Ok, Yay I'm making a better verison! Hopfuly I won;t be so lazy this time. Anyways, I've gotten better at grammar (way better I hope.
Also, I think I learned a bit more on the anime/manga/whateveryouwanacallit. Begin!.

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Blood, that's all you could see on the very near-barren clearing that a lone girl just happend to be standing in. Her eyes were completely devoid of any emotion. The weapons along with a few accesorsies of what once belonged to her companions litterd the ground.

The girl stumbled screaming out in pain everytime she fell over.
Icy blue eyes glared at her knees, the skin was sliced open.
It was clearly obvious that whatever they were fighting here had attemptedto immobalize her.(Read botton for reson of crappy spelling)

The teenager that seemed to look about 15...or was it 16? Had finnaly with much difficulty mind you, got the weapons. Oh how she was very lucky that the battle had been next to the very portal wich would take her home.

She dropped the weapons first then jummped in herself, not realy caring if she landed on the pointed end of her sister-figures own sword.
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(Oh yeah...shaman gangs p.o.v now ;)

They had been at this shrine for hours! Why had the next fight in the tournament have to be here! It was getting preety humid out,
the family being gone to america to visit a relative they decided to take shelter from the sun's wrath in a well hose.

How disapointed they were when there was no water in the well.
So, there they were when all of a sudden one by one a staff, sword,
giant boomerang? cat suit-like armour. (Sango's body turned to ash without harming the armour somehow?) And finaly, wait...was that prayer beads? Were those weapons coverd in blood?

So finaly after all that 'junk' came up, they heard stummbling and cursing coming from that musty old well. Finaly a figure emerged, coverd in sweat, and caked with mud and dirt. The person (now identified as a girl) collasped on the floor,

Now, the shaman gang, being the good samaritans that they are, to the girl (stuff and all) to the Flame Inn. Hoping to patch her up in time to save her.

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Woot! One chapter down! Was I ok? Oo; I hope I was ok at spelling due to the fact this 'notepad' has absolutaly NO spell check! Anyways, here's hoping I did better then last time...Review! --)--