Author's note (Update)
So a brief notice for people reading this. I realize that I made a few errors in the story. I tried to go with it and move on but the more I look at it, the less I'm satisfied with it. So I will make some edits to everything following the first chapter to fix the flow. Once the edits are complete, this announcement will be deleted and the story will resume.
Sorry about this, and hopefully the edits will be to your liking.