Authors Notes: Thanx to those people who reviewed you are very kind. I'm gonna try make the next chaper longer, cos the first two where just like starters to the story.


Chapter 3 : The Notel

'Oh No, Steven look at your car. I'm so sorry for yelling at you.' said Jackie giving Hyde a hug.

'Its fine, ok look its only the bumper, nothing that can't be fixed,' he told Jackie ' And... I'm sorry too, I was being a jerk and I shoulda known better than to take my eyes off the road.'

'Well thats true!' replied Jackie giving Hyde a smile. Hyde didn't look happy about that last comment so she pulled him in for a kiss.

Eric and Donna came over to see the car.

'Save it for the motel you two, my eyes dont want to see that.' said Eric.

'Hyde, what happened? Dont you know how close you could of came to an accident?' asked Donna looking concerned.

'Chill out Donna,' interupted Jackie ' Besides it wasn't all his fault, we were having a discussion and Steven momentarily forgot about the road, no big deal, everyones ok.'

'So Hyde, do you think you'll still be able to drive or will you have to leave it here till we get some help?' Eric asked.

'I think it'll be ok, its mostly the bumper anyway. Just reverse back a bit so we can get outta here, its getting late.' replied Hyde getting into the car.

By now is was dark out. The Camino didnt sound to good, but Hyde carried on driving nontheless. After about an hour and twenty minutes they made it to The Sands Motel. It looked very tacky with a big palm tree sign lit up and the motel itself was pink.

Hyde, Eric and Donna all looked at the motel and shook their heads at the tackiness, Jackie smiled, she thought it was great.

'Well this looks nice doesn't it Steven?' asked Jackie.

'Of course babe, whatever you say.' answered Hyde.

The street where the motel was situated was full of bars and clubs. People were dancing in the street, drinking beers and it looked like a place to have a great time. Everyone got out of the cars, got their cases and headed to the reception stand of the motel. Eric and Hyde saw what was going on in the street and soon began to realise maybe this wasnt a bad idea after all.

'Hi there,' Donna said to the guy at the reception desk, 'I talked to you yesterday on the phone, I reserved two rooms.'

'What name?' the guy asked.

'Oh yeh, its D. Princess and J. Likewhatyasee.' How did Jackie persuade me to say that, I hope he doesnt ask for I.D. thought Donna.

'Fine, its rooms number 13 and 15, enjoy your stay at The Sands Motel.' the guy said handing over the keys. 'Psst, you, the red head, come here.'

Eric gave Donna a look.

'One minute Eric. Yes what do you want?' asked Donna.

'I just wanted to let you know, you should choose number 15 its our biggest suit just right for a lovely looking girl like yourself.' answered the guy.

Donna started to blush until the guy smiled an revealed a discusting set of brown teeth.

'Eww, what a creep! Here Jackie you can have room 15, I dont want it.' Donna threw the keys to Jackie.

'Donna, what the hell,' motioned Eric 'I heard what that guy said thats the biggest suit, why'd you give it to them?'

'Cos Eric, he was kinda weird and he might have done something to that room, let them have it we'll only be using it to sleep and maybe somthing else.' Donna winked at Eric.

Each couple headed to their rooms and said good night at the door. Jackie and Hyde opened the door to their room and just has the guy a the reception said it was big. The decor was nice and everything looked clean and in working order.

'Wow, this is nice for a cheap motel, look they even have mints on the pillow!' Jackie said pointing and eating her mint.

'This is pretty nice and look at all those places to drink outside, I think this trip might actually be alright.' admitted Hyde with a slight smile on his face.

'Is that a smile I see forming on Mr.Hydes face, quick lets take a picture so we can relive this moment over and over. See Steven I told you it would be good, its wise to listen to me.'

'So Jackie, seeing as we're here and I almost like it, why dont we put that big, bouncy bed to use?' Hyde asked with one eyebrow arched.

Jackie smiled as Hyde lifted her over to the bed.

Meanwhile Donna and Erics room was a totally different story.

'I cant believe you swapped that room for this.' said Eric looking around the dismal room. 'Look see, they already sound like they're having fun!'

Loud noises could be heard coming from Hyde and Jackies room, much to the dismay of Eric and Donna.

'Its not that bad Eric.' Donna replied trying to sound enthusiastic.

The room was horrible and dull. Instead of one bed there was two seperate beds this time with no mint on the pillow. The bathroom looked dirty and the light didnt work properly.

'Lets just give it try for tonight, cos it getting late and hopefully we'll be at the beach most of the day tommorow.' said Donna.

'Ok, lets just get some sleep.'

They each went over to a bed and lifted the covers. Both of them jumped back and looked at the beds in discust.

'There is noway I'm sleeping in this bed, its all stained.' yelled Donna.

She turned to look at Eric who was crouched in the corner. She walked over to his bed and saw a huge spider.

'Oh god, come on Eric I'm sleeping in the car.'

On the way to the car Eric was fuming inside, so much for a great weekend he thought, this trip is going to be rubbish.


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