The Stealing Phantom; By Fanfictionfun
Chapter One: The Legend
They referred to her as the stealing phantom, a ghost of the devil himself. She would wander recklessly and aimlessly doing random acts of wrong. The myth of the young spirit survived for generations and is still told now. Kids would stiffen at the mentioning of her name, and they'd shiver in the nightly wind wide-eyed and pale-skinned. Of course the adults said it was just a childish story. But it was much more than that.
She could appear in human form or in her natural dark spirit self. She stole souls and lives, and she manipulated minds. She could remove a benders power with the snap of her fingers and she could call upon her minions to do her dirty work. Her appearance as a human was beyond paranormal. She had eerie crystal blue eyes, though beautiful, dangerous. One stern glance from her eyes could slice through a person. Literally, if she wanted it too. She had pale skin and gave the world a serious yet sad lip. She never smiled. Her jet black hair took others by surprise, because of her crystal eyes. She was skinny but was average in height. But was most scary was her odd shaped mark right next to her right eye. It was positioned sideways coming back behind her cheek. It almost appeared to be an abstract L. Still, her spirit form was much scarier. She appeared as a sad young girl, with gray shadows following her everywhere. Her eyes were droopy but they glared an evil crimson red. Her mouth produced a scary shrilling piercing sound that could paralyze anyone close enough. She was deprived of her family, her home; the Earth Kingdom, and her hope. Her love was cut off, and she turned into the ugly thing that wreaks havoc and chaos before you today.
They say she is a stealing phantom, a ghost of the devil himself. But the truth is she is just a young girl, looking for something. This is the story of the stealing phantom, a 12 year old girl named Jana.
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Author's Notes:
- The thing about the shrieking paralyzing sound was not made up by me. I got that off The Legend of Zelda: The Wind Waker (re-deeds).
- Please forgive me for always deleting and starting my stories over. Honestly, it's only because I judge myself to hard and am always telling myself how the story is so horrible. I realize now that that's wrong, especially when others are trying to enjoy it. But don't worry I've figured this whole story out and it won't happen again.
Sincerely, Angelica aka Fanfictionfun