I know I'm pathetic for saying this, but no-one has reviewed this story, Please review it, then I'll know if I need any help… Any-who on with the story…
"Cool" Vitani gasped
"I wonder if there's anything still alive" Kovu gazed into the distance trying to picture what the creature would look like.
"I don't like it…" Thali trembled with fear. Kovu looked at her in an odd way. She noticed he could sense her fear,
"I mean our parents will angry with us, and-"
"Are trying to say you want your mommy?" Kovu interrupted.
"No!" Thali shouted
"Are you scared and want Tani to hold your paw?" Kovu teased
"NO!" Thali shouted even louder
"Will you shut up? You're gonna get us hurt by something!" Vitani whispered sharply
"Yeah Thali" Kovu sneered
"You too! Termite!" Vitani kicked his front paw
"OW!" Kovu yelped
"SHH!" Thali and Vitani hushed him. They walked forward to a clearing, bones were every where. Thali whimpered.
"You scared?" Kovu mocked, they heard a rock move
"What was that!" Kovu trembled
"Who's there!" asked a gruff voice
"RUN!" Kovu shouted. The three cubs dashed away.
"Hey get back here!" the voice called after them. The cubs were out of the graveyard and hiding behind a termite mound. They sighed with relive.
"I think we lost him" Kovu whispered
"Yeah" Thali sighed. Suddenly a black lion was in front of them, he had fifteen scars at least.
"I always did love cubs" he sneered evilly, Kovu and Vitani stood in front of Thali protecting her.
"Who are you?" Vitani asked
"ME? You've never seen nor heard of ME!" the cubs shook their heads
"I am The Black Paw!" Black Paw said. Thali gasped.
'He killed my Daddy? I must find Mom before it's too late!' Thali dashed away
"Where are you going, cub!" Black Paw growled
"None of your bee's wax!" Vitani leapt on him
"Get off!" Black Paw shouted
"Kovu run!" she shouted. Kovu hesitated to leave her
"Just go I'll be ok!" she pulled The Black Paw's ear. Kovu ran.
What's gonna happen next? Well you'll have to wait and see.
Thali: Is it safe here?
"Yeah. I'm the story writer why would I put myself at risk?"
Thali: Oh good I've been running a long time.
(She hides behind me)
See ya soon!
