EPISODE 4: Aw shit!
HEY EVRYONE! Reviews I have so far:
Kite Kiro
Thanks for telling me my story was getting better.
Crobdan
Crobdan, you're my favorite author cause your so nice. There is no doubt about it you have the funniest FLCL fic.
Girl With The Hat
At first I thought you were an evil heartless whore. But your not. You merely hate Poke'mon. I do to.
Fanjimmy
Thanx, I'm glad you like the gore. There will be a lot in chapters 4 and 5.
Moonside Mango
You were just telling me POLITLEY that my story sucked. And it does. So you are not a flamer. If anyone hates me POLITLEY tell me. Flaming is useless. If you still want to die, e-mail me. Hell, If it got me in a fiction I wouldn't mind dieing a heroic death.
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Naota: Aw s***!
Ninamori: Um, can someone tell me WHAT THE h*** is that?"
They all looked at Ninamori, who never swears.
The thing moved out of the dark revealing its hideous body. The body of the monster was covered in a layer of slime. It had four tentacles on its arms and had yellow eyes.
Those eyes… They reminded Naota of her… -
Nan: H***, stop staring and shoot!
Firing shells from her Winchester. Getting the cue Crobdan raised his Colt 45 and unloaded a hole clip. Naota fired his UZIs at the thing, noting he never needs to reload them, he fired like a madman. The bullets all grazed the flesh,
Crobdan: Umm, this is bad
Mayumi: Then put down your play boy magazines and help!
Crobdan: Do I have to?
Mayumi: I have all that anyways! Come on whatever happened to us?
Crobdan: He came. (Points at Chris (Siblings writer) who suddenly appears.)
Chris: What?
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In a tunnel down, Kitsurubami, followed by agents Baxter and Moonside Mango, walked down the halls.
Kits: (Kisturbami) Ok, now we need to kill the thing.
Baxter: Duh.
Mango: Can I give your plan some constructive critisism?
Kits: No.
ROAR!
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So it's a short chapter. So its still a chappie.