AUGH! I'm trying to fix the mistakes in the chapters but it doesn't show on the screen! Well anyways I think I need to sort things out first my thoughts are all jumbled well I think I should hurry to the point in the story! Two major important parts are coming up! I'll give you a hint it has to do with parties and dares! . well then we'll just have to wait if you have any dares that you want to suggest just tell me! I'll be sure to put them in best as I can! Any other constructive criticism is welcome! (I already know about the spacing and the descriptiveness I tried to fix it but my computer or the site isn't working with me!) I'll try and update soon!