Cheddar: As you may find out i have no idea what Luffy's ship name is... i feel terible so R&R!
but mainly REVIEW!
Chapter 2
Captain Gama's ship silently crept closer to the Merry Goat
"Okay boys we'll need to get as close as we can to that ship before night fall…" His crew nodded vigorously and they opened the main sails wider.
'For what you don't know Hikari is that my crew and I have a special cloaking device that only works in the day… at night we'll come for you!' Captain Gama thought evilly.
later that evening
Captain Gama's ship stopped right next to the Merry Goat and he tossed a rope over to the deck and he craftily walked across. When he got to the other side he looked around.
"She might be in one of the cabins so go quietly!" Gama whispered to his crew. They nodded and went silently down below the deck. Gama climbed the rope ladder and when he got to the top he found Hikari sleeping peacefully. He grinned and he pulled out a handkerchief and doused it in a sleeping draft. He held it up to her mouth and nose so she wouldn't wake up. After twenty seconds he took it off and he picked her up and he climbed down. He gathered his crew around the mast and he engraved his pirate symbol into the mast along with a note. It read:
Zolo,
I have Hikari. You can have her back if you can catch our ship!
Pirate Captain Gama.
Gama grinned and he craftily walked back across the rope and back on to his ship. He went down below his deck and into his chambers. He laid Hikari on his bed. He smiled and he gently moved a strand of her hair off of her face. He walked over to the door and he went out.
Zolo woke up and he went outside to the deck and he side glanced at the mast and kept going then he stopped and he ran back to the mast and he read the note. He slammed his fist into the mast.
"LUFFY! SANJI! USOPP! NAMI! GET UP HERE NOW!" Zolo bellowed out. They all rushed out to his cry and he looked out furiously at the sea.
"Gama took her…!" He cursed under his breath.
"We have to get her back!" Luffy cried out and every one agreed. They ran to all the different sides of the ship and started looking for Gama and his ship. They didn't find any thing, so Hikari was currently stuck on Gama's ship until nightfall.