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mean a lot to me. I know the spelling and grammar wasn't all that great in
my past chapter was really bad but I didn't have a beta reader or
spell/grammar check but I do now so I hope it will all be better.
~~And for all those who reviewed and said I should write for myself and
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my writing to see what I could do better. If you've read some of my other
stories I've put up 'chapter hostages' like that before. but even if I
don't get any reviews I would still continue to write. I have a few
chapters written it's just that sometimes to get the extra boost to have
myself post them I want to make sure people are still reading them. I don't
know if I made any sense but anyway here's the story.
~W~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`` "Yeah Draco I do why?" I answered wondering what my cell phone had to do with well anything.
"Is it charged?"
"Yeah"
"Can I barrow it?"
"Why?"
"To call the station" he tried to be innocent while saying this.
"Why? Would you need to call the station u have no love life."
"Let me see it and you'll find out."
"I grudgingly gave up my precious phone if only to find out why he was calling a love line.
~D~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~```
As Willow gave over her phone and I dialed the number to the station I began to get nervous. Which is a very un-Malfoy like thing to do I know but, hey so was being gay and adopting so I guess I can't do much complaining.
The phone at the station rang and a woman who I can only guess was the producer picked up the phone.
"Hello?"
"Yes. Hello. Is this Harry's love line?" I asked her.
"Yes may I have your name sir?"
"Yes it's Draco."
"Alright, please hold for a few mins. And we'll see if we can get you on air."
"Alright thank you." I said and soon after was put on hold to elevator music.
"Hey Draco why are you calling a love line?" I know it was killing Willow not knowing but if I did I would have to explain about the wizarding world and I just couldn't do that, she wouldn't understand and she'd think I was insane. not that she already doesn't. After, about 20mins. Of listening to mindless love babble on the radio and the elevator music on the phone the woman I had talked to before came on and told me they didn't have any time for more calls but if he were to call back tomorrow his name would be on a list to go on the air. He thanked the lady and returned the phone to Willow. ~W~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Draco just handed me my phone back and looked out the window. What is up with that? He better not think he's getting out of this so easily.
"Well?"
"Well what?" He's still looking out the window. Why won't he look at me? Oh this has got to be good.
"What was with the phone call and how come you hung up?"
"They didn't have time for my call but said if I call back tomorrow I could get on. So that's what I'm going to do."
"Okay. But you do realize that you didn't answer my first question."
"I didn't?"
"No you didn't"
"Well then I guess you'll never know." I could see the smirk on his face even though his head was facing to the side. He just knew this was killing me and the little sadist was enjoying every moment of it.
"Dray tell me now or.."I said letting my sentence drift off and putting a smile on my face so sweet it was almost literally dripping with honey.
"Or what?" he asked raising one of his salon plucked eyebrows.
"Or I'll paste your nude baby pics on my web site for all your friends to see." My smile got even bigger as I saw the smirk drop from his face faster than a bowling ball from an airplane.
"You wouldn't dare."
"Oh I would."
"Damn you. Look I can't tell you why. Okay."
"And why not?"
"Because it has to do with my school days and you know my rules about talking about that point in my life."
"Oh yeah." Draco has this thing about his past any time you try to get something out of him about it his eyes get dark and tears form and he just snaps at you. It's really scary. Or if he's not being scary he'll just change the subject. It's the same with his family. It bugs me to end and he knows it but hey it's his life what can I do?
"So Dray..did you hear Jake's mom Pansy is dating Mellony's dad Justin"
"Justin Finch-fletchly?"(sp?)
"mmmmmhmmmm.." We talked like that for the rest of the train ride ~Harry~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Well that's all for me today I'll be back on again tomorrow at noon." I turned off my mic and start to pick up my things.
"Hey Harry great show today"
"Thanks Debbie"
"SO where you off to tonight?"
"Ahhh I'm just headin' on home. You?"
"What? What happened to Vic?"
"Let's just say things weren't working out"
"mmmhmmm.. Tell me. You know you're not getting home till you do."
"We got to talking and.well as it turned out the only thing we really had in common was the sex."
"Ahhhhhhhhhh.. yeah well he was an ass-hole anyway."
"Yeah but damn he was good in bed." We both laugh said goodnight and I left to go back to my flat uptown. You know I find it really funny that day after day I get phone call after phone call and help people with their love lives and half the time I get calls back from people saying thank you and I can't even get a boyfriend to last longer than a month.
I get home turn on my lights and drop my stuff on the ground with my keys on the table.I noticed a smashed vase on the ground that was not smashed when I left. There could only be one culprit.
"DAVID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
A boy about 17 dressed In black baggy shorts a white muscle t and an open green button up shirt came slidding out of the door which may or may not have lead to the kitchen seeing as the boy was holding a sandwich.
"Yeah dad?" the boy, David, asked through a mouth full of chewed food.
"what happened to the vase?"
"Uhhhhh. the dog knocked it over."
"Funny. You know the supper doesn't allow dog's in the building."
"I know it knocked it over on its way out."
"Riiiight. Give me some of that sandwich." I said grabbing half out of his hand and taking a bite, chewing and swallowing it." Oh and you're grounded for the next 2 day."
"Only 2 day?"
"Yeah why you want more?" I ask while I take my shoes off and plop down on the couch.
"Nope that's okay" David said as he plopped down on a chair near me and flipped on the t.v. to VH1. David is my son. I had had him during an affair with Cho Chang which ended in court 3 years ago over a custody battle for David.
"So besides destroying my things what did you do today?"
"Well not much I got up around 2 then I got a sandwich then I did some painting then I got on the computer then I got another sandwich and then you came home and stole half of my sandwich and now I'm here."
"Wow you had one exciting day."
"Such is the life of a teenager. SO what did you do?"
"Listened to music and helped pathetic people with their love problems."
"Hmmmm.. Did you call into your own show?"
"Haha. No. now shut up and watch t.v."
"Awwwwwww. how bout we go shopping tomorrow. That'll make you feel better."
"You know not all gays like to shop. But you are so damn lucky I do." After laughing and more stereo-typical teasings from my son ending in a huge pillow figh whit couch cushions instead of pillows we popped in a movie, make some popcorn and settle down for the night.
A/N: Well there you go. I know it doesn't make up for the long wait but I'll be updating more now if that helps. Any way revie pwease :-D
~W~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`` "Yeah Draco I do why?" I answered wondering what my cell phone had to do with well anything.
"Is it charged?"
"Yeah"
"Can I barrow it?"
"Why?"
"To call the station" he tried to be innocent while saying this.
"Why? Would you need to call the station u have no love life."
"Let me see it and you'll find out."
"I grudgingly gave up my precious phone if only to find out why he was calling a love line.
~D~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~```
As Willow gave over her phone and I dialed the number to the station I began to get nervous. Which is a very un-Malfoy like thing to do I know but, hey so was being gay and adopting so I guess I can't do much complaining.
The phone at the station rang and a woman who I can only guess was the producer picked up the phone.
"Hello?"
"Yes. Hello. Is this Harry's love line?" I asked her.
"Yes may I have your name sir?"
"Yes it's Draco."
"Alright, please hold for a few mins. And we'll see if we can get you on air."
"Alright thank you." I said and soon after was put on hold to elevator music.
"Hey Draco why are you calling a love line?" I know it was killing Willow not knowing but if I did I would have to explain about the wizarding world and I just couldn't do that, she wouldn't understand and she'd think I was insane. not that she already doesn't. After, about 20mins. Of listening to mindless love babble on the radio and the elevator music on the phone the woman I had talked to before came on and told me they didn't have any time for more calls but if he were to call back tomorrow his name would be on a list to go on the air. He thanked the lady and returned the phone to Willow. ~W~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Draco just handed me my phone back and looked out the window. What is up with that? He better not think he's getting out of this so easily.
"Well?"
"Well what?" He's still looking out the window. Why won't he look at me? Oh this has got to be good.
"What was with the phone call and how come you hung up?"
"They didn't have time for my call but said if I call back tomorrow I could get on. So that's what I'm going to do."
"Okay. But you do realize that you didn't answer my first question."
"I didn't?"
"No you didn't"
"Well then I guess you'll never know." I could see the smirk on his face even though his head was facing to the side. He just knew this was killing me and the little sadist was enjoying every moment of it.
"Dray tell me now or.."I said letting my sentence drift off and putting a smile on my face so sweet it was almost literally dripping with honey.
"Or what?" he asked raising one of his salon plucked eyebrows.
"Or I'll paste your nude baby pics on my web site for all your friends to see." My smile got even bigger as I saw the smirk drop from his face faster than a bowling ball from an airplane.
"You wouldn't dare."
"Oh I would."
"Damn you. Look I can't tell you why. Okay."
"And why not?"
"Because it has to do with my school days and you know my rules about talking about that point in my life."
"Oh yeah." Draco has this thing about his past any time you try to get something out of him about it his eyes get dark and tears form and he just snaps at you. It's really scary. Or if he's not being scary he'll just change the subject. It's the same with his family. It bugs me to end and he knows it but hey it's his life what can I do?
"So Dray..did you hear Jake's mom Pansy is dating Mellony's dad Justin"
"Justin Finch-fletchly?"(sp?)
"mmmmmhmmmm.." We talked like that for the rest of the train ride ~Harry~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Well that's all for me today I'll be back on again tomorrow at noon." I turned off my mic and start to pick up my things.
"Hey Harry great show today"
"Thanks Debbie"
"SO where you off to tonight?"
"Ahhh I'm just headin' on home. You?"
"What? What happened to Vic?"
"Let's just say things weren't working out"
"mmmhmmm.. Tell me. You know you're not getting home till you do."
"We got to talking and.well as it turned out the only thing we really had in common was the sex."
"Ahhhhhhhhhh.. yeah well he was an ass-hole anyway."
"Yeah but damn he was good in bed." We both laugh said goodnight and I left to go back to my flat uptown. You know I find it really funny that day after day I get phone call after phone call and help people with their love lives and half the time I get calls back from people saying thank you and I can't even get a boyfriend to last longer than a month.
I get home turn on my lights and drop my stuff on the ground with my keys on the table.I noticed a smashed vase on the ground that was not smashed when I left. There could only be one culprit.
"DAVID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
A boy about 17 dressed In black baggy shorts a white muscle t and an open green button up shirt came slidding out of the door which may or may not have lead to the kitchen seeing as the boy was holding a sandwich.
"Yeah dad?" the boy, David, asked through a mouth full of chewed food.
"what happened to the vase?"
"Uhhhhh. the dog knocked it over."
"Funny. You know the supper doesn't allow dog's in the building."
"I know it knocked it over on its way out."
"Riiiight. Give me some of that sandwich." I said grabbing half out of his hand and taking a bite, chewing and swallowing it." Oh and you're grounded for the next 2 day."
"Only 2 day?"
"Yeah why you want more?" I ask while I take my shoes off and plop down on the couch.
"Nope that's okay" David said as he plopped down on a chair near me and flipped on the t.v. to VH1. David is my son. I had had him during an affair with Cho Chang which ended in court 3 years ago over a custody battle for David.
"So besides destroying my things what did you do today?"
"Well not much I got up around 2 then I got a sandwich then I did some painting then I got on the computer then I got another sandwich and then you came home and stole half of my sandwich and now I'm here."
"Wow you had one exciting day."
"Such is the life of a teenager. SO what did you do?"
"Listened to music and helped pathetic people with their love problems."
"Hmmmm.. Did you call into your own show?"
"Haha. No. now shut up and watch t.v."
"Awwwwwww. how bout we go shopping tomorrow. That'll make you feel better."
"You know not all gays like to shop. But you are so damn lucky I do." After laughing and more stereo-typical teasings from my son ending in a huge pillow figh whit couch cushions instead of pillows we popped in a movie, make some popcorn and settle down for the night.
A/N: Well there you go. I know it doesn't make up for the long wait but I'll be updating more now if that helps. Any way revie pwease :-D
