The next morning, at 0755 hours, Steve is already at Captain Hamilton's door, eager to start the day. Well, if he's being really honest with himself, he's eager to get this briefing done so he can go in search of Catherine, but that is beside the point. He's out of luck, though – his Superior Officer is running late, this morning. By the time Steve exits the Navy building, it's almost 0930 hours, and he's now annoyed at all this waste of time. A thought fleetingly crosses his mind, but he dismisses it almost instantly – the CIA would not proceed without him, would they? As he enters the CIA building, engrossed in his thoughts, he immediately spots Officer Morrison in deep conversation with Catherine, both apparently waiting for him.
"Lieutenant Commander, good morning. We were waiting for you, to get started," the man says, pleasantly.
"Yes, sorry, my briefing with Captain Hamilton took longer than expected, I couldn't get out any sooner," he replies, stealing a sideways glance at Catherine. She looks annoyed, still.
"Well, you should get going, if you want to get there in time. Good luck to you all." And with that, he looks at Catherine, nods and leaves.
Catherine starts walking, at a pace that says she's still annoyed, but trying not to be rude.
"Good morning, Catherine." Her full name comes out of his lips without thought, but Steve immediately feels that he's trying for a level of intimacy that is, somehow, wrong, right now. He doesn't correct himself, though. That would be bringing attention to the matter.
Nevertheless, Catherine is quick to point out his mistake to him. "Good morning, 'Sir'."
"Lieutenant, can we please…" he tries, with his best conciliatory tone.
But she's already interrupting him, as they near their vehicle and opens a map on the hood. "According to the informant's data, we should start our search here," and she points to a spot on the map, marked by blue concentric lines. The army squad that is accompanying them also gathers round, to hear her indications. "And keep our attention on the entrance to the Pass the man spoke of. Where the insurgents are supposed to come out of. If his intel is to be trusted. We'll see, I guess." She looks around, everyone seems to be clear on the information. "Are we ready to go?"
They get going, and by the end of the second hour, Steve is starting to regret having decided to ride in the same vehicle as Catherine. She seems disturbed by his presence, and even their normal 'we don't know each other, other than through this mission' isn't working anymore. She refuses to look at him or exchange any words with him, and it's leaving everyone else uncomfortable.
After about four hours, the convoy makes a stop and the soldiers leave the confines of the vehicle, leaving both of them alone, inside. Steve sighs, looking at her sideways, but when Catherine still does not utter a word, he makes a decision, defeated.
"I think it's best we ride the rest of the way in separate vehicles. We're making everybody else here uncomfortable."
Catherine huffs, annoyed. "I don't give a damn about the others. My main concern here is me. But you're right. We do need to spend some time apart. We're on a mission where people may lose their lives, it's no time to be dealing with anything else."
"I had hoped you'd be willing to talk about what happened last night." At that, she pins him with a glare.
"No, I have no intention of going back to that subject. Ever. And I'll thank you not to knock on my door again," she throws at him, looking away.
The rest of the convoy's journey is quite uneventful and as the group reaches the foot of the hill, they spot armed lookouts, local tribesmen, guarding the entrance to the Pass. So, for a few hours and until it gets dark, they wait, patiently. Both Catherine and Steve assume their "mission" mode, all thoughts of personal differences now aside. They're professional enough to know that everybody's lives depend on each other. Here, there is no room for grievances or resentment.
At around 2230 hours, the lookouts start to congregate to the opening of the Pass, clearly waiting for the insurgents to arrive. After about 20 minutes, the first few emerge from the belly of the mountain and are taken to vehicles waiting nearby. Catherine and Steve look at each other, in a silent conversation: "Shall we attack now, or wait until Al-Nazri shows up?" The men continue to pour and time runs out, they're out of options. Steve moves to the area where the vehicles are, taking a few of the soldiers with him, while Catherine stays in her lookout point, as backup, should there be any problem with Steve or the soldiers.
Despite their guns, the armed lookouts are quickly overpowered, and the soldiers manage to also capture the five men who came out of the Pass and were getting ready to drive away. However, this means that they alert the other lookouts, who quickly move to the inside of the Pass and disappear. By the time the soldiers reach the entrance, there's no one there. After debating their options, a decision is made: they will all return to the Base, as not knowing how many paths exist inside the belly of the mountain would most certainly get them all killed. They attach a charge of explosives to the entrance, blow it up and get back on their military convoy, with their prisoners. A message is sent back to the Base, warning them that the insurgents may very well double back and exit from where they entered.
By the time the convoy returns to Shindand, it's almost 0700 hours. Steve only has time to take a shower and change, before there's a knock on his door. It's the petty officer from the first day, again, with a note from Captain Hamilton, asking him to come see him at once. Sighing, he thanks the messenger and finishes getting ready. His debrief with Captain Hamilton and a few other Navy personnel takes up a good part of the morning, as the men try to study the best option to move forward. Surveillance of the Pass's exit, on their end, has yielded no results and Steve is feeling frustrated. Suddenly, Captain Hamilton receives a note and breaks out a smile, looking at Steve:
"Commander, all is not lost. It seems that a CIA team got word that one of the insurgents never made it to the Pass, last night. He was caught in the village, hiding out in one of the homes."
"CIA team, Sir?" Steve says, suspicious. "Why wasn't I called in?"
"You were in here, with us, and apparently the information was very time sensitive," Hamilton says, understanding Steve. "Commander, just be happy that the man was found, as it is, with minimal inconvenience to you."
Setting his annoyance aside, he's now curious. "Who is the prisoner, Sir? Do they know?"
Captain Hamilton reads the note once more, to make sure he's giving out the right information. "Name's Ahmed Zahed, from what our informants tell us."
Steve smiles, once again. "He was Al-Nazri's second in command in the bombings! He must know where Al-Nazri is." And then, turning serious, he straightens his body and says: "Sir, permission to interrogate the prisoner?"
Captain Hamilton smiles again, already half expecting it. "Of course, Lieutenant Commander. As soon as we're done."
An hour later, Steve goes in search of Officer Morrison in the CIA building. As soon as he enters, there's a whirlwind of people hurrying past, and a sense of urgency hangs in the air. Something has definitely happened, but no one even notices he's there, so he walks to the elevator and presses his floor. Exiting the cab, he moves in the direction of the office he's looking for, but immediately spots Officer Morrison a few feet away, belting out orders to a few subordinates. The mocking countenance of the man is gone; whatever this is, it was serious enough that everyone looks scared, or sad, Steve's not sure. Finally locking eyes with the man, Steve signals to him and Morrison starts to move in his direction. As he reaches Steve, he says, matter of factly:
"Lieutenant Commander, Captain Hamilton tells me you want to interrogate the prisoner."
"As we had agreed, yes, I do. But… what happened?"
"Nothing that concerns non-CIA personnel. Come on, I'll take you to the prisoner."
Still suspicious, but aware that he can't argue with the CIA, Steve lets himself be guided to the cells, in the basement, where he is led to a room where Zahed is already waiting.
"We haven't interrogated him, yet, Commander. We were waiting, in case you wanted to have first crack at him, as agreed," and he almost sounds human, civil, amenable. He tries to crack a smile at Steve, but fails miserably. Steve wonders if it's because he hardly ever does it.
"Thank you. Will Lieutenant Rollins be joining us?" and as he says it, a flicker of alarm burns in the man's eyes. However, as quickly as it has surfaced, it's gone.
"No, unfortunately Lieutenant Rollins is unavailable."
He lingers there, looking almost apologetic and Steve starts to get an eerie feeling about the whole exchange. Suddenly, Morrison's mobile phone rings and, looking relieved, he excuses himself, leaving Steve outside the prisoner's door, all alone.
Zahed has little to add to what Steve already knows; he was hired by Al-Nazri to purchase the explosives and fly them to the island, under the radar, using a connection and his underground network of criminals. He was paid fifty thousand dollars for the job and, a day before the bombs were set to go off, he returned to Afghanistan. He knows Al-Nazri also returned, via Pakistan, and the last he heard, his employer was supposed to have crossed into Pakistan again, the night before. If he managed to or not, Zahed has no idea. He hasn't heard of him, of from him, since. But he warns Steve that Al-Nazri is very well connected, in the region. He also discloses that there had been more than three targets, making Steve cringe, but Al-Nazri had become impatient about the authorities snooping around their safe house, and had decided to go ahead with just the three. Steve informs the man that he will be subject to a CIA interrogation, as soon as he is done with him, and that after that, he will be taken to Hawai'i to stand trial for the murder of 13 people. When he comes out of the room, Morrison is waiting.
"Well?"
"Have you been listening in?"
"No, sorry, I had to sort out another emergency," and he seems genuine." What did you get out of him?"
"Not much more than what we already knew. He was hired to do the job by Al-Nazri, who paid him $50,000. He flew back the day before the bombings, never saw him. Told me Al-Nazri entered Afghanistan through Pakistan and that he suspects he fled that way again. But he hasn't seen or heard from him since before he left for Hawai'i."
"We sent some men to the entrance of the Pass. No one has come back out through it, so we can assume there are alternate escape routes through the mountain. How do you want to proceed?"
"Captain Hamilton seems to think that there is no point in staying here. If Al-Nazri resurfaces, it'll take some time."
"I agree. He's not a stupid man, nor is he devoid of help. The smartest thing for him to do, right now, is to lay low. Until we forget he exists."
"I'll never forget he exists, for as long as I live. And neither will the families of the dead and injured."
"Don't worry, Commander, neither will the CIA. We'll continue to look for him and if he is alive, we'll catch him. In the meantime, we'll arrange for the transport of your prisoner to the mainland and then to Hawai'i. You get to have the satisfaction of being at his trial and seeing him be convicted of murder."
Steve looks at Morrison, again struck by how much more human he sounds, than before. Death has a way of doing that to you, he thinks, sad.
"Well, guess I'd better be off, then. Thank you for all your help."
"You're welcome, Commander. Have a safe journey back home."
"I hope so," Steve says, smiling. "Trip out here was not the easiest."
"No, I know," Morrison says, praying he turns around and leaves.
"By the way, do you know where I can find Lieutenant Rollins? I would like to say goodbye."
For the second time today, Steve sees alarm in the man's eyes, and he gets the feeling Morrison is not a man easily alarmed. His pulse starts to race, while he mentally pieces the evidence together: the abnormal rush, downstairs and Morrison's countenance and general change of demeanour, towards him.
"Sorry, I'm afraid Lieutenant Rollins was recalled back to Washington. Have a safe trip, Commander." And with that, he turns around and heads for the stairs, disappearing.
Steve feels like he's just been punched in the gut. He had hoped he and Catherine could talk and sort out whatever is going on between them, but now the chance has passed. Until when, he has no idea. He takes his cell phone out of one of his pockets and nervously brings it to life, hoping to find at least one text notification, but finds none. He heads for Captain Hamilton's office, to officially inform the Navy of the results of Zahed's interrogation and, after the briefing is done and before leaving for the airport, he decides to ask, anyway.
"Sir, I'm sorry for veering off the course of this meeting, but have you any idea why Lieutenant Rollins was sent back to Washington?"
Hamilton eyes him kindly, sighing. He sits down and motions to Steve.
"Sit down, Commander. I was made aware that you and Lieutenant Rollins were friends only a few hours ago, by Officer Morrison."
Steve is really not liking where this is going. His suspicions, in the CIA building, are now screaming at the top of their lungs, at him.
"Yes, Sir, we've been friends since Navy Intelligence. But I can assure you that our friendship didn't…"
Hamilton smiles and dismisses him with a flick of the hand. "Don't worry, Commander, the Navy has nothing to do with whom you're friends with. It appears that the CIA team that captured Zahed were met by some enemy fire when they got to Khayfan. One of the CIA officers was badly injured, two more suffered some injuries, of undetermined severity. Lieutenant Rollins was one of them, I'm afraid."
Steve can feel his entire reserve of blood flee to unknown domains, hands clammy, heart beating loudly in his chest, deafening his ears. His breathing becomes laboured and he's now very happy that his Superior Officer told him to sit down. While feeling his panic rise, he silently begs the higher powers not to take her away from him in such a stupid manner, and through his own actions, indirectly.
"Thank you for informing me, Sir. I guess the CIA couldn't be bothered," he blurts out, ready to bite Morrison's head off, in his mind. His first assessment of the man had been right, after all.
"Don't judge him too harshly, Commander. He barely knows what happened himself."
"But he knows we are friends. He could've told me," Steve goes on, stubbornly.
"Actually, we thought it best if I gave you the news. If you asked."
"Of course, Sir. Was she sent to Washington?"
"Yes, she was stable enough to be transported. She could've been treated here, but she asked to be sent home. The CIA agreed. Commander, all this is confidential information. Please act accordingly."
These news floor Steve again, but he doesn't let his Superior Officer become aware of it. Getting up, he makes a split decision and decides to act on it.
"Of course, Sir. I'll be the soul of discretion. I have a request to make of you, Sir."
"Ask away, Commander."
"I have a sister who is in Washington, right now, Sir. Given that we wrapped up early, here, and that I still have 4 days, would it be possible for me to make a pit stop there?"
"Of course, I'll have the Navy make the necessary changes to your travel papers, Commander."
"Thank you, Sir, for everything."
"Good luck, Commander. Tell your sister," and he looks pointedly at him, as he gets up, "that I hope she'll be on her feet in no time. Good luck."
Embarrassed, Steve lowers his eyes and salutes Captain Hamilton. Congenial, indeed. Two hours later, he's back on the Hercules C-130 headed for Washington, on edge. This will end up being the longest flight of his life.
Hello, review leavers!
After having received the nicest review from a guest half a day ago (which was left 2,5 days ago, not sure why it takes FanFiction SO long to deliver these!), I thought it was about time to personally thank each and every one of you who took the time to write. It really is true, that reviews are what fills our hearts with joy! Without them, you have no idea if what you're doing is pleasing anyone.
I never wrote fanfiction before in my life (I do something completely different, for a living!), and even this was done from a slightly "embarrassed" corner. I'm no writer, so who would want to read my story? In the end, the need to "push" this baby out, won. I only started to watch H50 about 2 years ago, and only discovered FanFiction about a year ago. I had no idea that people wrote FanFiction, but find it amazing that they do – to the delight of many TV and Movie fans, I'm sure!
And one day, on one of my outdoor exercise sessions, this idea came to my mind. As all ideas, great and small (this is very small, naturally), it started with a general outline of what I would like to see happen (this was shortly after 9.11). Then, the idea grew a few branches. Then, I decided to jot down some bullet points, sometime later transferred it to a word document. At some point, the points became around 50… I begged for a Beta, got two. The first one, disappeared after 2 emails exchanged. The second was busy with her exams and after she graduated, she disappeared too. So I had two choices: do the same or press on. By this time, I had started to write down ideas or small sentences on my "Note" App, and would then send them to my email address, to compile the text at home. And words became sentences, sentences became paragraphs. Which is why I have whole chunks of text written, already, but the rest are mere ideas. Thus taking so long to publish. Sometimes, those missing pieces of text don't "flow". I need to marinate them for 1 or 2 days, rework them, marinate some more. This is a process, but I find that, most of the time, the text writes itself. It's very, very interesting, as a process. Anyway, to the comments. And don't be sad that it's just my comments, I am posting a new chapter after this. ;-)
To the Guest who commented "update, update, update", I'll try, I'll try, I'll try… ;-) ;-)
Not sure why it's not showing up on FanFiction…
Guest chapter 29 . Apr 16
love love love this
THANK YOU! Hope you keep reading.
Guest chapter 29 . Apr 15
I LOVE this story seriously like its probably the best Mcroll fanfic I've ever read, but I think at this point we might be backtracking a little. I think it would be very like them to push anything down especially for the sake of a mission, but as Catherine drove away in her car last time she clearly said going back lost its appeal. I think Steve and Catherine need to stop letting each other in and then all of a sudden shutting down like this and at least let little things slip even if they're not ready to actually sit and talk this out. Because that is a little more like them. I think at this point thieve spent enough time together that at least in their mind they should be able to acknowledge that they have feelings for each other and be battling that. I mean I honestly thought during that whole Christmas sequence that we were gonna gonna get something and then they just shut off completely. I love them but they really kinda took a thousand steps forward and two thousand steps back. your talent is incredible and I can't wait to see where you take this story next.
WOW – thank you from the bottom of my heart! ;-) ;-) ;-) You've made my day. Week. Month, probably ;-)
There's no backtracking, believe me, I know what I'm doing (I think). Don't forget a few things: Steve and Catherine don't communicate. Catherine thinks he's still with Lynn. She's conservative, in that respect (I don't find that conservative, I find it being a decent woman with a lot of self-respect, but hey, sign of the times…). Steve was very hurt by what she did, but instead of being a Man (capital M), he decided to get angry. He threw an ultimatum at her face. Gave her no choice. Failed to realise that she may have had her reasons. The fact that going back to work may have lost its appeal, doesn't invalidate the fact that Steve has done nothing to show her that he wants her back. Don't forget that Catherine left, after Kono's wedding. She loves her job – she'll continue doing it - why not? If you can't be happy in love, at least be happy in the Professional aspect of your life…
She came back on 7.07 and he was mad. M-A-D. He rolled his eyes at Lynn, when introducing Cath, as though saying. "What is SHE doing here? What a nerve! Sorry for this", and Lynn was like: "OK, calm your horses, it's fine." Then, when he realises she's come to help his mother… that's when he starts to see her in a slightly different light, I hope he was embarrassed. They have their talk on the plane, which is, really, no talk at all. He asks when she was recruited, she tells him Afghanistan, he huffs and that's it. That's no conversation! But he's mad. The way they say goodbye, on that airstrip… he realises he still loves her (don't forget when he tells the other McGarrett that the right woman has already come and gone because he couldn't hold on to her, and when he tells Harry that he used to have one of those "the only one I ever let in", and he was already dating Lynn at those times!), but would never have the courage to tell her. First, because he has a girlfriend, second because he refuses to tell her that he regrets telling her what he did. But the way he touches the plane… he knows he loves her. His look, it's clearly evident. The man is a good actor. So he goes home and tries his hardest to be happy with Lynn. Sort of like a… mad dash. "I WILL be happy with this one, if only to show the other that I can be happy without her!)
Then, she comes back on 8.20. He's still mad, as evidenced by his reaction to Lou's antics behind her back, in the bullpen (not ordering him to STOP that immediately), but he cuts her some slack. They have that silly "I'm doing perfect without you, I'm even dating!" conversation, and again, he remembers that she's the one. That funny scene where she climbs the tree… clearly, some nicely done sexual innuendo, there! Her return had such an impact on him that on 9.01, so in theory, 10 weeks later, we learn that he broke up with Lynn. Because he realised, no matter how hard he tried, she would never be the one (as I detailed in the beginning of my story).
So, then, 9.11… he's single, now. She comes to his aid. Drops everything. And they spend one month together. So this is the time he finally forgives her for lying, for leaving, for not opening up to him. Though, in this last part, he also shares the blame. Big time. He realises she's the one. But he's grieving. Joe just died. And he has a lot to think about. That kind of man would never jump into a relationship (or even just sex!) with the love of his life, (or any woman, for that matter!) without thinking it through thoroughly (see how he's approached his "dating" dinners?). And Montana is a process. He slowly comes back to life, he slowly lets go of his grief, he slowly finishes forgiving her. Christmas was smack in the middle of it, he wasn't going to woo her at her parent's house, without so much as a conversation, right? And it has to come from him, he needs to chase after her. He's the Alpha here, somehow Catherine, when it comes to love, is not an Alpha. Maybe it's just with Steve, and she wouldn't behave like that with other men? Don't know. But she's incisive and very sharp. She says the stuff she needs to say, with slight sarcasm, but lets him take his time. Maybe it was because she wasn't so sure of her standing, in his life (and maybe that's why she left, ultimately), but she never demanded anything from him, definition or affection. And in the end, that was part of the problem, of course. She mistook his actions (or lack thereof) for insecurity about wanting her to share his life, when it was nothing like that (wedding ring!). Of course, they'd never lived together, before he settled in Hawai'i, so there was no background to that. But they don't talk. So they also need to learn to do that. And that will take a while. For me.
Regarding the thousand steps forward and 2.000 steps back… isn't that how things are, in life, sometimes? Especially with two people like them? I find this much more believable than just setting the scene for a story and then just blurting out the coming together, without taking into consideration how the characters are constructed, in the original series. There's a lot of baggage, with those two. And if they are going to find common ground and build on their love, it needs to be on a slab of concrete, not a wonky bridge made out of wooden planks, over a canyon, in the middle of an Indiana Jones movie.
CatherineHF0 chapter 30 . Apr 17
I love this story so much! Please update soon!
THANK YOU! I am trying... but I work every day, so it's not easy. But the story wants to write itself, so there's that…. ;-) ;-)
unichick21 chapter 29 . Apr 16
eeek! I love this and wished we got to see more of Steve and Catherine's reunion in the finale. I would love for them to of had a serious talk about what happened between them, their feelings and trying again. Glad you are addressing this in your story and can't wait for you to update.
McRoll is Endgame!
THANK YOU! So did I – but I guess the naysayers and McHaters managed to influence PL just a little bit. Don't get me wrong – I LOVE him for giving us that finale. Yay! Maybe it just gave us the perfect setting to now grow from it and imagine, in writing, how they would've moved on from that to "Steve having grandchildren", as PL put it. No matter what the haters may say (and I've read a few preposterous theories on FB) they ended up together. That, we'll always have! They can't take that away from us ;-)
FicreaderT chapter 10 . Mar 19
You have me very intrigued with this story and I hope to read more. I, too, believe these two are endgame and I'm enjoying your take on how it might work out. I look forward to your next update!
THANK YOU! Hang on tight! This story is far from over. Thank you for the feedback.
AgentD.6 chapter 3 . Feb 10
So far you have brought us a wonderful story that many of us would love to think could happen on the show. But for that to happen, like in your story, forgiveness on both Steve and Catherine's part must take place. Catherine for leaving but Steve for being so reluctant to finally open up to his feelings for Catherine. Re watching episodes let's you see she was simply waiting for him to say I love you and so want you with me! I hope we at least get to see it in your story.
THANK YOU! You are correct – they need to forgive each other and learn to communicate. And lose that stupid fear of looking silly to the other. Yes, she knows that the decision must come from him – look at the final scene! She stood there, unsure of herself, only sat down when he asked her if she was going to, only touched him when he opened his hand. She took the steps, but it was his decision. That's how they roll. Not sure why she's like that, as stated above. ;-) Maybe women shouldn't force definition out of men – most of them say that's the fastest and easiest way to lose them. "If a man wants a woman in his life, he'll put her there."
BlueSky chapter 3 . Jan 28
I really love how you portray emotions in your characters; I feel as though I am experiencing all of Steve's emotions myself! Also, I'm so glad you aren't afraid to let him show emotion, since he is so often portrayed as the stone cold Navy SEAL (which I also love, but is is still human). I truly feel as though Catherine understands him the most out of everyone, after all their shared/similar experiences and time together, so I'm really happy with how that shines through. I can't wait to read more, and thank you for this lovely story!
THANK YOU! As the Brazilians say, "first trip sailor", over here. What would be the fun of a story where we don't delve into the character's emotions, right? That's the only way to understand their actions and how they're built. The dilemmas within them, slowly revealing how they will act. And no, Steve is very human, he just doesn't let his emotions show, but he naturally has them. For me, that's the interesting part. Catherine knows him best, yes – and he knows that. She's "the one he ever let in", his girl, the one who got away. Towards the end, he was finally able to admit that to a stranger (easier than if it had been, say, Danny. I think to Danny, he wouldn't have admitted it). And ultimately, that was the catalyst for the final scene, their reunion. They only got together because Steve finally admitted she was the one (and Lincoln was very skilled at reading between the lines).
Scaramou chapter 3 . Jan 10
I think somethings happened because it's now telling me chapter 1 is at the end and the story begins with chapter 2
THANK YOU for reading my story and for letting me know. I was still getting to grips with this publishing thing… ;-)
Ellaitaly chapter 1 . Jan 4
Love this story! Waiting for more
THANK YOU! Hope you keep reading.
Dee47 chapter 3 . Jan 4
Always love reading more Steve/Catherine scenes, so thanks for sharing! You're doing a great job of fleshing out this storyline that we didn't get enough of on the show.
THANK YOU! I felt that I just HAD to write it, it was within me yearning to get out, like "Aliens"! Ahahahahah!
SteveMcGarrettLover chapter 3 . Jan 4
Loved it! You write so well, and I enjoy everything you do! I can't wait for more, maybe Catheirne can convince him to shower, and she could help?
I am loving this story! It is so raw, so heartwrenching and wonderful at the same time!
THANK YOU! First review that left me speechless. You have no idea how good these are! Re: your suggestion, read above. They are necessarily taking their time and even after, it'll be complicated… ;-)
CatherineMcG chapter 1 . Dec 21, 2019
Wow, great story. Love it. I hope you continue soon.
THANK YOU! Hope you keep reading.
LAURA chapter 1 . Dec 21, 2019
I can't wait for you to publish another chapter of this story, because I really liked the first chapter ... and I can't wait for Catherine and Steve to come together again
love forever Steve and Catherine
THANK YOU! Hope you're continuing to enjoy yourself. They will…. In due time. This is a McRoll story. McRoll forever!
CATH chapter 1 . Dec 21, 2019
Oh my God, another mcroll story, I love it ... I can't wait for you to publish the next chapter,
by the way I would also like steve and cath to be together
THANK YOU! Hope you keep reading. They will… eventually.
Guest, Khellbells and Guest – thank you for the time you took to review. It means the world!
CATH1975 chapter 1 . Dec 22, 2019
I am a big fan of Steve and Catherine as a couple and I love that the authors who publish on fanfiction write stories of the return of Catherine to Hawaii and how they are together again, forever, married and with children ... .Well, I am increasingly convinced and I am super sad, because I have realized ... that in the Hawaii 5.0 series ... Catherine and Steve will never be together again ... that's why I decided that since that I march Catherine to Kiev, never see any other episode in the series, unless Catherine appeared again ... I have fulfilled
changing the subject, I loved the first chapter of your first story of mcroll in fanficion and I hope it is not the last one you publish ...
I can't wait for you to publish the second chapter of the story, to know the conversation between Catherine and Steve.
love catherine and steve
THANK YOU! Luckily, we were both wrong… hope you enjoyed the finale, as I did (as any McRoller did) and are enjoying the story.
GreenEyes09 chapter 1 . Dec 21, 2019
Awesome story, I love it!
THANK YOU! Hope you keep reading.