This is Rah-Safer, Animal Crossing, Robot Desert in Space style!
Disclamer, I own only the Main character, none of the other characters.
Star Punch, the Cyborg girl, had a regualr human family, She lost one arm and one half of her body in a car accident, she was rushed to the hospitle where they had to give her a new robot half. She continued on with half a real body. She looked stupid in all that metel. Luckly, The doctor hade some Cyborg hiding skin, so know one knew she was a Cyborg. Star Punch moved out one day and Moved to a town called Rah-Safer. Little did she know, it wasn't a city on earth, it was a planet in outer space! She went on a train that blasted into the Clouds! She Was now outside of earth.
Star Punch, with great amazement, said, "What the,Where am I going?" Just then a robot kitty came up to her and said, " Wow, A Cyborg, I have not seen Any of these ever!" Star Punch was now Beddazzled, " Who are you and how did you know I was a cyborg?" The Robot Cat said, " I am called Rover the Rocket." Then Star Punch asked him, " Why are you called Rover the Rocket?" Then Rover the Rocket Blasted through the train roof and then came down and Exploded! Star Punch was like, "What THE!" Then as soon as the Dust cleared, Rover showed up and said, "WOW, THAT WAS SO REAL LOOKING, YOU ACTUALLY THOUGHT I ACTUALLY EXPLODED, IT ALWAYS WORKS!" Star Punch Could not believe her eyes, "HOW DID YOU DO THAT?" Rover answered, "With magic!" Star Punch Then said, "Come on, That makes no sense! How did you really do that?" Then Rover the Rocket said, "Well, I have these Fake bombs, I drop one and the I drop down before the dust clears!" Star Punch was Mystified, but she decided to tell about herself, "I am Star Punch, My destination is Rah-Safer!" Rover the Rocket yelled, "Wow, that Planet ROCKS! I can't believe you are going there, Why are you going there?" Star punch answered, "I am moving, I think!" Rover the Rocket Said, "Moveing ROCKS, the sound of boxes hitting the floor, the huff you take when you finnaly arive, the new house smell... wait, I am a robot, I can't smell, so anyway, where are you staying?" Star Punch had not figured that out yet, "Doh, I forgot to Pick the House From the Catalog!" Then Rover yelled, "WHAT!" Then he Did his rocket routene, When the dust cleared, he yelled, "WOW, THAT IS BETTER THE SECOND TIME! So anyway, why the heck would someone move without planning the stay, I must get you a house quick!" Then he thought for a while and yelled with Briliance, "Wait, I have a friend on Rah-Safer that sells stuff, let me give him a jingle. Be right back!" Star Punch Talked to herself for a while, "What does this all mean? Why am I going to a different planet that I think I see, it is one big ball!" She looked and stated what she saw, "I see, pyramids, four colored dots in a square and other colored dots in other places, and one big white dot and one big green dot and one smaller brown dot an a big grey splotch with some blue and more sand color." Then Rover the Rocket came back saying, "Good news, My friend has 4 houses for sale, Cheap as dirt, of course he hasn't been able to furnish the houses, so he is willing to take a lost, You have money, RIGHT!" Star Punch didn't think about that either, "Doh, I didn't Think about that either!" Rover the Rocket did the routene again and...
The rest has been Abriged! (he talks and goes wow, we will continue to the advice part)
"Well do not worry, These have a thing of working out, so do not worry! Well, the train stops here, This is Rah-Safer, the Robot Desert Planet! Perhapes we will meet again, Goodbye Star Punch!"
Star Punch got of the train and looked around, She saw a Beautiful desert on the Train Station, She saw everyone Walking around, going into the Pyramids and puting up tents. Just as she walked down the Last step, something came wout of nowhere and Shouted, "HEY! YOU! CYBORG GIRL!" A Raccoon Robot walked up to her and said, "I am Tom Hook, I run the store, Rover the Rocket told me all about you!" Star Punch asked, "Why are you called Tom Hook?" Tom Hook held his hand up, at the end was... a HOOK! Star Punch just said, "eew." Tom Hook said, "I can not believe you had nothing planed for moveing, never the less, the houses are right this way!" Star Punch followed the Raccoon Robot to the four colored dots she saw on the train. Tom Hook told her, "Okay, you may look in the houses." So She looked at the houses, first, she entered the Red house. She saw a nice stone tyle with brick walling. She also saw a radio and a journal on a box. She thought a firplace would be the best typ of furniture for this style. Then she looked in the yellow one, It had an old flooring with even older walling. Light shined through the windows. It had the same furniture.She thought that flowers on a dirt pyle would perk this house up. Then she looked in the green one, It had some charcoal flooring, It also had the same furniture, but that was the best part, it was dark in there, the wall was dusty, cockroaches came out of the walls. She odded that one out. Finally, she went into the Orange house, It had a metal flooring, some sturdy looking wall, the same furniture, she thought that this house was the best out of the 4. She Yelled, "I PICK THIS ONE, THIS ONE, THIS ONE!" Tom Hook told her, "Splendid, First off, this house is empty, you will have to earn money to furnish it. Also, that Gyroid can sell stuff, It also is able to talk to you and set a message to travlers. It could make your door look like one of your parterns you create at Sablesaw and Mablesaw's talor, Do not worry, They do not have robotic buzzsaws, they have regular robotic hands, everyone here is a robot. Finally, The house costs 19,800 bells." Star Punch thought she heard wrong and said, "I am sorry, what?" Tom Hook repeated, "19,800 bells!" Star Punch Yelled, "YEAH RIGHT LIKE I HAVE THAT MUCH MONEY!" Tom Hook told her, So ya can't pay for it, then you must have thrown all your money out the window. Oh Well, You might as well work at my store. And Watch out for the Spanish Devels." Star Punch asked, "Might I ask who the spanish Devels are?" Tom Nook said, "There names are Octavio495 And Low Blow! There are some nice characters that I will tell you about now, Ace Eights, Bo Bob Gon,Emerald Bot and Sprocket!" (he doesn't need his name changed, he is already a robot) So anyway, Come over to my store tomorow, Sleep for The day." Then he walked away. Star Punch Went for a walk utill she came to a house, the sign said, Emerald bot. She knocked on the door, out came a beautiful frog like robot made of Emeralds. The Emeraldbot said, "HEY HAH HEY HAH, I am the emerald Frog, hello, and you are?" Star Punch just said, "You are one wierd frog, So, uh, My name Is Star Punch." Emerald Bot yelled, "WHOA, A CYBORG, I HAVE NEVER SEEN ONE OF THESE. So where do you live?"
Star Punch told him about her house and then the little emerald bot said, "Sorry to hear that, well good luck paying your house of. GOODBYE!" Star Punch skiped off to Her house and went in to sleep. She thought to Herself, I sure hope Tom Hook is easy on me!
End of chapter one
I would Like some feedback for my first Xhapter, I thought I would go the way alot of people are going. I would like some feedback!
