I am horribly sorry that I haven't updated lately. I'm failing in school and currently, my brother got me sick. Thanks Shawn.
ShawnBastardsama: No problem.
coughsarcasmcough Anyway, I don't like how this story's going, it's too cheesy. So, I'm going to redo some of the chapters, but it'll take me awhile. I want your help, ALL of you to vote on some ideas, making up your own.. etc. Here are some of my ideas:
The question marks are where YOU come in. Help me there and give me ideas for how it goes please.
Bakura is in a coma for ? years. One day the nurse walks in to see him doing ? and Ryou comes immediately.
After Bakura commits suicide, but lives, Ryou quits school/his job after taking him home because he's weak from what happened
Above: Do you want Bakura truely very weak, disabled, childish, in character: mean selfish snotty but sad, etc?
When Bakura comes back from the hospital, he tries to kill Ryou's father when he comes to visit.
Above: How would you want that to happen? Should Bakura try to kill someone else, Ryou? What should happen?
So anyway, have I made my point? Pick through some of these, or make up your own.
Now for my apologies:
I'm sorry for not giving you a normal chapter. I know, whenever an author does these things I'm usually like: wtf goddamn muthafu- ya well, you get it. So don't worry, I'm not THAT heartless-
ShawnBastardsama: My ass you're not.
Shut up! I'll stab you in the balls!
ShawnBastardsama: Like Aki?
Yes, like Aki. .covers ears. Can't you tell I love my big brutha? Ah well, please choose. I'm sorry, again.