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Chapter 4: Breafast at Ebony's.

Saturday Morning.

'Eric, wake up.' whispered Donna into his ear.

'Wha.. what time is it?' he asked.

' 9am. So how did you sleep?' Donna asked back.

Eric just gave her a look, a how do you think I slept look.

'Look Eric, I'm sorry I shouldn't have give Jackie our room.' she said apologetically ' But I'm going to ask for it back cos there noway I'm sleeping in this car another night.'

'But what about those two, where will they sleep?' questioned Eric.

'All I know is that guy gave the key to the pretty red head, me. So that room is mine, Jackie and Hyde just borrowed it for the night. We'll find away so that all of us can share.'

With that Eric and Donna decided to go back to the room and get changed ready for breakfast.

'Wait a minute missy.' said Eric stopping at the door 'I just remembered, I'm not going back into that room til you make sure that spider is gone.'

'Fine, let me go see.' Donna walked into the room and checked the beds and the spider was gone. 'I can't see it anywhere Eric, I think you scared him away last night when you screamed like a girl.'

Just then Hyde and Jackie came up behind Eric.

'That was you, I thought it was Donnas screams of pleasure.' said Hyde with a smirk on his face.

'Real funny Hyde, you dont want me to get into that time you screamed like a girl cos Jackie took all that stuff from out of your room do you, cos I can.' asked Eric.

'Aww Steven, you screamed like a girl thats soo sweet..' said Jackie hugging Hydes arm.

'That wasn't a scream, I sneezed, I happen to have a loud sneeze. Whatever man, why are you not dressed yet?' said Hyde trying to change the suject.

'Me and Donna had to sleep in the car cos our room is horrible.' replied Eric.

'What are you talking about, the rooms are fine. They must be if they're upto Jackies standards.'

'See for yourself then.' Eric motioned for Hyde to enter the room.

'Wow this room is crap. Too bad Donna gave us the keys hey Eric, our room was like a palace compared to this dump!' Hyde chuckled happy to rub it in.

'Shut it Hyde, I made a mistake giving Jackie that room. Tonight me and Eric are having it back, with or without your permission.' Donna said firmly to Hyde.

'What, it was your fault in the first place. You were the one who didn't listen to thatweird man at the desk.' answered Hyde.

'Right you two give it a rest ok. We'll sort out sleeping arrangements tonight.' stated Jackie ' Right now all I'm bothered about is having breakfast and then heading over to the beach. Donna when you're ready you and Eric meet us at Ebony's cafe just over the road.'

'Fine, we'll see you in twenty minutes, bye.' waved Donna.

Hyde and Jackie entered the cafe and found it was empty. They sat at booth and began chatting about the night before.

'So Steven, last night was good huh, we should do this more often.' said Jackie.

'We should definately do what we did last night in the motel room more often but going on trips and totally ruining my car, not so much.' Hyde answered.

A waitress came over to their table and asked if they were ready to order.

'Yep, can we have a full breakfast with 2 rashes of bacon, an egg and 2 sausages for him and I'll have dry toast and a small glass of orange juice please.'

'Wait, what about Eric and Donna should we order theirs?' asked Hyde.

'Yeh I think we should, um and can we have 2 more full breakfasts has well then please.' The waitress wrote down their order and thank them for coming to Ebony's.

'Jackie I was thinking, I'm gonna skip the beach and go find somewhere to get the Camino fixed.' This was really an excuse cos the damage wasn't that bad, he just didn't fancy the beach.

'What, no Steven you can't, please leave that till later,' pleaded Jackie. 'I just wanna spend some time with you and top up my tan. And what will I do if some hunky guy tries it on with me, cos its hard not to.'

'Fine, I'll get it fixed later. And if anyone tries it on with you, they'll be kissing my fist first.' replied Hyde getting angry.

Jackie just smiled happy she'd gotten her way. A moment later the waitress came over with the food.

'Thankyou, this looks great.' said Jackie to the waitress. 'I wonder whats taking them two so long, their food will be cold soon.'

'Thats their problem, lets just took in I'm starving. Jackie do you want a bit of my bacon? thats not going to fill you up.' asked Hyde looking at the lack of food on her plate.

'Steven I can't go on the beach looking bloated in my swim suit, I'm not Donna you know, this girl likes to look good for the public.' answered Jackie. Hyde just shrugged it off, he wasn't going to argue with that.

Meanwhile back at the motel Eric and Donna were struggling to even take a shower.

'Ewww, this is discusting, how can anyone expect pople to shower in here?' asked Donna to no one.

'Donna lets just shower at the beach. I think I saw that spider and he looked angry Donna, he might eat me.' Eric said desperately wanting to get out of there.

'When we get back I'm marching down to that office and demanding another room, this is unacceptable.'

'Ok Donna come on lets just go and get something to eat. Hyde and Jackie have been waiting for us for amost 40 minutes.' said Eric looking up and down for the spider.

They made their way to the cafe and were suprised to see no one in there.

'Excuse me,' Donna said to the waitress, 'Have you seen to people in here, a small brunnette and a slightly taller guy with curly hair?'

'Oh yeh, they were in here. They just left about five minutes ago. Here they left a note, I think its for you.' The waitress gave them the note.

Donna, Eric.

Got sick of waiting for you so we headed to the beach. Ordered you some food, just ask the waitress.

Catch you later.

Jackie and Steven

P.S. Can you get the check, thanks.

The cheek of it thought Donna, how rude.

'Um can we have our food please?' asked Eric.

'Sure it right over there.' The waitress pointed to the table.

'Thanks.'

Eric and Donna walked to the booth and sat down. They were both too hungry to be angry so they decided to dig in.

'At least they thought about us and ordered the food.' said Eric 'Yeh I guess' replied Donna.

They went to eat and were soon dissapointed. The eggs were hard and the sausages and bacon were cold.

'So much for thinking of us hey Eric.' said Donna who looked pretty pissed off.


Right sorry if this story is going slow. They'll defo be at the beach next. Do you think I should make the next chapter better or worse for Donna and Eric? Oh and I'm from the UK and I dont know what americans have when they have a full breakfast, so I just made it up. Please review!