatever as long as you keep reviewing then I will try to keep updating without Thalia having fits.
Thalia: I heard that.
Dedicated to my 3-year-old cousin Thomas because he is such a little sweetheart, not to mention he makes everyone laugh.
Chapter 7
Sythrak
Yuki glanced back at the last view of the palace where her once true love was. I don't understand it, I know I shouldn't be doing this to Neal, but I just can't help myself. I want Dom so bad. I don't understand why he is doing this to Kel or his cousin; he doesn't seem like that kind of person. Why are we doing this, Yuki thought rubbing her hands across her face.
Why am I hurting Kel like this, thought Dom. She is my friend so why am I hurting both her and Neal? I love Yuki, but why did I have her say such cruel things to Neal, even if he is a Meathead?
Suddenly the horses froze not willing to go any further. There was a puff a black smoke and an unusual stormwing appeared. It had gleaming black metal as its body instead of the usual silver. It had white hair with a tan and weathered face. It sat there in the road for a moment before stumbling closer to the pair of riders.
Neither Yuki nor Dom was surprised to see the stormwing, somehow they had known it was coming. "My name is Sythrak. I am the one who is invoking pain and suffering upon you and your beloved Keladry of Mindelen. I am the one who has brought you here. I am the source of all evil. Mahhhahhhahh," said the stormwing.
"Sure you are," Dom said skeptically, "that is just why me and Yuki came here out of our love for each other."
"Stupid mortal I cast a spell on you so you would do what your normal selves would never dare to. I came here to disrupt the balance by killing Keladry of Mindelen Protector of the Small. I am here to bring the Queen of Chaos to her reign of power over your tiny weak little world," Sythrak said.
It was then that the spell over Yuki and Dom was lifted and they realized what they had done. Dom could finally see why assassins had attacked Kel, and why he and Yuki had been lured away. Sythrak's master plan was finally revealed to him.
Suddenly, Dom began to laugh so uncontrollably that Sythrak said, "Why do you laugh mortal do you not know that now that you and that woman there are gone Keladry will most certainly die?"
"She won't die, you forgot the one person who has truly saved her every time you tried to kill her. You thought if she didn't have so many people to protect her that you could get to her, but you were wrong. There is still the one person that no matter how hard you try will lay down his life just to say Kel, and that is the one person you forgot. He will save her you just wait and see," Dom said still laughing at the Sythrak's stupidity.
"You mean the green eyed one," Sythrak responded coolly. "He is weak and won't last against me if he tries, and he is too depressed over his love leaving, to be protecting anyone."
This time it was Yuki who responded to Sythrak's comment by saying, "I know Neal no matter what you've made me do to him he will defend Kel whether or not it is the last thing he ever does."
"We'll just see," Sythrak said laughing as he vanished with another puff of black smoke.
"We got to get back to the Palace now!" Dom said turning to face the way they had come.
"Look," Yuki said pointing at a black shield that engulfed the Palace as they looked on in horror. They turned their horses around heading back to Corus at gallop. They were both praying to any God or Goddess listening, that it wasn't already too late for Kel.
A/N Cliffie oh I know you guys hate them but I got to go and do stuff pretty soon and I wanted you guys to read and tell me what you thought of my new plot twist. If you don't like it tell me and I might go back and change it to something else. I might do thank yous next time but that is if I'm not too lazy.
Notice I know a beta reader checks over grammar and detail, but can
anyone tell me what else they do and if I need one, and If you think I
need one and want to be it email me.
Thalia: You said later we would talk about you owning me and now is later. Not to mention I just helped you write this chapter. Krissy: It says so right here on this piece of paper that as my muse you are owned by me.
Thalia: Oh I didn't know that oh well your nice enough I guess that is okay for now.
Why are you reading me and Thalia's argument go review. Go on go cause I won't write more without at least 2 reviews and I know that isn't that hard to manage so bye bye.
Krissy
Disclaimer I don't own any of Tamora Pierce's characters except for the stormwing, Sythrak because I made him up. I own the plot blah blah blah. Honestly the only reason I put this depressing thing on here is because the only stuff I own is my "unique" personality and my muse who says her name is Thalia.
Thalia: You don't own me I own myself thank you very much.
Krissy: We got a chapter to write, Thalia. We'll talk about this later.
Thalia: Fine, Later. Sits down muttering curses under her breath.
Okay now you guys all think I'm crazy even though I'm not. I just drink to much pop and have way too much sugar, which makes me VERY hyper. Whatever as long as you keep reviewing then I will try to keep updating without Thalia having fits.
Thalia: I heard that.
Dedicated to my 3-year-old cousin Thomas because he is such a little sweetheart, not to mention he makes everyone laugh.
Chapter 7
Sythrak
Yuki glanced back at the last view of the palace where her once true love was. I don't understand it, I know I shouldn't be doing this to Neal, but I just can't help myself. I want Dom so bad. I don't understand why he is doing this to Kel or his cousin; he doesn't seem like that kind of person. Why are we doing this, Yuki thought rubbing her hands across her face.
Why am I hurting Kel like this, thought Dom. She is my friend so why am I hurting both her and Neal? I love Yuki, but why did I have her say such cruel things to Neal, even if he is a Meathead?
Suddenly the horses froze not willing to go any further. There was a puff a black smoke and an unusual stormwing appeared. It had gleaming black metal as its body instead of the usual silver. It had white hair with a tan and weathered face. It sat there in the road for a moment before stumbling closer to the pair of riders.
Neither Yuki nor Dom was surprised to see the stormwing, somehow they had known it was coming. "My name is Sythrak. I am the one who is invoking pain and suffering upon you and your beloved Keladry of Mindelen. I am the one who has brought you here. I am the source of all evil. Mahhhahhhahh," said the stormwing.
"Sure you are," Dom said skeptically, "that is just why me and Yuki came here out of our love for each other."
"Stupid mortal I cast a spell on you so you would do what your normal selves would never dare to. I came here to disrupt the balance by killing Keladry of Mindelen Protector of the Small. I am here to bring the Queen of Chaos to her reign of power over your tiny weak little world," Sythrak said.
It was then that the spell over Yuki and Dom was lifted and they realized what they had done. Dom could finally see why assassins had attacked Kel, and why he and Yuki had been lured away. Sythrak's master plan was finally revealed to him.
Suddenly, Dom began to laugh so uncontrollably that Sythrak said, "Why do you laugh mortal do you not know that now that you and that woman there are gone Keladry will most certainly die?"
"She won't die, you forgot the one person who has truly saved her every time you tried to kill her. You thought if she didn't have so many people to protect her that you could get to her, but you were wrong. There is still the one person that no matter how hard you try will lay down his life just to say Kel, and that is the one person you forgot. He will save her you just wait and see," Dom said still laughing at the Sythrak's stupidity.
"You mean the green eyed one," Sythrak responded coolly. "He is weak and won't last against me if he tries, and he is too depressed over his love leaving, to be protecting anyone."
This time it was Yuki who responded to Sythrak's comment by saying, "I know Neal no matter what you've made me do to him he will defend Kel whether or not it is the last thing he ever does."
"We'll just see," Sythrak said laughing as he vanished with another puff of black smoke.
"We got to get back to the Palace now!" Dom said turning to face the way they had come.
"Look," Yuki said pointing at a black shield that engulfed the Palace as they looked on in horror. They turned their horses around heading back to Corus at gallop. They were both praying to any God or Goddess listening, that it wasn't already too late for Kel.
A/N Cliffie oh I know you guys hate them but I got to go and do stuff pretty soon and I wanted you guys to read and tell me what you thought of my new plot twist. If you don't like it tell me and I might go back and change it to something else. I might do thank yous next time but that is if I'm not too lazy.
Notice I know a beta reader checks over grammar and detail, but can
anyone tell me what else they do and if I need one, and If you think I
need one and want to be it email me.
Thalia: You said later we would talk about you owning me and now is later. Not to mention I just helped you write this chapter. Krissy: It says so right here on this piece of paper that as my muse you are owned by me.
Thalia: Oh I didn't know that oh well your nice enough I guess that is okay for now.
Why are you reading me and Thalia's argument go review. Go on go cause I won't write more without at least 2 reviews and I know that isn't that hard to manage so bye bye.
Krissy