Chapter 2
Disclaimers are as you know them well.
The next evening, after Lu Bu had argued with Dong Zhou about leaving for a business deal, yet refusing to give the name to the inviter, he decided he would sneak out, and go anyways. C'mon, As if the 'great' Dong Zhou could stop him from doing as he wished.
Lu Bu hopped on his gift, a horse, The Red Hare. Truly a horse among horses, the greatest of all. The perfect horse for the man among men. Lu Bu rode off, and shortly, he came upon the encampments of Wang Yun.
Wang Yun welcomed Lu Bu with open arms. They first enjoyed the fine wines, which Lu Bu enjoyed to a great degree. Then the entertainment began. Soft music began to play from behind a curtain, and a young woman, dressed in a soft delicate pink dress, came out, and danced.
Lu Bu stared in awe. She was amazing! Beautiful! How could he accept any other marriage proposals when he was so swept away by this maiden? Lu Bu knew he had to have her. Any way he could, he would have her.
"Now, wasn't that entertaining?" Wang Yun grinned slyly. "Now, on to the business deal. That maiden, her name is Diao Chan. She is a beautiful creature, isn't she?" Wang Yun probed at Lu Bu to see if he was interested.
"She certainly is, by why are you telling me this? Is she not simply the entertainment girl?"
"Oh certainly she is entertainment, but she is also like my own daughter. I raised the girl from when she was young, we are very close!"
"I see... Please continue...?"
"Yes, yes, come here, my darling girl." Wang Yun waved a hand to her, and motioned for her to seat at the end of the table, but on the side closest to Lu Bu.
"Introduce yourself my dear. It is only polite." Wang Yun smugly smiled to her, knowing the plot was working.
"Greetings, master Lu Bu," She took a slight bow, due to her being seated. "I am Diao Chan, a Handmaiden, Singer, and Dancer under lord Wang Yun. It is a honour to meet you."
Lu Bu extended a hand, and took hers in his. He petted her hand slightly, then dropped it.
"Now, I see you like her? How about, for peace between our two rules, will you accept a marriage proposal from this maiden? Our two rules must be united as one, and I see you two belong together." Wang Yun smiled.
Lu Bu eagerly nodded. A little back in his mind, though, the wine was fogging his thinking, and didn't really process the thoughts all thoroughly.
"Ahh... excellent... We shall prepare her, and send her in 3 days." Wang Yun smiled, even wider.
During that time, Dong Zhou received an invitation, and delightfully accepted it, to come the next day for fine wines, entertainment, and something, which was to be a surprise.
The next morning, Dong Zhou prepared to leave, and without giving Lu Bu any message, he left and couldn't contain his excitement for such a surprise.
And rewritten chapter 2. Not as many edits as 1, but it flows better. Now on to chapter 3...