A.N. Well I jus got my first flame today, and may I say thank you to PinkleHead for telling me what he/she thought was wrong with it. I must say that even though my work has a lot of things wrong with it, you could have been kinder when telling me how you felt. Also if it is so horrible that you couldn't stand it; might I suggest that you not continue reading it. I am sorry my story isn't up to your standards, but since some people enjoy it I'm going to disregard your reviews. Thank you for reading though and telling me how to improve my story.