Author's notes: hello to you all! Just a few notes here. 1 this story is going to be 20 chapters long. And it is no happy go lucky story. Ashley is no Mary sue. She only acts like one to keep every one else in the dark. If you have not guessed by now, she is a witch bitch. And that is how she is going to be. If anyone has a few ideas I am open. This story will be finished on Halloween so heads up. Also Erik like I said before is the Michael Crawford one, with his life based on the Susan Kay book. If you are all saying how can he be like the one in the book? Well, that's what author's notes are for. If you do your home work you will know that even the malevolent Erik only killed two people after he became a 'ghost'…Joseph Buquet and Ubalbo Piangi and even then he didn't kill Buquet, he fell into the chamber of mirrors only in the play did he kill both men. Anyway at the end of the book K.Erik got tired of killing and such and so I am making it so that Ashley is to make him start killing again, and to love it!

The Phantom of the PhanWankage

2005-10-08 ch 7, signed

Erik or Mary-sue magically goes back in time... meets each other... fall in love and/or join together to accomplish a stupid goal.

Congrats at writing a story just like everyone else's.

And...

P.S. How does the Phantom know English?

Reply: keep reading. But thank you, your review made me laugh. English is one of the many languages that Erik knows.

KitsuneMagis

2005-10-05 ch 1, signed

I know this is going to sound horrible, and I'll probably cursed for life for reviewing about such trival things, BUT you have some little errors that make your writing ... not HARD to read, but just not as enjoyable as it could be!

"And because she love the story. As she..."

And because she loved the story. As she

"...so out of instinct then fear he tripped..."

so out of instinct, than fear he tripped

"...way too impatient." Alice commented..."

way too impatient," Alice commented

"They was great, they..."

They were great, they

"...he fell on to a very hard surface..."

he fell onto a very hard surface

"...And because she love the story."

And because she loved the story.

Little things like grammer and puncuation make a big difference. ' hope you didn't mind me pointing them out.

KitsuneMagis

2005-10-06ch 7, signed

Ha-ha! Yah, I understand about the music stuff. I'm a musician myself; I teach and play violin, viola, and piano professionally. I sang in my high school jazz choir and made regional, and whatnot so please don't get upset about me saying your character sounds mary-sue-ish (did I really say that? yesh, sorry! '' ) Anyways, love your story so far! As long as your writing makes you happy you should keep doing it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh, and if you're looking for a beta-reader for little spelling/punctuation errors I'm open. Just let me know, okay?

Reply: as am I! I played the tuba, sousaphone, baritone, bass drums, and the trombone when I was in high school. Am trying to play the bagpipes, whew, not much luck there. I am also learning the organ, yes! I own one! Beautiful! Got it in Paris. Not in my house yet. You'll all welcome to come over and play it. And also trying the violin. Also I sang in the choir. Who in the hell told me I could sing! I can't sing! But was able to get solos for the songs: All That Jazz, some men's parts, and anything alto. If their ears bled…well, it was their fault. As you know and as I have wrote to you I thank you. And for pointing out the mistakes... Thank you. I don't mind.

Silvermasque

2005-10-06 ch 7, anon.

Ha ha good, I owe you a proper review, my dad caught me last time and it was LATE at night...i was in trouble. Have you heard from Misty lately? I'm missing phantom companions :(

Nice tone, loved the costumes cant wait for an update!

Adibug

Silvermasque

2005-10-06 ch 5, signed

Gasp! Finally got around to reading it! Me likey! great description of "and two hours later" seriously, i started telling my freinds the story once and they got that confused I sat them in a circle and told them the book story like th bards of old did singing half the score as I did so.

Meh, I'm strange, cant wait for an update!

Adibug

Reply: thank you very much! I am glad you like the costumes! I hope you like the robe in chapter 9. I really do have a robe like that. Made it me self. And no have' it heard from Misty I love her story! Like you I am missing phantom companions too! You Random, and Misty's stories I check up on daily all your stories are great!

telegramsam

2005-10-05 ch 5, signed

God save me from Mary-Sues!

What is it with the PotO fandom and the massive proliferation of Mary Sues and badfic?

headdesk

Reply: finish reading. You are too quick to judge. Yeah she is like a Mary sue, but continue and you'll see she is not.

Carkeys

2005-09-29 ch 1, anon.

I like where this is going. Please update!

Carkeys

2005-10-04 ch 4, anon.

WOW! u update fast! keep it up!

Carkeys

2005-10-05 ch 5, anon.

LOL i luv it:)

Reply: although you are not big on words, I love you any way. You are my first reviewer. Thank you very much!

Shinzui

2005-10-05 ch 4, anon.

A lot of the quotes, as well as parts of the storyline seems to be ripped from "Learning to Love" by GerrysISUchick04.

example: "Erik glanced it and then gave her a raised eyebrow. "It's making noises! You expect me to drink that?" he asked."

Reply: yes, I know and I am sorry for it. after those last chapters it is all typed word for word.

Miss Black Shadow

2005-10-03 ch 1, signed

Hi There! I really enjoyed your first chapter. Keep it up! Please update! Wonder what will happen when James meets Erik? tee hee.

Write soon!

Shadow

Reply: thank you! Well he will be very protective. He is her big brother after all.

And thank you all who read but did not review! I also have a poem out please read and review.