Thanks for reviewing my first Chapter

I have to apologize for the script but suckers who cared about that

I had a lot of complaints about luke. That he does believe in god. " i know!" it was necessary I thought.

About my spelling I'm from the Netherlands what can you expect for a secondary language

I'm kind of stuck on the clown thing but i do know how im going to end the fight between Joan and Ryan

Chapter 2

Helen Giardi is sitting at the kitchen table staring at a photo of Ryan hunter. She smiles ´He´s such a nice boy.´ All of the sudden she felt a shudder over her back "Clowns...he´s afraid of the clowns!"Helen said while Joan was walking into the kitchen..

and she couldn´t help overhearing the last words her mother said. A little bell jingled in her head. "what about the clowns?". Helen looks surprised "you know about the clowns?"

Adam walked into the libary. He looked around for grace. Her father said she´d be here. While adam was luring through the bookshelves he saw grace. She was sitting behind a omputer and smiling. Adam creeps behind her and read what she is typing.

Grace: Com´on dude, Chatting is for Idiots, let's go to the park.

Science Fan: Grace! Don't call me dude and I'm no Idiot!

Grace: No you are a science Nerd! But we can make out if you come…

Adam coughs " Hi Grace" Grace jumps from her seat desperately trying to put away the screen. " How long have you been standing there?" Adam smiled "you're going to make out with a Science Fan, why is Luke calling himself a Science Fan?" Grace blushed "Dude you shouldn't be putting your nose in someone else's business." "I know, Grace. Can I trust you?"

"Of course you can trust me, dude. We've been like best friends forever."

" It's about Jane" Grace sighs "Dude, I'm not helping you two to get back together!" A big smile appears on Adam's face. "you don't have to help, we are already back together. But that's not what I was willing to talk to you about. We've got to help Jane fight this Ryan guy." Grace hugs Adam "congratulations, Dude! Why should we be fighting Ryan?" Adam looks uncomfortable at Grace "´cause God ask her to."