Crystal Clear
Chapter 2
The Girl From the Sky
Ok, new chapter of Crystal Clear.
Flowerstar: Ok, I'll remember that.
Zerodius: Oh yeah? Lemme see what stories YOU'VE done! (checks profile) er… ok never mind.
Anyway, thanks for the tips. I'll TRY to describe how the character's felt.
Enjoy!
Ribbon's POV
As I hurtled through space, fear went through my body. What if I never land?
I tried to push that thought away. But I couldn't push it out… I was too scared to stop the descent by using my wings… Mostly all my limbs were frozen…
Finally, I decided to see where I would land. With much strain and effort, I turned my body around, and saw a large star-shaped planet. So that's where I'll land. Better brace myself for impact.
A few minutes later…
I had entered the planet's atmosphere, and I suddenly started to fall torwards the ground. At least the Dark Matter didn't get the crystal… I though hazily to myself.
As I neared the ground, I hit something soft. Hitting the ground, stunned, I tried to get up promptly, but collapsed on the ground again. My stomach hit against something hard, and I grabbed it. It was a piece of the Crystal!
My attention was grabbed by a small, pink puffball. And it was holding a piece of the Crystal!
The two pieces suddenly hovered together, and combined, making a slightly bigger crystal. It seemed the puffball was happy, but…
"Do you see those shooting stars? They're actually crystals, and I have to get them back!" The puffball agreed, and we both set off on an epic journey…
Kirby's POV
At night time, I watched shooting stars fall from the sky plummet to the beautiful world of Popstar. No citizen had to live in fear about being hit by a comet, or meteor, because something would protect them.
But I felt a sharp pain on my head. Confused, I turned around to see a fairy fall on me.
The fairy was wearing a red coat, and red shoes. Her hair was bubble gum pink, with a beautiful red ribbon to top it all off. And her eyes were as blue as a sapphire.
Then I saw the source of the pain. A sharp crystal. I decided to pick it up, you know, to show it off to Waddle Dee…
But I saw the fairy look at me, holding a very similar piece of crystal. Suddenly, the crystal hovered from my hand. Surprised, I watched as it combined to make it bigger. I jumped for joy; surely this is a good thing.
But the fairy pointed past me, towards the shooting stars, and told me that we needed to get them all.
Silently, I nodded my head. I could use the adventure, I've been eating too much junk food.
End! Like this chapter? Don't care, just review.
Anyway, someone refresh my memory. The next mini-movie is Waddle Doo? right?