Despite the reviews I will continue this story, but there will be a few modifications: This is after Skypia and the Marine base. Robin has run off with some archeologist dude and has promised that she will return someday and Chopa is having a very long reunion with a few of his reindeer friends (It is my story isn't it). Therefore, they will not be in the story, but they were here when the kids were born and just recently left. Henceforth, Sarah is officially Tashagi… ur… Tashigi, (I'm kidding, I did remember her name) and Marine is Carmen (which I have checked). Some of the words (like Golden Mali and Chopa) might be wrong, because it is pronounced differently in Japan. Plus because I don't know Japanese (and lack of internet) I depend on subtitles and Japanese friends to translate for me. So it won't be perfect. I will also try to include more detail and to make the message clearer.

So here it goes…

"Look it's and island!" yelled Kaysopp from up in the mast.

"That's the fifth time you said that. Are you sure it is not just another rock?" asked Natsuki from the deck.

"Positive, I'm positive it's and island this time. I see grass, building, everything!"

Everyone gathered to see the nearing island.

"Kaysopp is not imagining things this time, it is and island!" exclaimed Sanju.

As they arrived on the island, everyone jumped out of the Golden Mali. There was surprisingly nobody on the shore to welcome them. Instead, a loud ambulance whizzed past them. As they walked on, they heard murmuring, and as they began to get closer to the city, the murmuring got louder and more animated. There were worried voices everywhere as they approached a very large crowd of people hovering around a huge courthouse with a broken window.

"What's going on?" Nami asked a townsman.

"At this very courthouse the town's top criminal, nicknamed Butch (for Butcher), escaped. He had kidnapped and murdered over forty children in the town. He had just been captured. Today was his trial to decide if he would receive life in jail or the death sentence. Many people wanted him to go through the death sentence, for what he did, and because they worried, knowing of his great intelligence, that if he was sent to jail he might breakout and pursue his murders as revenge. Millions of people waited outside to witness his fate. But before the judge could even announce the verdict he broke away from the cops and crashed through that very window. He had grabbed a gun from the police and shot an innocent civilian for standing in his way."

"So that explains the ambulance…"interrupted Zoro, bored.

"He must be lurking around the city waiting for the next ship to arrive so he can escape."

"Does that mean he might be planning to take our ship?"

"Maybe, I advise you to go now and hurry while you can."

"Ooh Daddy," Zora exclaimed, "Maybe we could catch him before he takes our ship and get an award!"

"Moooooooooney…" Nami mumbled drooling.

"Who cares about money, we must go catch him before we lose our only way of transportation!" exclaimed Carmen.

They ran to retrieve their ship. When they got there, just as they expected, standing there trying to pull up the anchor was Butch. Luffy, using his devil fruit powers shot himself, Zoro, and Sanji up onto the ship. They began to fight. The three, easily overpowered the criminal. He, attempting to escape, jumped off the ship and ran, two of the mates chasing after.

"You'll regret this!" he yelled angrily as he ran.

Suddenly, he grabbed Natsuki.

"Suki-chan!" screamed Kayu.

"What!" asked Nami trying to confirm what was happening.

They all chased after him as he disappeared around a narrow alleyway with Natsuki. But Luffy just stood idly. Panting, they turned to the corner to find no one.

"Nooooooooo! Natsuki…" Nami screamed and fell down crying. "Luffy, why didn't you catch him?" she cried.

"Huh?" Luffy asked trying to remember what just happened. "Could you repeat that? I was daydreaming about meat."

"What!" Nami screamed. "You were daydreaming about meat while our daughter was just kidnapped?"

"Natsuki…?" Luffy asked waking up for the first time. "Natsuki!" he yelled, suddenly enraged. "Where is he? I'll kill him!"

"Luffy… he's gone," said Sanji.

Nami sat there crying while everyone else tried to verify what had just happened.

Luffy, breathing hard screamed, "I'll get you Butch! I'll kill you!"

Ok. That's all. If I get some decent reviews I will continue.

Bye Bye