It is not that I don't like reviews, but can someone make a bigger commit then "like it, go on". I don't like doing this kind of story, because there is no plot. I am just writing what I think he would be thinking. I try not to say to much of the plot of the show, but if he was writing a journal he would in say what happen. So, what I am asking is that is there anything OOC, and do you want more or less Ben/Gwen hints?

Oh, Would anyone like to under go the horror of pre-reading some of my bad written?

One last Q, should I rise the rating? K?

disclaimer: I do not own Ben 10 or any one from the show. I am not making any money off this.

...Yes, this is a journal fanfiction.


Journal 3rd entry

Gwen... This is personal. How would you like if I read your dairy?

Yes, I do know it is on your laptop, and your password is that quote from Jeanne Moreau:

age does not protect you from love

Gwen, you are weird. What kind of quote is that?

journal, I just saved a monster, and this time it was not Gwen!

Me and Gwen had gone down to a lake to have some fun, but now I feel guilty. I jumped in, and we started fighting over her not liking water. So, I played like something had got me, then I turned into fourarms covering myself with seaweed. When I popped up to scare her, she had a look of worry. She looked like she was really to jump in and fight off what ever, to save me. I did not have a lot of time to fell guilt before a real monster came. It was big, and had arms coming out of its mouth. When I got away grandpa and Gwen did not believe me.

The next day Gwen was calling me a lier, so I decided that I should remind her what grandpa was forcing us to eat. She decided she was not up to fight with me all day. She was going to sunbath... on a cloudy day. I guess I understand. Grandpa's food has been making me feel weird. From the start of summer break I been feeling like there are stuff inside my stomach living and moving. It feels good, but maybe it is making her sick to her stomach. The boat would not be good for her. Unlike me she is not that strong.

On the boat the captain over heard me talk about the night before. He said that the monster is called the Krakken. I was able to talk grandpa into going to where the captain said he saw the Krakken. On the way we met Jonah Melville. He looked like a person that loved the wild; maybe a little to much. He then called me a lier.

On the way back to shore, the Krakken showed up, and headed for the docks. The Krakken destroyed the dock, nearly hitting Gwen. I had to help Gwen. No one but me gets to hit Gwen. So, I jumped in the water and tried to turn into ripjaws. The stupid thing malfunctions turning me into XLR8. I did not have time to wait to retry. I had to learn fast to run on water. Being family, I had saved Gwen 1st. This is happen way to much. I save her, she thanks me, repeat. I feel so respectable for her safety. It is sort of my fault that she has to face all these weird things trying to kill us. Maybe I can talk grandpa into dropping her off somewhere safe.

I went and saved the remaining people in the lake. I then had to save that Jonah guy. He was going to get himself killed, just to protect a box. In the end the Krakken got the box, and Jonah looked pissed. I ran back to our boat when my powers starting going out. Self note: When XLR8 power is going out; don't run on water: my body does not fell good after hitting the water 100 mph.

When we got back to camp grandpa, and Gwen was being overprotective. I could understand grandpa, he is respectable for me. Gwen I don't understand. I just saved her so she should be conferable with me fighting some monster, or just not care about me. I mean I'm just her cousin, right?

The captain came by, and I asked to help him find the monster; after we already left the port. We went down to where he said the Krakken lives. We found theses big round balls. they looked cool; so I touched them. I knew that there was something about them. That is when my great detective mind to fingerer out that they were eggs, and they were still slimly. I pulled off my mask right there, and barfed. I can't believe I just touched something that was from there; sick. I found out one more thing: grandpa's food was still alive. The captain had already went backup: So, I went back to the ship, and found Mr. I-am-a-good-guy Jonah kidnap the captain. I went after them, and seeing my greater abilities they dropped the captain while running away. The captain and me haded back to the RV when I power gave out...aging. Oh boy, having powers is not great all the time.

I told my family about the eggs, and Gwen popped in saying that Jonah was a evil guy. Like I did not know that? Well, the captain let us "barrow" a boat. That reminds me: we never got around to giving it back. Oh, and Gwen called the cops.

When we got to where Jonah was packing the eggs, we split up. Gwen when and kick the grunts butts, while I went after the big fish himself; Jonah. Grandpa said she took care of herself. O yea, like cousin, like cousin... ah, me being the person she is like. I saved the eggs, and beat Jonah. Only one thing, I did it aging! This time I put the eggs in my mouth! I don't think Gwen minded me using her toothbrush.

Gwen is showing that she is not that bad. She may make a good side kick one day.

Goodnight journal.