At tribebohemian, I totally agree with your review. Although I did write this fanfic a long time ago when I was a less experienced writer. It could be improved a lot and I will try to find the time to go through to change and add. I haven't got a lot of time at the moment but I go on maternity leave in a few wks and will have more time to improve the story. Thanks for the ideas.

Part 4

"So where's the food gonna be?" Rachel asked as she dugged her hands into her pockets to protect them against the cold of the wind..
"I guess the canteen...or the kitchen stores..." Jeni said. "Should we split up? Nick and James you go to the canteen, we'll take the kitchen..."
James and Nick nodded...Rachel shook her head. "I think we should stick together..." She protested..
"It'll be fine. Come on." Jeni dragged her off in the direction of the Kitchen as James and Nick headed to the canteen.
Jeni walked into the kitchen and sat on the sideboard..."James came to apologise to me last night and he kissed me..." Jeni gasped...
"O my god...Nick came to hug me last night when i was crying..." Rachel giggled..

James and Nick went along to the Cloud9 canteen, and found the place empty as they expected. The tables and chairs were all laid out neatly as if nothing had ever happened. It brought back old memories of when the entire cast would eat together during filming and they would have fun and food fights occasionally.

"Lets try the food cupboards" suggested James

Nick followed James round the back of the canteen to where they found a mini kitchen. The place stank of food and Nick went straight for the cupboards.

"So, do you think that girl Jeni fancies me?"

Nick popped his had round the open cupboard" Huh? What did you say?"

"That girl, Jeni, I didn't think so at first, she was a little annoying, but I quite like her now"

"I thought you did, I saw you looking at her" said Nick as he picked out a few tins of food

"Well what about that Rachel chick?"

Nick blushed, and continued to search through the cupboard.

Jacinta lay crying in her bed. She hadn't come out all morning and she was still upset bout the whole virus thing killing her entire family. Evelyn, then heard her sobbing and walked into her room.

"Jacinta darling. Are you alright"

The little girl didn't say a word, and Evelyn, sat on the edge of her bed, as Jacinta sat up, still crying. Evelyn saw that she was upset and knew she was still little and she properly didn't understand, and so she pulled her into a hug.

"Its gonna be alright…you remember filming for the tribe don't you? Well its gonna be like that now. We're your family now and we're take care of you"