I really do dread writing this chapter since it's even longer than the last (NOT TO MENTION IM ON VACATION!) I actually wrote this chapter less than an hour after I typed the last. It's amazing what boredom can convince you to do. The only problem is: it's also amazing what blistered fingers can convince you not to do (typing the chapter). Anyway this chapter is sort of "narrated", not really narrated, but "narrated" (notice the punctuation). If I spell anything wrong or use to much internetical (thinking "Is that even a word) initials (by mistake)… u'll (just an example) get over it.
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Sanji, Carmen, and Kaya were heading east when their trail all of a sudden ended.
"What now?" asked Sanji.
"I don't know, this has to be wrong if he just recently came through. Then you would have seen a different and fresh trail," replied Carmen.
"So which way should we go?' asked Kaya, still hope in her tone, "We can't give up on Natsuki just because we came to a dead in!"
"You're right. If we don't continue, Natsuki, like this trail, will also be dead. How will Nami react to that?"
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(When you see cuts in the story like this the narrator comes in to tell you what is happening, you will see: "Narrator" in bold.
Narrator:
"It had beeb three dats since Natsuki's kidnap and noone cold find her. They knew she was in the, for the "Natsuki Radar" (I just love typing that giggle). But, unfortunately, Luffy had accidentally washed them (all) in his pants pocket when he was doing the weekly laundry (as I said before, this is my story, ok, I'm going to stop talking now, sorry). It was like an big "olden days" (again, I love to type that thinking "Oh yeah, I did say I was going to shutup didn't I?" Ok, im really am going to be quiet now) treasure map: no trails. Not to mention, the map had turned diagonal some how.
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"Ussop tld me about how to use maps with no trails. Let me see the radar," continued Kaya.
Sanji handed her the radar, "But it isn't a map."
"It's close enough," said Carmen, fustrated.
"We just passed that huge rock didn't we?"
"Yeah…?" (Sanji)
"So that means, I think…we have to go NORTH!"
"Are you sure?" asked Carmen.
"Possitive,"
So, they walked to the giant rock and, from there, continued north.
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Narrator:
Now both, Sanji's and Zoro's groups were on the right track (north), but Tashigi and Luffy were going the opposite direction!
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(Nami and kids)
"Aunt Nami…" whined Sanju, "Why won't you talk?"
Nami just sat there, silently.
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Narrator:
Zoro and Ussop continued to follow the tracks in the dirt.
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"Can we rest, Zoro," Ussop begged.
"No, we have to find Natsuki,"
"But it's getting dark," Ussop continued, "We won't beable to find her in the dark."
Zoro sighed, "Fine."
They stopped and made a shelter out of a big tree, elephant leaves, and little twigs (basically a natural habitat). Soon after they had finished, it began to rain.
"Shit," said Zoro.
"What is it?"
"The tracks are gone."
"How do you know?"
"Ussop, you idiot! It's raining!"
"Oh well…let's be happy we're not wet," Ussop tried uselessly (to cheer him up).
"Now how are we going to find Nat-
Zoro's words were interrupted by a loud and very close roar. Ussop shivering said, "Please tell me that was you, Zoro."
"Nope…" Zoro looked out the opening of their natural tent to see a large bear only a yard awat from the back o f their tent, and approaching!
"Oh…shit…" Zoro said to himself (quietly), "Come on, Ussop! We need to go! We're on the bear's territory!"
Ussop still shivering in the corner remarked, "Can't you just kill it?"
"I'm not killing a bear for no reason…especially when we are the ones at fault!"
"Why not?"
"No!" Zoro exclaimed, shocking the bear (and catching her attention) as he yanked Ussop by the overall strap and pulled hm out of the tent. He looked back to retrieve his swords (which he was earlier sitting by). They must of fallen out of the opening when he looked out to see the bear. And now a cub (baby bear) was dragging them away!
"Crap…" Zoro whispered as he dropped Ussop and ran toward the cub.
"Hey, wait!" Ussop yelled, "Don't leave me!"
Zoro was running (to get his swords) when the mother bear jumped in his path in attempt to protect her baby. Zoro, not trying to hurt the animal, ran a different way just to find the mom righ back in front of him.
"Damn," he mumbled. Then he yelled, "Ussop, come occupy the bear so I can get my swords!"
"What?(!) Are you crazy!"
"Just do it!"
"No!"
Suddenly Zoro began running towards Ussop.
"What are u doing!" cried Ussop.
"Get in the feeble (cub, baby) position. She won't hurt you than!"
"Ussop, not knowing what else to do, did as he said. The bear noticing him, stopped, and walked toward him. It began sniffing him and then it picked him up.
"Zoro…!" whispered Ussop (in panic).
"Just keep her occupied. This would be a really good time to have Chopa…"
That statement gave Ussop and idea.
Zoro began running after the cub. The mother noticed and began running with Ussop still in her mouth. Ussop began to cry. "I'm gonna die… I didn't even get to see my own kids graduate," he whispered to himself still sobbing.
Zoro was running for his life when he tripped over something. It was his swords.
The bear finally reached him and dropped Ussop. Zoro, though he didn't want to, was ready to kill. He got out his swords and got into battle position. The bear did the same (but without the swords, but that would be a hilarious sight!)
"Wait Zoro!" Ussop exclaimed.
"What? Now you disagree with killing the bear? And why are you crying, you wimp!"
"Never mind that… Ussop said embarrased. "No, I just remembered what Chopa would say to an attacking animal so it would go away."
"Then hurry up!"
"Ok…ok. Just let me clear my voice…em Urm..EM!a
"Ussop…!"
"Ok, ok. Here it goes: Nay Nay power yay!"
The bear became even more infuriated.
"Wait no… That's what Chopa said during Pirate Karaoke when he was singing 'We got the power!'"
"Ussop!" Zoro was becoming inpatient and so was the bear.
"Ok. Um…I mean…: Nay Cay Nay peace Yay?" he said hopefully.
The bear calm down a bit and got down (back on all fours), grunted, and began walking away. He let out a small snort and a gesture to the bushes. A plump furball came rolling out of the bushes and down the hill to his mother.
"Finally," Zoro said taking a deep breath.
"Zoro…"
"What now?"
"Look up…"
Zoro did so to find a rundown hut right in front of him. "Do you think the cub knew were we were trying to get here?" he asked Ussop.
"I don't know."
"What took you?" a smug voice came from a large rock.
Zoro looked to the rock to find Sanji, Carmen, and Kaya.
"Damn Sanji…" Zoro said under his breath
" You couldn't get here faster than me and a couple of girls" he continued.
"What is that suppose to mean!" Kaya and Carmen said (at the same time). "We're the ones who got you here!"
Zoro smirked and let out a snicker
"Anyway, maybe we should call Luffy and Tashigi now," said Kaya.
"Good idea," agreed Carmen.
"He's not here yet?" Ussop said surprised.
"Nope," said Sanji.
Luffy, we're at the entrance again," Tashigi said sadly.
"What? That means we have to start over again?"
"Unfortunately, I believe so. Well, at least we know it's not west.
"Aw ma-
"What is it?"
"I hear a beeping sound."
"The pager!" Tashigi remembered. "All that rime and we forgot to use it!"
Tashigi got it out of her pocket. "It says: 'Go North'"
"Yeah…now I remember…the way I was looking was north!" Luffy spoke up.
"Luffy…you mean…was I wrong?"
"No, my head was twisted," he replied as if nothing was wrong.
Thudd dust flew up as Tashigi fell to the ground.
She got up and put on her now bent glasses. "We still won't get there until nightfall now," she said discouraged. "By that time…"
"No…we will!" replied Luffy firmly. He quickly picked up Tashigi and grabbed onto two trees. He began stretching his arms.
"Luffy, please tell me you're not-
"Gum Gum Rocket!" Luffy exclaimed as the shot through the air (north).
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They landed with a big thud into the trees.
"That wa fast, but way too noisey!" scolded Zoro.
"Zoro!" said Tashigi as she fell from the tree (and again, dust flew up). "Yo makd it," she continued, adjusting her glasses for the second time.
Suddenly, Butch busted out of the door with a gun. "Who's there?" he yelled. Silents… He stood there for a while, grumbledl, "Damn animals," and went back inside.
"Well, now we know where at the right place," whispered Zoro struggling to hold back Luffy from attacking the hut.
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Yat! I'm done! That was long! Now I'm so tired, but unfortunately, I have already wrote the next chapter, so that means more typing. But I have a few things to say before I write the next (chapter).
First of all, I hope everyone was in character. I know Zoro wasn't exactly himself, he never cusses that much. He might of seemed a little soft (bout the bear and all). It's because now he is a parent himself so he can understand more and is a little softer (if he wasn't everytime he got annoyed with Zora he might attempt to slice her head off). He could of easily killed the bear, I know.
The feeble position and all. I know, I copied it from the movie "Without A Paddle". It was a funny part and would be good since they got attacked by a bear (basically: GET OVER IT!)
The Ussop talking animal, I know was so unbelievable, but it was hilarious, you must agree (and I don't care if you don't). I'm not sure of Bear Habits so if the bear wouldn't do some of the things (for you nature nerds, no offense) I don't know. And it doesn't matter it's an anime bear. Everything in anime is not exactly logical. That's what makes it so great.
I hope I didn't put any grammatical (or as my friend says:grammical) errors. I'm half asleep so your going to have to get over. You won't die over some mispelled words.
I also noticed that I had forgot about half of the stuff I wrote, like the "Natsuki Radar" (which I love to say) so the story is probably missing some detail, but oh well.
Did I miss anything else? If there is just say in your review and I'll explain it in the chapter after the next.
I also want to shout out two stories my friends made, but I think I forgot the names of them. Um…Oh Yeah! One is called, "Adventure on Ice Island". REMEMBER THAT! It is by the person Animelover333 (I think). And also another one by lilanimefreak19. I forgot what it is called, but you can check it out yourselves. Oh and the one by animefreak has grammatical errors, but you can get over it. Well, I think that's all so, BA BYE
Oh, I just wanted to do this experiment to see if more people would review. Take no offense. And everything I type here is true.
I don't think Zoro is cute AT ALL. He is only the coolest dude out there. But he is so NOT CUTE! My nickname for him is MOLDY (which really annoys my friend "The Zoro Obsessor") But anyways, have a nice day
