First "big" fight scene! I use that term loosely. Please review and tell me what you think or how to improve.
FREAKY AMAZON CHICK
"I'm going to kill that bear!" Iikiba yelled as he limped along through the forest. He looked a complete mess after his near death experience and he had lost his backpack in the fall so he was now completely without supplies. But he was going to kill that panda if it was the last thing he ever did!
Iikiba had managed to climb back up the cliff and was now wondering around in a huff. He was sure this was where he had seen the panda before. Of course, being him, that wasn't much to go on.
But just then Iikiba heard a sound to his left. He looked and saw the incriminating panda a few yards away beyond some bushes and it didn't look like it had noticed him. What luck!
Iikiba ducked down into the bushes and crawled over so he could get a better look. The panda was standing in a small clearing looking suspiciously at a pile of bamboo shoots that was sitting on the ground.
Iikiba's stomach growled loudly, he had forgotten how hungry he was. The panda looked up, alerted by the sound, and stared straight at him. Time to throw caution to the wind!
"Hey you stupid panda! Those are mine!" Iikiba jumped out and landed next the bamboo shoots. But the second he did a net sprang up out of the leaves scattered on the ground and caught him.
"Hey! What!" Iikiba struggled franticly but the net was hanging several feet off the ground so all he managed to do was make it swing around in circles. It was a trap!
The panda grunted as if laughing at him, and then walked off.
"You damn panda!" Iikiba yelled and pulled at the net, trying to free himself.
It was then that he heard someone else yelling. A girl emerged from the bushes and walked towards him, yelling angrily in Chinese. She had a strange appearance, green hair came just below her shoulders and she was wearing an elaborate red and gold outfit.
"Uh…" Was all Iikiba could think to say.
The girl pulled out a sword and pointed it threateningly in front of his face.
"Ah! Wait!" Iikiba yelled and struggled with the net more.
"Stop! You have already ruined it enough!" The girl yelled.
"O…okay." Iikiba was completely confused now.
"Who are you and what are you doing here?" She asked sternly.
"I could ask you the same thing!" Iikiba yelled.
She glared and pointed the sword closer to his face.
"I-I'm Iikiba Hibiki! I'm just passing through!" Iikiba stuttered.
"Do you realize what the penalty is for trespassing on Amazon hunting grounds?" She asked.
"Wait…You're an Amazon?"
"Yes."
"I'M IN CHINA!" Iikiba yelled, startling the girl. "How the heck did I get to China? I don't remember crossing the ocean!" He thrashed about again trying to break free.
The girl stared at him, clearly thinking he was crazy. "Stop moving around! Do you know how long it took me to make that net?" She finally yelled.
"Hey, if you're Chinese then how come you can speak Japanese?"
"I have studied it! Now stop asking annoying questions!" She pointed the sword back at his face. "You are trespassing in sacred Amazon hunting grounds."
"I didn't know!"
"And you are ruining my net!"
"You're the one who trapped me it!" Iikiba yelled wiggling around more.
"Plus you scared away my quarry!"
"You don't want that panda anyway. I think it had rabies."
The girl narrowed her eyes. "The penalty is death." She pulled out a second sword and twirled them around with apparently great still.
"Wait! …you."
"My name is Mascara." She said grudgingly.
Iikiba raised an eyebrow. "Mascara?"
She swung her swords.
"AH! Hold on!" Iikiba yelled.
He hit the ground and realized she had cut him free. "Wow, thank-" He had to jump back just then to avoid Mascara's attack.
"I thought it would only be fair to free you." Mascara held up her swords in a fighting stance.
"Hold on Mascara! It's not in me to fight a girl!" Iikiba yelled.
"Then this will be short!" She jumped into the air and threw out a bunch of knives.
Iikiba jumped around to dodge them but one scraped his arm and then another passed near his cheek, leaving a small cut.
Mascara landed in front of him and swung her swords around, but Iikiba flipped over her head and made a mad dash into the trees. "Can't we talk this out?" He yelled back at her as she followed. She threw out more knives which hit the trees he passed.
When Iikiba looked back again he didn't see Mascara. He came to halt, "Where did she-?" That was when he saw her coming down at him from the tree above.
Iikiba grabbed a branch off the ground and held it up to defend himself. Mascara's sword hit the branch and they both pushed towards each other trying to make the other fall back.
When Mascara tried to pull back for another attack, she realized her sword was stuck in the branch. Iikiba realized it too so he pulled the branch back, Mascara's sword with it, and threw it away.
Mascara swung her other sword around but Iikiba grabbed her wrist, causing her to drop the sword. So she tried to punch him with her other hand but Iikiba caught that hand too.
"Ha! Now there's nothing you can do!" Iikiba yelled triumphantly.
Mascara kicked up her knee.
Iikiba fell to the ground completely immobilized and in blinding pain. That was low.
"It is over now." Mascara started to walk towards the sword she had dropped. In a desperate attempt Iikiba lunged forward and grabbed her around the legs, causing her to fall to the ground too. He just had to hold onto her long enough to regain his composure.
"Let go!" Mascara screamed and punched him in the face.
"Give me a break!"
Mascara kept hitting him and struggling with her legs, trying to get free. "I said let go!" She managed to get one leg free and kicked him in the face.
Iikiba growled. "Fine!" He stood up still holding onto Mascara's leg and started to spin around.
"AH! Stop!" She screamed and tried to kick him again as she was spun round.
Iikiba let go of her leg and she was thrown away. She probably would have flown off if she hadn't grabbed hold of a tree limb to stop herself. She stood up on the limb, clearly dizzy. "I thought you did not fight girls!"
"I decided to make an exception!" Iikiba yelled. He turned and went for Mascara's discarded sword.
"No you do not!" Mascara threw out more knives which Iikiba dodged, but he had to overstep the sword to do it. Mascara jumped out of the tree and started running towards him.
Iikiba grabbed four knives off the ground and threw them back at Mascara.
"Aaahh!" Mascara held up her arms in an attempt to block herself, but the knives only caught her clothes and pinned her to the tree behind her.
When she realized what had happened she tried to pull away from the tree but found she couldn't move.
"Ha! Got ya!" Iikiba gloated from a safe distance; there was still the chance she would get free. "So long!" He turned tail and started to run off.
"Wait! Come back!" Mascara called after him.
"I'm not stupid!" Iikiba yelled back, not stopping. He wasn't going to wait for her to get free.
"But Iikiba! You- !" But by then he was well out of earshot. "You defeated me."
DUH-DA-DUH!
