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CHAPTER THREE:THE FURBALL IS IN DA HOUSE

After Jak's learning of the fact that the DM ship was still running, and a brief freak-out by most of the goverment, he began to calm down, after all, the rest of the dark walkers were never awakened, so it was logical that they were still in cryo-sleep, and the chances that one of them had been woken up by the crash were a million to one, weren't they?

Jak trudged down the streets of new Haven, on his way to the former FL HQ, after it had been liberated, the city had begun to flourish once more, in the same way that it had when Damas was in charge, the old metal head nest had been eradicated, although people had decided to keep the canal in, and the entire stadium section had been converted from ruins to the biggest racetrack in Jak's world. The whole of the canal section was designed now to mimic some of the worlds fastest and toughest terrain. At the start of the track was the volcano section, with real lava. Then the landscape changed to the icy tundra of the marauders country, where racers often slid off and blew up against the wall. And finally some smart person had thought of the idea to make a challenge track at the end of the metal head nest, with mock metal heads to shoot, the more points the player stacked up by killing creatures, the lower his time would be. But that wasn't all, there were a vast number of side tracks and stadiums for deathmatches, turbo races, meelees, and of course, Jak had won them all with great ease.

the HQ itself had been upgraded when Freedom Tower was built as a replacement, it had been altered to be the landing pad for helcats and lurker balloons, Jak was on his way there to meet the lurker ambassodor as he arrived, Jak had always got on with the lurkers(when they weren't trying to kill him), because he respected them for their fighting skills, and also because he had liked Brutter before he had had to return to his people for political matters of state, Keira, Ashelin and Torn were already there waiting for him when he arrived.

"You're just in time Jak," rasped Torn in his gravely voice, "The wall turrets say the balloon passed about five minutes ago," he turned upwards toward the gaurd stationed at the top of the tall funnel, and yelled,"OPEN THE HATCHES!."

The gaurd did so, and in the nick of time, the large grey structure was making its slow descent in in a matter of seconds, it landed somewhat haphazardly, as if it was steered by hands more suited to holding battle-axes, but finally made it down safely, the door swung open, and out stepped, to Jak's surprise, Brutter!

"Jak hero, it good to see you again," squeakd the lurker in his funny up-and-down voice not really suited to one his size, and then continued,"Where is little orangy-warrior, Brutter has missed him so much since going back to lurker tribes."

"Daxter's on his honeymoon with Tess, he won't be back for a few days," explained Jak.

"That reminds me, where did they go, for it," piped up Keira.

"They went to Kras."

"But I thought Daxter was terrified of all the gangsters there."

"He was and still is, it was Tess's idea, she was so impressed with all Daxter's stories about how he took onn sooo many ganglords that she wanted to visit there herself, and to see her Daxie-poo in action of course"

"Oooooohhhhhh dear," giggled Keira, "Daxter must have wet himself at the thought of it."

But a small high-pitched voice coming from the door made them stop and all turn around, "All right all right, you can stop making jokes and comments now, COS THE DAXTERNATOR IS IN DA HOUSE!

THEMAKEROFLIGHT:so what did you all think, I decided i had to bring Daxter in earlier than scheduled, cos you can't really have Jak without Daxter, so now you can all be happy and review, cos look, dangles plot twist in front of readers you want this twist, nice juicy twist, huh? you do, you do, well tough you'll have to review and read the next chapter, HAH!and I'm very sorry about the length, but I'm doing a big battle scene in ch 5 so that'll be much longer.