Authors Notes: Thankyou to those who reviewed and like it.


Our room now.

Saturday Night.

By now Erics foot was fine again so they decided to go to one of the bars across the street. They had seen people about their age coming out of the clubs totally smashed the night before so they knew it would be easy to get in.

Donna and Jackie were in the bathroom getting ready while the guys got changed in the bedroom.

'So Donna, how do I look?' asked Jackie spinning around in a low neck lavander dress.

'You look absolutely lovely Jackie, Hyde is one lucky guy.' replied Donna, 'um what about me?' she asked also giving a little swirl in her silky red dress.

'Stunning, that dress really goes with your hair and your figure looks amazing.' said Jackie being genuinely nice for once.

'Thankyou.' said Donna giving Jackie a little hug.

They both turned back to the mirror and finished putting their make up on. Donna could hardly focus. Since coming back from the beach she was thinking about Hyde all day. She wasn't thinking about him romantically or anything she was just amazed at the size of his you know what. Remembering the night they got to the motel and the noises coming from Jackie and Hydes room, no wonder it sounded like she was having fun. Jackie glanced over at Donna and noticed she was thinking about something so she asked her what was wrong.

'Donna, are you ok? I mean you look a little zoned out. Whats going on in that mind of yours?'

'If I tell you, you promise not to say anything to those two, especially Eric and not to get mad?' Donna asked back.

'I promise! Now what is it?' said Jackie eager to get an answer.

'Its just... Well when I accidently saw, you know, Hydes, well you know?'

'Yes,' replied Jackie a little wary.

'Well, I just wanted to know what it was like with...with someonethatbig.' Donna said the last bit very fast and quietly.

'Donna! What type of question is that?'

'I know, just forget it Jackie, just forget I even mentioned it.' said Donna who by now was very embarressed.

'Really Donna. I mean come on...But if you must know, its very good!' exclaimed Jackie with a big smile on her face and laughing.

Hyde and Eric could here the laughing coming from the bathroom and just looked at each other shaking their heads.

'What is it with girls and gossip that makes them so giddy?' wondered Eric.

'I don't have a clue man.' answered Hyde.

Just that second the girls came out of the bathroom.

'Finally!' sighed Hyde. 'Hey Donna.' he added giving her a wink and looking down.

Jackie looked at Hyde and rolled her eyes. "Steven, how do I look?' she asked giving him the same spin she gave Donna. Hyde just shrugged.

'STEVEN!' she yelled.

'Fine! You look beautiful.' he replied quietly.

'Aww!' cooed Donna and Eric from the side.

'Whatever. Is everyone ready? Right lets go.'

Jackie and Hyde walked off in front, forgeting the keys to the motel room. Donna noticed this and picked up the keys and put it in her purse. They walked across the road and lined up in the queue at a club called Tracks.

'Next?' yelled the bouncer at the door.

They walked upto the door and were stopped by the bouncer. He looked them up and down then opened the door and let them in, winking at the girls as they went past.

'Ok that was easy.' said Jackie 'Now lets get a drink and find somewhere to sit.'

Jackie had hold of Hydes hand and dragged him to the bar. Donna stopped Eric and showed him the key in here purse.

'Good that room is ours.' grinned Eric.

'Yep. No car for us tonight.' Donna started, 'The first chance we get we'll sneak back to the motel and lock the door. We deserve it after the day we've had.'

With the plan sorted they went to find where Hyde and Jackie were sitting. They had bought them each a drink calling it an apology for leaving them this morning. Jackie raised her glass for a toast,

'To Donna who looks great tonight, to Eric who despite being stung by a jellyfish is here tonight, to Steven who said that I was beautiful in front of everyone and to me for just being me! To Us!'

'To Us!' the rest of them chimed taking a long sip of their beer.

'Now lets dance!' yelled Jackie pulling at Hydes shirt.

To everyones surprise he agreed and got up without a fight. Hyde noticed the shocked stares of Eric and Donna but he didn't care he just wanted to please his woman.

'You know Jackie, this is really going to tarnish my rep when we get back home, so remember this is a one time thing and dont get any ideas about me taking you to clubs or going dancing when we get back to Point Place.' he warned when they reached the dance floor.

'Oh shut up and let me enjoy this moment.' said Jackie putting he finger over Hydes mouth.

After dancing for a while Donna and Eric joined them on the dance floor. Hyde told Jackie he wanted to get another drink so she followed him to the bar.

'Come on Donna nows are chance to leave.' said Eric when he saw them go.

'Ok, lets get out of here.' agreed Donna. So they sneaked off back to the motel room.

Meanwhile Hyde and Jackie bought another round of beers and took them to their table. Noticing Eric and Donna missing from the dance floor Jackie questioned where they were.

'I wonder where those two have gone?' wondered Jackie.

'Forman probably hurt his foot again. Don't worry I'm sure they'll be back.' assured Hyde, 'Lets just get drunk!'

So thats exactly what they did and soon enough Donna and Eric where the last things on their minds.

'...and I ate this chip but it wasn't a chip it was a cookie...' said Jackie laughing really loudly. 'Oh Steven, you look so dirty and sexy, take me back to our room now!' she demanded.

'Let go baby!' Hyde said getting up and almost lifting Jackie out of the club.

They stumbled back to the motel room and started making out heavily at the door. Hyde turned the handle to get in but it was locked. What the hell thought Hyde trying the handle a couple more times. He could hear laughing coming from the room so he started pounding it. The laughing continued and he began to get annoyed.

'Jackie I think Donna and Eric have locked us out. We might have to use the other room.'

'What? I can't sleep in there its discusting!' whined Jackie.

With no where else to go the only other option was the car. On the way they passed the motel reception. Jackie didn't want to spend the night in the car so she went over to ask if there were any more rooms available.

'Excuse me?' slured Jackie, 'We need a new room, ours is discusting!'

The weird guy from yesterday was replaced by a young woman.

'You must be from room 13. Yes I'm really sorry about the state of that room, the cleaners just refused to go in there cos of it being unlucky or something. Anyway because it was so unacceptable, we here at The Sands Motel have booked you both into The Sands Hotel for the night free of charge. Would you like me to order you a taxi?' she asked cheerfully.

'Right now, isn't it too late?' wondered Jackie.

'No, its been booked til Sunday morning check out. We have been trying to look for you since this morning to inform you.'

'Oh my god this is great, thankyou so much.' squeeled Jackie.

Ten minutes later a taxi came and took them to the hotel. When they got to the check in desk a young man handed them a key to the penthouse suit. Hyde and Jackie couldn't belive their luck.

'How lovely is this room? Look, they even have rose petals leading up to the bed! How romantic!' said Jackie running over the the massive bed and jumping on it.

Hyde gave her a look and joined her on the bed.

'Wait til Donna finds out she'll be so jeal...'

Jackie was cut off by a kiss fron Hyde. Oh yes Donna will definately be jealous.


Sorry if this chapter seems a bit rushed I was running out of ideas. Theres gonna be about two more chapters, so if you have any ideas on how it should end please let me know Thanx!