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The crowd was huge. Loud chatter and cheers surrounded the tower where Butch was to be executed. Butch was on his knees. Hands tied behind his back, staring into the crowd.
"Will they kill him already?" whined Zora.
"Patience. First, the major has to give his speech. Than Butch has to say his last words—
"And then they kill him!" said Sanju enthusiastically.
"Shuddup, Moron. No one was talkin' to you! Zora said with a tone of triumph in her voice. Nami rolled her eyes. "There they go again…."
"You know you really shouldn't wrinkle your face like that. Your ugly enough as it is."
Zora frowned at him. "Bite Me!"
"I'd rather hang myself."
"You just wait." Zora's frown then turned to a hurt expression. She pulled on Nami's skirt. "Sanji said I was ugly…and fat!" She began to cry crocodile (fake) tears.
"Sanju!"
"Huh? What? She's so faking it."
"Did you call her ugly?"
"Yeah, but only 'cause she is!" murmured Sanju.
Zora continued to cry more crocodile tears even louder than before. People began to stare." Sanju, say your sorry, NOW," said Nami, turning red from all the attention, "And then tell Zora that she is very pretty."
"Oh, I'm so sorry Zora," said Sanju with a heavy note of sarcasm in his voice that Nami incredibly missed. "I think you're very pretty." He blinked his eyes innocently and flashed a cruel smile. And more quietly he said, "Pretty damn ugly, that is."
Zora punched him as hard as she could ("Ow!" he yelped.). Sanju went to kick her hard in the stomach, but at that time Tashigi turned to look at them curiously (remember, Tashigi is a bimbo, everything obvious is pretty oblivious to her). Never hit a girl in front of her mother (except that).
Everyone became quiet as the mayor "Ahem Ahemed!" (Whatever that sound is). He began to speak: "I am now happy to say that we have finally caught the vicious criminal, Butch. Who has been kidnapping our children for the past decade!" Cheers came from the crowd, but they were quickly hushed. "And today is the day he will, finally, be put to justice. Executed in front of the entire congregation." More Cheers. "And its all because of one noble pirate crew: The Straw Hats. Captained by Monkey D. Luffy, who was just recently reunited with his daughter who was also kidnapped by this awful man…" More cheers. "And to thank them we will have the most magnificent fair and party tonight!" The town cheered louder than ever. And there was a huge proud smile on Luffy's face. " Now without further ado, the criminal's last words."
Everyone looked at Butch, who had been staring into the crowd, ignored, the whole time. Then he smiled, an angry smile, revealing his disgusting yellowish brown teeth and said, "I knew I should have fucked her cute ass when I had the chance!"
The crowd gasped. Nami lunged forward but was caught by Luffy and Sanji. And in the silence she screamed, "KILL HIM!" and at that moment the guards plunged the spears into Butch's back. Blood spurted out and begun to make a puddle around the dead criminal. No one breathed, but Nami (still hard), taking in all that just happened.
"Mom, it's ok now, he's dead." Natsuki said quietly to her agitated mother. Kayu had tears coming down her face. Kaysopp and Sanju had a look of amazement on their faces. And Zora had this pleased devilish grin (that's kind of scary isn't it?). The crowd's silence broke out into cheers.
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People were dancing and falling over each other everywhere. Luffy, Ussop, and Zoro were singing "A Pirate's Life for Me' drunkenly. Carmen was chasing Sanji around for supposedly "eyeing" another woman. And the kids were watching their parents with pure delight.
Everything went black.
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(Blink Blink) "Whoa, what a party!" Chimed Luffy sleepily as his sleeping crew came into view. After about 10 minutes everyone began stirring.
"What happened?" asked Sanju bewildered.
"You 'tested' the drinks last night and started puking all over the place! That's what happened!" remarked Kaysopp.
"Wow, I missed all that?" asked Kayu (she had fallen asleep a little early).
"Not so loud." Whined Sanju irritably (nice hang over, huh?)
"Good Morning!' yelled Zora in spite of Sanju. "Hey, Aunt Carmen! Sanju was drinking!"
"What? Sanji!"
"What? When did he become my responsibility!"
"So noisy…" muttered Zoro, his eyes still closed.
"Oh, sorry Daddy." Sang-songed Zora still loud, and went to hug him. "It's Sanju again. He's so troublesome." She said with a fake sigh, her big green eyes gleaming.
Nami walked in, now fully dressed. "Come on! Get dressed, we're leaving today!" she announced.
They dressed quietly and slowly. They packed their stuff in the ship and restocked their supplies from the town's main storage supply. By 10 (am) they were ready to go. They said Good-bye to the part of the town that was awake even after the party (very very little) and boarded the ship. And finally set sail.
They were at last leaving. The nightmare was over. Butch was dead. They stared back at the little island as they went forward to sea. That was their first adventure…their first of many.
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YES! It's finally over! I'm so happy! Didn't expect Butch to say that did you? I thought about putting something else (like , "Damn, U, u Straw-hat bastards!), but I just said to myself, (WWBS" What Would Butch say? The very revolting Butch). So, yeah... basically. Oh, that pleased smile from Zora was not a "Death, cool!" smile but more-so "Thank-God that Bastard's dead!" smile. U know. And anyway, did I miss anything else I needed to explain. Yes, Sanju got drunk and Carmen was yelling at Sanji (I thought you might have missed read that because their names are so close). Well, I think that's all. I was thinking about making a chapter about them just sitting in the middle of the ocean (to give you a break from major events). But I don't' feel like doing all that so I'm just going to go straight to the next one. Sorry. I'm not in a laid-back mood enough to write all these "lost-cause" chapters where're all they do is talk and mess around. I still gotz tons of homework. So, yeah, but after the next scene/adventure (whatever) I will, I promise (remind me- which means you have to review!)
I was thinking about writing another story in addition to this one . I thought of how much work this story is. And then I thought, "No."
Next Adventure Hint: Monkey and Panthers and Tress…Oh My! (is it not obvious)
