Gomen ne, minna-san! I know that the first chapter was pretty confusing, but this one will hopefully be better. Anywaz, here are your review answers:
Syaoran's Lover: Arigato!
pretty n cute bunny: here is your update!
StarAngel07: update is here!
Cool: thank you!
bunni-chan: I went as fast as I could... & here it is, ne!
Sarah Lyn 86: arigato! 2nd chapter is here!
Snick3rDooDl3: To answer your question NO! They will NOT be like this inthe near future. It is just the first chapter, and my first time writing, so I just decided to make it short and see what you guyz thought. I will probably update frequently anywaz, sooo don't worry! Arigato!
maggie: Arigato! thanx!
Out There: I know that it does need revising. Your right! It is awkward and scattered! You are VERY WISE! THANX! And I know that it is TOO "raw" as you said... hopefully the next chapters will be a success.
Serenathy: He did just give up on her. HE tried so many times that, even him, gave up. I know that it was kind of short, but what can I say, it was my first time writing and I didn't know if you would like it, or not.
asami-chan: A lot of stories that I have read are when they are married, or him as the teacher, soo... I just thought that it would be kinda cool if I put those two ideas together and went from there! Arigato!
Now, I know that the first chapter was kinda confusing, but just deal with it, onegai? Arigato.
Now, without further a due...
Chapter 2
"Now class, we are all going to introduce ourselves to me sense I don't know some of you." hesaid as he wore a very cocky smile. "My name is Mr. Chiba Mamoru."
"My name is Kinomoto Sakura."
"My name is Inuyasha."
"My name is Kino Makoto."
"My name is Aino Minako."
"My name is Hino Rei."
"My name is Mizuko Ami."
Usagi started to sweat. After this person, she was next! Kami-sama!
"My name is Furuhata Motoki." ( HAI! Motoki-onii-chan is in high school in this fic!.) The ime was here...
"M-My name is TsukinoUsagi." she said really fast then sat right down.
Mamoru smiled slyly, "Miss. Tsukino, that is NOT what is on your bio here up on my desk. It says that your nae is Mrs. Chiba... he pauses for everyone to gasp -- except for the senshi (WHO ARE NOT SENSHI IN THIS FIC)-- Wait a minute... that is my last name! Hmmm... what a councidence," he ended with a smile.
"Fine, my name is CHIBA Usagi! Are ya happy now!" she accidentally blew up.
Mamoru had a stern look on his face, as he stared at her, "Class Dismissed"
Every student walked out of the classroom... "All except you, Mrs. Chiba..." The door slamed as the last student walked out the door, "... Mamoru."
Hi guz! I know that it wasshort as well, but I have my reasons!But, I think that it was a little better. Besides, you should be happy that I am updating the next day instead of having to wait for two or three weeks, like you do with other authors...no offence...It would have been longer, but my ENTIRE chapter got deleted off of my account, and I had to start all over again. And I was really tired and my hands hurt like heck and EVERYTHING. But since I did that, I will make the next chapter longer than both of those combound. Sooo, soorry! Oh, and don't forget to review for me!
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Anywaz, Arigato! Ja Ne!
