FINAL UPDATE


It's been a while, so I'll make this short.

The hope of transferring the story has fallen through. Originally it was hoped to have the story moved over and cleaned up, but after all this time, very little progress has even attempted to be made. Even the motivation to come back and fix it up has failed me because I don't have the same drive for this as I did before when I started this in 2016. One would think that the third JW movie would have sparked something, but in truth, I haven't seen it at all. Sure with what it did, I could build something into this story with it, but how can you create when your mind doesn't give you the resource it needs to make something?

For the most part, whenever I think back to this story, I imagine I should have just stopped it at the first 4-5 chapters. This has made me consistently cringe at how the story seemingly evolved into a campy transformation story that was rushed at the end, with the storyline going further than the idea should have. My writing style is crap, the grammar and structure are equally crap. While some events I would see were pretty good, it's like trying to find diamonds in a big pile of triceratops crap compared to the overall story.

Hopefully, I plan to get some of my old drive back into writing. But my focus has turned entirely to GB despite the MANY story ideas I still have for years now. I've dedicated more time to building its story so that ones like this feel like side pieces from long ago that I try to avoid repeating.

In this sense, as the transfer failed and I plan to purge my stories again, this story will be deleted on January 10th, 2023. If anyone wishes to save it to keep it on FFN, by all means, give it a copy and paste and post. Perhaps someone would be inspired to remodel it or build a new similar story. But for now, come January, this story will be removed entirely.