I am so sorry! I deleted the story! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I was working on putting in the new chapters and adding some stuff in the old ones when I thought I was deleting a chapter when it was the story. Im sorry...for that here is the new revised edition of the same story. Im sorry, so sorry...I want to cry...WHY! WHY IT WAS A GOOD STORY! WHY MUST THE GOOD DIE YOUNG! Oh well life will go on, so again I'm sorry I hope you find it in your heart to forgive me. But the reason why started to change the chapters was that I fell asleep reading my own story so I added a few fight scenes and this new first chapter. I have also decided that this will be a series of at least three books, maybe a third with a jumbo cross over of two other cartoons. Have any ideas you would like to see tell me I might add it or make it into one of the books. This counts sort of a prologue.
Three people walked down a well lite hall way, they were dressed in the same white lab coats with black shoes. From far they seemed Identical, just like everyone else in the institute but they weren't.
The one on the far left was a man with blue eyes, and brown hair, his name was Dr. Alonzo, also known as Big Brother. Big Brother was the left hand man of the institute, he was in charge of all the boys and the mind of the children.
The one of the far right was a woman with grey eyes and white hair, her name was Dr. Vicario, also known as Big Sister. Big Sister was the right hand woman of the institute, she was in charge of the daughters and of the children's bodies.
Finally there was the one in the middle he had black hair and red eyes, his name was Dr. Vega, also known as Father. Father was in charge of everything, he was the creator, the savior of the children in VAAPP.
They neared the end of the hall way, Alonzo pushed the doors open allowing Father and Vicario to pass through. On the other side of the doors was a balcony that over saw a large gym, type of room. Inside the room were a bunch of people that could not be picked out as individuals.
Father now standing in the front of the other two, took his hand out in a salute to the people below. "My children today, is your evaluation, the day in which we shall determine if you are ready to serve our cause!" he yelled. The faceless crowed roared. "Alonzo give me the roster of our candidates." Alonzo stepped forward and handed father a blue clipboard.
Father turned agin to the crowed. "Will the following stay here to receive your test, from the TS division will D-52590, and B-43090. The rest of you are to be tested with your big brother."
Alonzo, and Vicario left towards the way they had come leaving four individuals and Father in the big room.
From the four selected children one stood out from the three, her name was D-52590, she was Fathers favorite and was expected to win the position of this apprentice for the upcoming battle.
What he didn't know was that his perfect apprentice had learned the truth of this reality a truth that she could not stand to ignore.
Father pressed a button on his wrist watch and the balcony lowered itself to the floor level in front of the two daughters.
They both wore the issued uniform a wight tang top, a pair of white cargo pants, a pair of black boots, a pair of black gloves that covered there arms up to their elbows, and a black belt.
Just like everyone here they could only be identified was by their skin, hair, or eye color. D-52590 had raven black hair and icy blue eyes, B-43090 had blond hair and see green eyes.
I'm glad to see that you both have excited the expectation from your bigger brothers and sisters, but only one of you will win the honor. The test is simple an obstacle will be set and your goal is to fight each other until only one stands, or until one gives up." Father said as he walked around the girl.
Father raised his hand and snapped his finger, the balcony raised itself up again. Then the floor moved open to revile a pool of water, then metal plat forms from different levels of the air appeared. The girls were now on opposite side of the large room.
D-52590 was standing there, looking bored. He sickness me, does he really think I'm going to do this.
"Let the challenge begin." The first one to attack was B, she shot a tunnel of water in D direction. D was faster than the attack and easily dogged it by jumping directly up.
B moved the tunnel up towards D. D kicked off the wall towards on of the metal plat forms. She spun in the air and landed on it with her two feet.
"Coward!" B yelled at D. B jumped up onto the nearest platform, which was next to D's. B jumped up, closed her fist and headed towards D at full speed.
D caught B's fist inches from her face, she pulled B's face close to hers as she pulled them both down into the water. "You don't have to fight, he's lying to us, let me help you B." D said as they fell down into the water. SPLASH!
B burst out of the water almost instantly above a tornado of water. (If you haven't guessed what her power is god help u cuz in not)
D on the other hand struggled to get out of the water before being sucked into the tornado of water. She looked around for something her mind could move. THERE! To her left was a platform.
D concentrated hard on moving it towards B and knocking her down. The platform did as the told it to, as B fell. D took this chance to talk to her again, she pushed against the wall toward B and caught her just before she fell into the water again.
"B listen to me, you don't have to do this, we can get out of here." BANG! Both girls crashed into the opposite wall.
B pushed D into the water with her legs. Shit. D though as she found her self in the worst place to be, the water.
Suddenly D felt the water move into a tunnel with her in the middle, leaving no escape. Thinking quickly D concentrated on B's mind. B I don't want to do this but you leave me no choice, please stop. D thought then B responded. Why should I D? So you could win the apprentice spot next to father? "This isn't going to work." D said.
D concentrated again, but this time the tunnel disappeared around her leaving her ten feet in mid air. Quickly she fell to the nearest plat form. "Coward, why don't you fight lie we should, D?"
"Because the cause I swore my life to is a lie, its all a lie. Don't you get it B, the world never ended and this, this is all a lie." That was all Father needed to hear from D to call in the security.
"D-52590 you have been a disappointment to me and your brother in. What lies do you tell your faithful sister B-43090." Father said as the room returned to its normal state.
"They are not lie, but the truth of your's." D-52590 responded.
"Really, and how do you now that they are lie, better yet were do you get your lies?" Father asked, this time you could hear the fait foot steps of the security coming into the room.
"I don't care what you think, I wont be lied to anymore." D said. She was to concentrated in keeping her emotions in check that she failed to notice that the security had surrounded her and all exits to and from the room.
"Look around you child there is now where for yo to go let alone live to tell your lies to anyone else. Take her into custody." Five of the men with guns close to her moved forward ready to take her away.
"No! I have had it with your lies, you will not kill me!" D said as she backed away from the men. "My dare child I'm afraid that yo have no choice for here I make the rules, I control this place and there's nothing you could do about it."
The men jumped on D in a dog pile fashion. No I will not let him, no no. The wait of the men was to much for her, she could feel her self slip away. Then something inside her something new stepped forth.
She could feel the change in her body, the power and determination of her will, the will to survive. A wight light surrounded the pile as D changed in appearance. (We all know what this is. LOL)
The light pushed of the men, there in D place stood the same person in a new light. Her raven black hair had been transformed to a snow white color, her eyes no longer an icy blue but a glowing green.
Then wight garments were now black, and her boots, gloves and belt were black as the night sky. An aurora stood around D as she looked up at a surprised father.
"H...H... How the hell did you do that?" Father began to step backwards towards the door but D was faster. In a blink of an eye she was behind him.
"I said that you were never going to lie again." Her eyes shown with furry and revenge. Father grabbed D arm and threw her off the . D fell a few feet before she instinctively caught her self in mid air.
The security took this as their chance and opened fire at the girl, they met their target with out miss. D fell the last remaining feet till the ground. Get up, you can do this! D do this for you for humanity... D's eyes shot open, this time she stood up and allowed her emotions to go.
The room was covered in a blinding light as D's screams could be heard. "Ahhhhh!" This was her last stand, the last thing she remembered to.
The next thing she new, she was in a new world and a man in a blue uniform was standing in front of her. "What are you doing here?"
ITS OVER!
For anyone that had read the old one this is a good clif, but those who have know who that was. I will leave the explanation to this chapter till the big I. Ahahahaha I love this so much, I hope you too, I have to get some work don on the last chapters. By the end of the day I should have the five chapters up and ready to go with the six.